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May 22, 2022 at 6:40 pm #111024
Hesh
A young manâ a boy reallyâ tumbled into the passage through a window. Like Hesh, the boy wore an eye patch.
Kent growled, Featherâs eyes widened, and Rinzler confronted the character.âWho are you?â Rinzler demanded.
The boy looked wary and weary, ready collapse from lack of water. Hesh handed him his waterskin. âHere, drink this.â
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorMay 22, 2022 at 6:44 pm #111025Ooooh! Your characters sound super cool! Okay! I’ll try, but bare with me cuz I have no idea what I’m doing! I have next to zero role-playing experience!
Also, I apologized before-hand for my character’s attitude. He’s kind of rude sometimes…
Everett
He stumbled back, both because he lost his footing dropping to the ground, and because he hadn’t anticipated the people were so close.
Everett clenched his jaw as he scanned the two figures in the torch-lit hall. The young man who had spoken had to have been his age and he held two disks like he might use them if Everett got closer.
“I could ask you the same question,” he muttered, still scanning them warily. “If only I cared.”
He backed away and turned around.
Proverbs 16:2
May 22, 2022 at 8:29 pm #111028Quick question! Could you give me a brief description of your characters appearances?? I’d love to know more about them. You probably said something some time back but I’m not sure if I can find it…
Also, is Feather a girl or boy? I wasn’t sure so I didn’t really talk too much about them. đ
Proverbs 16:2
May 23, 2022 at 1:14 pm #111030@hallie-jean Feather is a girl; she is sort of tall with blond hair and gray-blue eyes. She wears armor–if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars movies, something like clone/stormtrooper armor but splattered with paint. She wields a rifle.
Rinzler’s a boy. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes. His clothes are black and have light-up orange lines on them (I have a picture of a similar character somewhere up there). And you already know he has two discs he uses as weapons.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 23, 2022 at 1:27 pm #111031@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”
“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.
“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s Feather. What’s yours?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 23, 2022 at 2:10 pm #111032Thanks! Ooooh! So they are like from some kind of sci-fi world it sounds like???
Yes! I love Star Wars! Feather sounds awesome! I’m so interested in your characters and their story now!!!
Everett
He scowled at the girl blocking his path. Why was she so persistent? If Everett had to guess, her and her comrades were trying to get something from him.
Also, what kind of name was Feather?
They didn’t seem like thieves–Everett was very familiar with criminals–but these people didn’t even look like they were from here.
So what did they want with him?
Nonetheless, he was surrounded in the hall, so he knew he had to play relaxed. Or else he may not be able to get out unharmed.
He leaned against the wall next to him, crossing his arms over his chest, and gave his most charming smirk. “Well you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” He directed the question to the girl, who just happened to be an inch or so taller than him.
It made him dislike her more.
Regardless, he kept up his smile. “Alright, I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name… if you can tell me where I am.” He winked.
Proverbs 16:2
May 23, 2022 at 9:17 pm #111036@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @emily-sf hey yâall, I apologize for not RP-ing. Iâm on Vacay and havenât been in the mood to heh. I know thatâs a bad excuse (the not feeling like it đ) hope yâall can forgive me and wait a bit longer?? If not let me know
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#ProtectSebMay 24, 2022 at 11:43 am #111045@hallie-jean Funny story….Rinzler and Feather were both created for fanfictions. Rinzler came from a fanfic written for a series called Tron; he happens to be the son of the titular character. And Feather is actually supposed to be from the Star Wars universe. She and her four sisters were trained in the Republic’s army (three of them, including her, ended up marrying clones).
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 24, 2022 at 12:03 pm #111050Oh! So you write fanfics???? Cool! I’ve never really dabbled in it myself but enjoy reading them! The one about Feather and her sisters sounds really interesting! I thought you had mentioned Rinzler was from Voltron at first instead of Tron and I was like, I’ve never heard of him XD
Proverbs 16:2
May 24, 2022 at 12:11 pm #111051@hallie-jean Yep, the Tron series is a little-known story, but I love it (actually listening to the soundtrack right now). Rinzler as I have him doesn’t actually appear or exist–as far as I can tell, anyway–in the original movies, but the name “Rinzler” was once another alias for his father, Tron. So my brother (who works on the stories with me) and I thought, “Why don’t we name our character that, since it’s a name that holds significance to him?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 24, 2022 at 12:20 pm #111052@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.
Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.
“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.
Feather looked around. “I’m….not quite sure, but we have some places like it in our worlds.” She nodded at Rinzler. “He’s from a different world than me, but there are several places in our universe where multiple worlds converge. I’m guessing this is one of them. I don’t know too much about Kent and Hesh….the two over there…but I can speak for Rinzler and myself.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 24, 2022 at 1:58 pm #111054Oh, that’s such a smart idea! đ I’ve heard of Tron before but have yet to actually watch it!
Everett
Their worlds? Different worlds? Several worlds? Different universe? Worlds converging?Â
Everett tried to keep up his smirk, but with every word this girl–Feather–said, he felt the corners of his mouth drooping more and more. He was forming a headache from so much new information… and probably still his dehydration.
If he was in a different world… first, how did that happen? One moment, he was falling into the sea. The next, he was in a whole different universe!
And second, how would he get back to his crew? He had no idea how long he had been gone. Were they worried about him?
The last thing he recalled was Daren’s shocked expression as she watched him tumble into the waves. Was she okay?
Everett swallowed back all his questions, focusing on what he already knew. He glanced at the guy behind him. Feather had said this fellow’s name was Rinzler. From the glare he was giving Everett, Everett took note that he seemed rather protective of Feather and saw Everett as a threat.
Good. That was better than being looked at as a target for a thief.
He came to the conclusion that in order to get back to his world, Everett would have to learn more about this one first.
Perhaps that started with getting to know these strange people.
“Alright, then,” he said to both of them. “Where I come from, they like to call me… the Dark Player.”
But that didn’t mean he had to trust them.
Proverbs 16:2
May 24, 2022 at 3:35 pm #111056Hesh
Hesh could see the same bewilderment that had once plagued him reflected on this boy’s– Dark Player’s– face. He saw Dark Player’s eye narrow in distrust. That was mutual. Hesh didn’t trust him any farther than… never mind. He didn’t trust this ‘Dark Player’ at all. It was clear that Hesh wasn’t the only one with a… past. But that past wouldn’t follow him here–Â couldn’t. His days of stealing from the Empire were over.
However, there was no point in giving this boy an alias. Once they escaped they would never see him again. “You can call me Hesh,” he muttered.
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorMay 24, 2022 at 5:16 pm #111058(Prepare for a massive character intro…)
Milla Murdock is the daughter of Matthew Murdock, alias Daredevil. She has his red hair and blue eyes, and also inherited his Daredevil powers from him, except the range of her power is turned WAY up, and with her hearing alone, she can locate anything or anyone on earth. (If she concentrates, she can also hear through space to the moon.)
This power resulted in her capture by the Hand (one of the factions not controlled by Elektra Natchios). Matt went mad as a result, and after [at this point uncertain] events died. Milla’s remaining family (consisting of her three brothers, two sisters, and mother) has gone their separate ways: one brother is a ninja vigilante, trying to track down Milla, the next is a vigilante continuing Matt’s legacy as Daredevil, the third is in college; one sister is a nurse/doctor, and the other is entering college; her mother works with super villains as a psychiatrist.
Milla finally went blind at 16, suffered several mental episodes, watched one of her best friends die right before her while she was helpless to stop it, because she hadn’t trained with her father, murdered the man who killed her friend, caused a huge legal battle that resulted in her seeing a psychiatrist almost every day and not being able to see her family very often, before she was captured by the Hand.
During her time with the hand, she had to watch her dad fall apart and die, her family go their ways, then be subjected to mindwiping and ninja training, becoming an assassin for them. She returned to New York on an assignment where [once again, uncertain] events played out, she figured out who she was, found out she had a horrible reputation, took over as a Daredevil figure, but has to earn the trust of the city.
Because of her powerful powers, multiple power factions constantly seek to manipulate her, both good and bad ones, but she resists all of them, even SHIELD which she has a bad track record with.
She is best friends with Peter Parker/Spider-Manâs daughter: May âMaydayâ Parker. Milla also is probably Norman âNormieâ Osbornâs best friend, although he has been gone since a few weeks after she went blind, and Milla is his legal heir, but whether she will be given control somewhat depends on what the courts decide about her rights after everything she went through. There is also the minor problem of her insisting that he is alive. She does have legal control for as long as he is not officially declared dead.
Also, she is a big deal among the mutants, because when she is using her powers, she registers as a mutant, but no one can tell whether she actually is. If she is, then she is an omega.
Her theme songs (because she totally has more than one) include: 2 AM by Adeline Hill, Broken by Noelle Johnson, and Welcome to New York by Taylor Swift, and the Daredevil Main Theme, for good measure.
(Only about 1/8 of her story is actually written, so, thatâs why sheâs a bit rough around the edges.)
I will post a bit with her soon.
"[Write] today like there's no tomorrow!"
May 24, 2022 at 5:58 pm #111059She has red hair, blue eyes, and wears a suit similar to the one Elektra wears in her 2017 run of comics, except instead of a red cloth over her mouth, she wears it over her eyes, like Matt does in the first Netflix season of Daredevil.
Also, I forgot to mention that, somewhere in all her life happenings, she accidentally took a jaunt over to 616 comics and met the Daredevil there.
Milla
Waking up wouldnât have been so frightening if sheâd been able to hear the world. But hearing just the noises inside the small castle, and nothing more? It made her skin crawl. More than the fact that she was in a castle and not her familyâs old house.
Alternate universe, she considered, sitting up from her place on the bed, and straitening the scarlet cloth over her head. At least here they donât know what I am.
Setting off through the maze of halls, she headed in the direction of the smallest group she heard: a boy and girl huddled fearfully together. Their panic practically filled her nose and ears.
"[Write] today like there's no tomorrow!"
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