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January 13, 2023 at 6:32 pm #129072
Crosshair
“I don’t think the arrogant fool knows any more than we do.” Aurivis huffed. “We will have to find another way out. Come. Let’s leave before anyone else is hurt.”
He turned around to walk away.
Crosshair eyed the man who’d said he was the castle owner. Did he really think he could get away with this?
“What are you looking at?” the man snapped.
“Did you not hear me the first time?” Crosshair hissed back. “We’d driven out the previous owner. We can do the same to you.”
“Crosshair!” Feather scolded. “Leave him alone. We’re going.” She turned to follow the others.
“If you show your face again, I’ll make sure it leaves with something to remember me by.” Crosshair snarled to the castle owner as he walked off.
(man, he HATES Easton for some reason….)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 13, 2023 at 6:35 pm #129073@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Do you want to put out group with Paxton, Tauren, Matthew, etc. in one of the weird rooms like the portrait hall or the ice room?
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 13, 2023 at 6:38 pm #129075@loopylin sure!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebJanuary 13, 2023 at 7:18 pm #129077Oh yeah!! That would be fun. Matthew is probably gonna be so freaked out at any of the rooms haha.
#HugRikerSquad
January 14, 2023 at 6:37 pm #129155@godlyfantasy12 @princesachronicle22
Sorry it took me so long to reply!
Anyway. Princesa, do you want to RP next? My charries are just kinda standing around waiting for Uvah to do something. XD
And, Godly, I don’t mind your using Aloth. 😉 You wrote him perfectly!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 14, 2023 at 6:47 pm #129158@whoever’s the castle gatekeeper(s)
Is it okay if I get some characters to join the castle or is it too chaotic already? I understand if it’s too full for more characters right now, I can wait if need be. =)
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 14, 2023 at 6:51 pm #129159You can totally add some characters in!
If you want, I can add some of my other charries so they can join up with yours. Does that work?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 14, 2023 at 9:23 pm #129171@esther-c
Sure, as long as I’m not intruding."...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 14, 2023 at 10:53 pm #129176You’re not intruding! The CC is for anyone : )
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 14, 2023 at 11:43 pm #129179*debating which of my new characters that i need to work on that i could bring. Bc there’s the traumatized soldier boy, (TBH they’re all traumatized, but he’ll be easier to read, with only being 11), my princess, or a very complex guy character*
Never turn your back on a truce, because no one hesitates on an open opportunity to strike.
January 15, 2023 at 12:19 pm #129189Oooh… All of them!! I think Godly has all 8 of her MCs in the castle atm
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 15, 2023 at 12:20 pm #129190You can go ahead and write an RP if you’d like. You could like end it with maybe them running into somebody or just finding a couple people in a room; then I’ll pick up from there. 🙂
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 15, 2023 at 3:27 pm #129207@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Carter
The group of old and new friends got along well. They laughed and talked to each other as they walked, sharing stories from their previous adventures in the castle.
The group hesitated when they encountered the end of the hall. There were two doors leading to the right and the left, and a tapestry hanging on the wall in between them. People began to ask each other which way they should go, but Carmen walked up to the front, saying, “It’s not like it really matters.” She pushed open the left door. “Let’s go this way.” she said, smiling. She walked through the door. Carter followed close behind her.
They came into a dimly lit hall with the occasional sconce on the wall. In between the sconces, and running down the entire length of both walls, were framed paintings. At first, Carter just saw portrait paintings of people, but as he looked closer, he saw that some of the paintings were of animals or of strange looking people with blue skin or odd eyes. Many of the paintings had small curtains that he had to pull back in order to see them. He was examining a painting of a snow leopard when Carmen called him over.
“Look.” she said softly, pointing. Carter looked, and his own eyes looked back at him.
“What-” he jumped back in surprise. He looked at Carmen, who’s face was a shade whiter.
“How is that even possible?” he said. Carmen shook her head. He took a step closer and stared at the painting. It was definitely him. There was the same blond hair, brown eyes, and crooked smile. Carter glanced at the painting next to it. It was Simon, his dark eyes half-closed and his skin slightly paler than Carter remembered. Next to Simon’s painting was Matthew, then Milo, Cammie, and another curtained painting. Carter walked up to it and lifted the curtain. He saw curly red hair and immediately knew it was Kaine. Carter sighed.
“I hope he’s all right, wherever he and his sister are.” he muttered. Carmen came up behind him and slipped her hand into his, giving it a quick squeeze.
(That’s all I got for now. The curtained paintings are characters that have been here before, but aren’t anymore.)
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 15, 2023 at 4:05 pm #129210@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
Dante
“Well then, you’re neither enemy nor ally of mine….yet. What are your names?” Allen said.
Dante glanced at Corvina. Her strange shadows began to drift around her again, and she looked like she was trying to slip away. Dante grinned and looked back at Allen.
“I’m Dante, the short one is Ellie, this one here’s Serin, that’s Layson and his kid, and the grumpy rain cloud trying to leave is Corvina.” Dante finished with a smile. Corvina stiffened at the sudden attention and the shadows around her seemed to dissipate.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 15, 2023 at 4:19 pm #129213Is it okay if I get some characters to join the castle or is it too chaotic already? I understand if it’s too full for more characters right now, I can wait if need be. =)
You can totally add in characters! The more the merrier 😉
It’s really just a big party with some added emotional turmoil when sad things happen to all the characters XD But in all seriousness it’s a great help with writting style and development of your charries!
And if you need characters to interact with I also can add some to meet yours, like Loopy said!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (: -
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