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January 24, 2023 at 11:20 am #129839
XD Serin can’t wait for her new stick
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 24, 2023 at 11:32 am #129840@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
CarterÂ
The brother and sister stood silently together in front of Kaineâs painting as others milled about the hall, talking in low voices with one another. Suddenly, Matthew slid to the floor against the wall next to them. Joshua was next to him in an instant.
âMatthewâŠare you alright?â
Carter and Carmen came over as Matthew shook his head. âI-I-IâŠI donât k-know,â He said, smiling sadly. âI-I really d-donât.â
Carmen crouched down and put a hand on Matthewâs knee, looking into his face with worried eyes. Carter crouched down as well.
âHey, Matt.â He said âYou need us to get you out of this creepy place?â
Matthew paused for a moment, then nodded. Carter smiled faintly and stood, holding out his hand to help his friend up.
âYeah, letâs try to find you some food or something.â
He led Matthew with one arm wrapped around his shoulders to the door they had come in from. Carmen looked around the room for Matthewâs sister. She was in another part of the hall that was blocked from view of where Matthew had been sitting. (That sentence was weird, but Iâm trying to hurry) Carmen got her attention and waved her over before following the boys through the doorway.
Light, is that last part ok? You can change it if you want.
Also, if everyone is ok with it, after we are done with the portrait hall and comforting poor Matthew, our charries can try the door they didnât try in the previous hallway and find some food, finally.
đ”Movinâ right alongđ¶
January 24, 2023 at 11:33 am #129841@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I will rp as Aurivis and Eddie after school!
đ”Movinâ right alongđ¶
January 24, 2023 at 1:08 pm #129842@godlyfantasy12
Aw, thanks!! XD I was very worried that it wasn’t very good cause I’m really bad at descriptions.
XD the silver one is Derek, my snarky thief. I’m glad you like them!!!
@loopylin
Yeah, I couldn’t think of a way that they’d immediately recognize what type of building they’re in, so *inserts magical plaque that answers questions*
@princesachronicle22
XD Thanks!!@freedomwriter76
AGH FRIEDA IS JUST SO *screams* *rant rant rant* *goes to find composure, who ran off while I was reading*"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 24, 2023 at 2:12 pm #129852AGH FRIEDA IS JUST SO *screams* *rant rant rant* *goes to find composure, who ran off while I was reading*
That is so accurate XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 24, 2023 at 2:19 pm #129855@freedomwriter76
FRIDAâŠ.oh boyâŠ.
Arabella
SlappedâŠ.her brotherâŠ
After everything heâd already been throughâŠ
Trying to force him to go backâŠtoâŠto the abuseâŠthe torment heâd just escaped.
Ara couldnât imagine the fear he mustâve felt, being in that situationâŠ
Her blood boiled, heart raging. She wanted nothing more in that moment then to lash out at this woman.
To punch her in her seemingly perfect, smug, smirking face.
Her fists clenched, and, as her feet moved towards thisâŠwicked ladyâŠhands readyingâŠshe almost committed what her heart wanted so badly to do.
but before she could, chaos ensued.
Talia was out now, unconscious in Leoâs arms. Ella was sobbing, gripping Adolphus for comfort, rabbit pulled against her tear-stained cheeks.
Leo met Araâs eyes, wide with concern.
âArabellaâŠis there any way you can helpâŠ?â
Ara swallowed, face flushing.
Could she do anything?
Slowly the rage inside quelled, though it didnât disappear. She looked at Frida once again, glaring.
âThis isnât over.â She said. The woman raised a brow.
âExcuse meâŠ?â
But Ara ignored her, walking over to where Leo held Talia. She knelt down, placed a hand on her forehead.
âHas she been sick recently? I know Youâve just met up again, but before. Back home, wherever youâre from.â Ara asked.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 24, 2023 at 2:38 pm #129856@freedomwriter76
November
November gave a small smile. He nodded, âTh-thanksâŠâ He lowered his head slightly, trying to avoid the glances Hans kept giving him.
âItâs true! Youâre not a bother at all!â Jezyk grinned, making Novemberâs smile widen slightly, his dimples showing.
hey any ideas on what to do next with this group? Maybe some conflict going?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 24, 2023 at 3:26 pm #129869Aww November has dimples? I forgot! đ
I used to have a crush on a guy with dimples XDăŸăă
January 24, 2023 at 4:00 pm #129871@loopylin Ok, great!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 24, 2023 at 5:12 pm #129887Anonymous
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AGH FRIEDA IS JUST SO *screams* *rant rant rant* *goes to find composure, who ran off while I was reading*
You sound like me. đđđ
AAhhhh!!!! Talia!!!!! *Cries*
And adolphus comforting Ella???? *Cries again*
That was such a good RP
UGH, IKR!?!?!? đđđ
Awwww, thank you!!! đđđ
@godlyfantasy12. Oof, Arabella, I feel you…I wanna punch her too. đđAnd I don’t know what we could do for the other group…maybe have someone show up and cause conflict or something? Do you have any other charries? Or…since we’re the only ones RPing, we could combine our two groups? Just an idea. đ
Also…I’m just gonna say Ellie disappeared for now…I keep forgetting her, and she hasn’t been doing anything. I may bring her back later tho. I just keep forgetting her. đ
Leo
âHas she been sick recently? I know Youâve just met up again, but before. Back home, wherever youâre from.â
Leo shook his head. “I-I-I don’t think so…she hasn’t acted sick…she hasn’t been acting sick this whole time…she just…she said my name and then just…collapsed.” He gently ran his fingers through Talia’s brown hair, trying to sooth her back to consciousness.
Ella continued to cry, but she was certainly crying softer now, and seemed to be calming down, if only slightly.
Leo moved his arm to get it partially out from underneath Talia, which shifted Talia slightly.
Talia’s eyes shot open, and she lashed out, barely missing hitting Leo in the chest, but he gently grabbed her hand. “Talia!”
She looked up at him for a moment, confusion in her brown eyes, before she slowly sat up. “…Leo? Oh, Leo, darling, I’m sorry…I-I didn’t mean to collapse, I just-”
Leo wrapped his arms around her. “Shh…it’s okay. What happened?” He asked softly, just as Arabella slightly stepped away.
Talia looked away, closing her eyes, but tears coursed down her cheeks.
Leo squeezed her hand. “You can tell me Talia…”
She slowly turned to face him again, wiping away tears. “…It wasn’t you that I saw when I woke up…and it wasn’t Frida that I heard before I went out.”
Leo slowly nodded, pulling her into his embrace. “…It’s okay, Talia…I know…I understand.”
Talia sniffed and nodded, laying her head on his chest.
“Mama! Daddy!”
Leo looked up, just as Adolphus gently set Ella down on the floor. Ella rushed at them both, jumping partially in between the two of them, Rosy still in hand.
Leo wrapped his arms around them both, holding his soon-to-be wife and daughter in his embrace.
“We need to keep moving.” Frida muttered, hands on her hips. “And I don’t believe that girl should keep traveling with us.” She snarled, pointing at Arabella.
“Can we give Talia and Ella a few minutes…?” Leo asked softly.
Frida turned to him with a glare. “We don’t have time for-”
“She just passed out, and Ella is five. Why don’t you be patient for once?” Adolphus snapped.
(Uh oh….đŹ)
January 24, 2023 at 5:15 pm #129888@loopylin Yeah, that sounds good!! Aww, sweet Carmen and Carter. <3<3 And yeah, that works perfectly @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
Joshuaâs eyebrows furrowed together, and his eyes were like deep pools. He was thinking. And something in his eyes told me that I wasn’t the only one who had been…lonely…abused…alone…broken.
I cocked my head slightly. I’m…not alone?
ââŠWellâŠif you ever need anything, or if you just want someone to talk to, Iâm here, alright? IâmâŠIâm here for you,” Joshua smiled a little.
My eyes widened. “…R-really?”
He smiled kindly. “Yes. I promise.”
My heart surged with a warmth that I hadn’t felt in a long time. I’m…not alone, I thought.
I swallowed and stammered, “Th-thank you.” I smiled. “I-it means a-a lot.”
Suddenly, Carter and Carmen appeared beside me.
My heartbeat increased a little at the sight of Carmen, and I felt a flush creep up my neck.
Carmen crouched down and put a hand on my knee, looking into my face with worried eyes. Carter crouched down as well.
âHey, Matt.â He said. âYou need us to get you out of this creepy place?â
I looked into his concerned eyes. I have friends…kind friends…who care. I have friends! I repeated over and over in my mind.
A small, happy smile lit up my face. I nodded. “Y-yeah…th-that’s a good i-idea.”
Carter smiled faintly and stood, holding out his hand to help me up.
âYeah, letâs try to find you some food or something.â
At the mention of food, my stomach rumbled again. This time it was me who burst out laughing, releasing the bad memories and tension that had been trapped in my mind.
Carter looked a bit surprised at my abrupt change in manner. I wished that I could explain to him what had taken place, why I was so cheerful so suddenly.
After a moment, he laughed happily as well.
I took his outstretched hand, and he pulled me up from the wall where I had been huddled a few moments before. He put his arm around my shoulders and we walked out the door we had come in from.
I looked around, but I didn’t see Lyla anywhere. Where is she?Â
“C-Carter, d-do you know w-where my sister i-is?”
His brow furrowed. “No…” He said hesitantly. Seeing my dismayed expression, he added quickly, “But I’ll ask Carmen. She’ll know.”
“O-okay. Thank y-you.”
Carmen looked around the room for my sister. She had been in another part of the hall that was blocked from view of where I had been sitting.
Carmen got her attention and waved her over before following us through the door.
Lyla rushed over and laid her hands on my shoulders. “Oh Matt! Carmen told me what happened. Are you okay?”
I shuddered a little at the memory of it. “Y-yes. Don’t worry, I-I’m alright. N-now I-I’m okay. I’m w-with my f-friends and my sister, so I c-couldn’t be b-better!” I smiled.
Her jaw hung slightly open at my reaction. Then she recovered and smiled back.
“But m-me and Carter a-are really h-hungry,” I said, glancing at him. He grinned mischievously and put up a hand in a thumbs up. “In f-fact, we h-have been ever since w-we got transported h-here. And I-I’m sure th-that everyone e-else is too, so maybe w-we can go find s-some food n-now?” I finished hopefully.
“Definitely!” Lyla exclaimed. “I’ll go get everyone.”
“We’ll c-come with y-you,” I added.
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January 24, 2023 at 5:25 pm #129892Your RP was so fun to read!! Your writing style is so unique!! (In a good way. đ )
I canât RP right now, but I should have one sometime tomorrow afternoon. Hopefully. đ
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
January 24, 2023 at 5:30 pm #129896@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
If y’all want, I can always have Teilo and Evander and the thing that is attacking them show up. Totally up to you guys though!
@esther-c
Aw, thanks! And no worries, but I’ll look forward to when you do. =)"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 24, 2023 at 5:32 pm #129897@freedomwriter76
Arabella
Ara turned to Frida, eyes hard.
âAdolphus, your son, is right.â She stated. Soon, she found herself standing in front of the woman, their eyes meeting. Despite their age difference, Ara found they were similar in height, (idk how tall Frida isâŠXD) and continued to glare at the woman.
Frida snarled.
âYouâre an insolent girl. Just like your brother.â
Ara remained calm, despite the beating in her heart. The fire coiling inside her chest. She could just see Fridaâs face shifting before her eyesâŠchanging into one thatâŠmore resembled herself.
Brown hair. Brown eyes.
But the same look.
The sameâŠpitiful wickedness in her eyes.
âMy brother is more then you will ever be.â Ara said.
Fridaâs eyes flared. âYou-!â The woman raised her hand back. Ara stood still, remembering the last time sheâd been in this position.
Could feel the sting on her cheek. The Fae hadnât held back, and Ara had no doubt Frida would either.
She heard Leo let out a short cry of alarm, but before Frida ever touched her skin, Ara grabbed the womanâs wrist.
She spluttered.
âRelease me this instant, you-! You-! Wench!â
Ara did, throwing Fridaâs arm aside. The woman growled, face full of malice.
âHow dare you.â
âMust you be so miserable that you make everyone else the same?â Ara asked, eyes never wavering. She turned on her heels, looking at Leo and Talia, and their child, and then Adolphus and Dietrich.
She sucked in a breath, clenching her fists, knowing that, what she was about to say might startâŠwellâŠ
All out war.
ButâŠby now, she was used to it. She ran her fingers over the scar on her palm, a faint smile on her lips.
And sometimes it was worth it.
She smiled at the brothers and then the small threesome clutching each other tightly.
âYouâreâŠmother is right about one thing. We should keep moving. ButâŠif sheâd rather not travel with me, I understand. SoâŠwhy donât you all come with me?â She held out a hand.
She could hear the shouts of indignation behind her but ignored them, focusing instead on the ones in front of her.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 24, 2023 at 5:37 pm #129900@freedomwriter76 hmm I donât have any other characters to enter. We can definitely explore more conflict with Hans, also with Erich cuz we havenât really explored much with him ya know?
Maybe a fight or argument breaks out but it actually escalates this time and doesnât get handled? (And it doesnât escalate to November breaking out in flames lol donât worry đ)
Should we find some food? Eating is always fun. Lol gives time to chat.
AlsoâŠ.Jezyk is so sweetâŠ.
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