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January 12, 2023 at 12:14 pm #128924
@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @everyone who wants to know
Yeah, no problem loopy! I think I’ll add her anyway so we have more healers to work with, she also needs more development XD
Introducing, Uvah!
Long blond hair goes below her waist and one side is always pinned up. She has doubly pointed ears, and hazel eyes.
She is from a race called the Vey’blen, who are dedicated to learning and knowledge, they are scholars and teachers. XD it’s almost like their cities and communities are just big collages, and everyone has a different magor. Uvah’s is healing
So all of my current WIPs are interconnected in one world but just different time periods. Uvah is in the same period of time as Serin.
I’ll try to Rp as Serin and Uvah as soon as I have more time đ
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 12, 2023 at 12:19 pm #128925@freedomwriter
awwwwww, A&D
this is so conflicting, because I didin’t know they’d hurt little Pax that way!!!!! But they feel so bad about it…
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 12, 2023 at 1:09 pm #128932@freedomwriter76 đ aww boysâŠitâs alrightâŠ. Araâs protective of himâŠbut seeing you guys like this, sheâll forgive youâŠI know it.
Arabella
Dietrich and Adolphusâ eyes went wide, faces paling as all eyes turned to them. They forced their heads down as Frida glared.
âBoys,â she practically spat. âWhat is wrong with you two?â
âN-Nothing Mutti.â Adolphus made a face as he stuttered, pinching his lips closed. Frida scowled in disgust, turning back to her own conversation. Leo raised a brow at the two brothers, then glanced at Ara before turning back to his fiancĂ© and child.
Ara watched as Dietrich quickly wiped silent tears from his eyes and Adolphus glared at the ground.
Had she spoken out of bounds� Had she done more harm then good?
She frowned, heart wrenching.
She slowed her pace until, a few moments later, she was back in step with the two brothers. Though neither of them seemed like they wanted her around.
She frowned.
âIâŠIâm sorryâŠâ She said, looking at Adolphus. âI didnât meanâŠâ She turned to Dietrich. âI didnât meant to hurt youâŠI justâŠI just wanted to help I supposeâŠâ She rubbed her arm. âGuess Iâm still learning a bit HmâŠ.?â
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 1:28 pm #128933(Is it way too late to throw one of mine in??)
Never turn your back on a truce, because no one hesitates on an open opportunity to strike.
January 12, 2023 at 1:53 pm #128934@katthewriter Nerp! Itâs open for everyone! We usually just ask and such if we wanna join a certain group of other charries and such. For instance a lot of my charries are traveling with @freedomwriter rn
@esther-c heeeey u on? Ik ur not getting the Notifs right lol#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 1:55 pm #128935Not at all! I randomly threw mine in here and so far she’s okay XD
It’s really helpful for development! Whenever you wnat to introduce her is fine!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 12, 2023 at 2:34 pm #128940@godlyfantasy @mineralizewritings @loopylin @keilah-h
SERIN
“Corvina” the woman said quickly, flicking her eyes to the window behind them. “My nameâs Corvina. And I wasnât spying on you for any particular purpose.â She relaxed her posture, leaning casually against the wall. This made Serin ease slightly in response, though not fully. It appeared that she was trying to avoid conflict, but it didn’t hurt to be careful. “I was just curious.” She finished.
Serin narrowed her eyes a tad. She seemed genuine. But if this woman really was a Hole, then Serin would have to be extra careful.
“About?” Ellie asked.
This seemed to bring the woman, Corvina, up short. Her lips pursed, choosing to remain silent. She stared at them all before her eyes landed on little Maylee. Serin tensed. “Look,” she said, raising her hands in a shrug. “Unless your planning on roasting me alive, in front of the kid,â she nodded the three year old. âI can just go.â
Layson held his child closer at the words. Then Dante carelessly tossed the still flaming stick at Ellie, who fumbled to catch it. âOh, wait, no. I wouldnât do that.â He raised his hands for the girl to see. âLook. I wonât hurt you unless you try to hurt us.â He grinned sharp teeth. âWhereâd you come from? Howâd you sneak up on us like that?â
Serin nodded, this was something she would very much like to know. Corvina just crossed her arms, a defiant look to her still slightly puffed eyes and said, “how did I get here? Like all of you I suppose.â She tilted her head. âBut as for sneaking up on youâŠI donât have to tell you anything.â
Serin’s jaw hardened. So she admitted her crime but wouldn’t explain or defend herself? Serin rose from her pose. “You will tell us whatever we wish.”
Corvina glared at her, puffing her cheek. She huffed in sardonic amusment before saying,
âuh-huh. I donât think so.âThey stared each other down until Layson decided to cut through the taut silence.
“Well we’re moving on.” He gestured a hand down the hall. Â “Is there something you want? Or should we be on our way?”Again Corvina didn’t answer, and Serin decided to get straight to the point. She held up an authoritave hand. “Do you wish harm of any means?”
While waiting for her answer, Serin heard a few shuffels and scrapes from a nearby hall. She whipped her head in that direction, just as a new form came around the corner.
She stared. It was a male. And his skin was blue.
Serin’s relief was cut short as she studied him more closely, however. As he stood there taking in the group with wide eyes, she noticed that they were fully red. And his darker blue skin didn’t have the same sheen to it that was common for Pelgarkines. He also did not seem to have her same split ears.
Serin fought to hide her disapointment. Then she took in his hand holding out a small gun of some sort. Her muscles clenched, it didn’t seem to be any of the stone railguns she was accustomed to. Glancing back at Corvina she asked the newcomer, “what is your name?”
Wheeeeewww. I had to write that three times over because it kept getting deleted, curse you auto page referesh! XD
Next time I’ll be better at saving it somewhere else.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 12, 2023 at 2:36 pm #128941Itâs never too late! We just keep throwing people in. Itâs great! XD
Now Iâm on! And I am actually getting the notifications now. It may have just been those one or two postsâŠÂ
or I may have accidentally deleted the email đ*clears throat*I almost wrote another RP, but I think itâs your turn. đ
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
January 12, 2023 at 2:52 pm #128943@esther-c yea but I didnât know what was behind the doorâŠ.
GASP HEY!!!! Maybe @princesachronicle22 new healer character?! That way she can help Nyx??
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 2:56 pm #128945yea but I didnât know what was behind the doorâŠ.
Oh yeah⊠oops. XD
GASP HEY!!!! Maybe @princesachronicle22 new healer character?! That way she can help Nyx??
Yes!! Great idea! If she wants to do it then Iâm in! đ
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
January 12, 2023 at 2:59 pm #128946@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @loopylin
Corvina
GreatâŠanother personâŠ
Corvina scowled, fists clenching.
Then againâŠit got the attention off of herâŠif she wanted, she could probably escape now. Into the shadows, shifting into her Raven form.
AhâŠshe probably wouldnât even have to do that. Her shadows would probably hide her well enough.
âUnless they pull out another fire trick.â
Corvina swallowed.
Iâm fine now.
âAre you?â
Corvina glared at no one in particular. She spotted blue-skin glance her way again before asking the newcomer a question. She let out a large sigh, shuffling against the wall, arms still crossed.
The man with the child now held the girl in his arms, eyes wide and shaky, as if unsure of which stranger to focus on. The little girl, however, while perhaps a bit nervous, seemed more excited then anything.
She was staring at new blue-skin-ahâŠperhaps Corvina should call him red eyes to keep things from getting more confusing, at least until she learned their names-with a curious gleam in her eyes.
That was children for ya. Too curious for their own goodâŠ
âSpeaking from experience are we?â
Corvina rolled her eyes to the ceiling, and then noticed the small red creature still staring at her, grinning. She glared. He merely grinned the wider.
âDonât you have more important things to do?â She hissed.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 2:59 pm #128947How old is Dante btw?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 3:34 pm #128950Sure! What door??? Is it in that dining room thing they were in? I missed the last few posts in it
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 12, 2023 at 3:37 pm #128951@princesachronicle22 Yerp they just busted open the dining room door to get out lol
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 3:45 pm #128952Lol, dang! Can’t believe I missed that XD
But yeah I’ll write as Uvah later đ
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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