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January 11, 2023 at 10:34 pm #128878
Or maybe you could just… ya know… not injure your characters in the first place? XD Lol you’re right tho. We could make a new community character like Easton, maybe?
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 11, 2023 at 10:36 pm #128879*O.O*
I have no idea what you mean…..
XD
ALSO HITCHENS INJURED NYX AND PAXTON FYI XD XD XD
tho I uhhh may have totally made it worse…. 😅
BUT ANYWAY yea that might be a good idea….
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 11:09 pm #128890Lol, that would be a good idea yes, I could possibly add in another character of mine if y’all want!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 11, 2023 at 11:21 pm #128891Lol just teasing you
@everyone
I present to you our new community character: Silvia Spruce.
She is blonde with gray eyes, and pretty tall. She carries a staff that she uses for healing magic. She is a pacifist nomad who loves nature and happened upon the seemingly abandoned castle by accident.“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 12, 2023 at 1:00 am #128892@loopylin cool! My only issue with community charries is they’re kinda difficult to write…I was kinda curious as to what Charrie @princesachronicle22 was gonna add…
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 2:11 am #128896@freedomwriter76
Eddie
“…Do you know where we should start looking…?”
“Um, I’m not sure, but…” Eddie spun in a circle and then pointed down a hall lined with windows on one side and doors on the other. “That way looks good.”
As they walked, Eddie peered out the windows, looking worried. “I hope she’s not out there in the rain.”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 12, 2023 at 2:22 am #128897My only issue with community charries is they’re kinda difficult to write…I was kinda curious as to what Charrie @princesachronicle22 was gonna add…
Oh, sorry I didn’t see that she was adding a character until after I posted that. @princesachronicle22 you can still add your charrie! Sorry I don’t mean to get in the way of that. Honestly, with the number of injuries we have, we could probably use two healers.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 12, 2023 at 8:17 am #128901@loopylin ur good!!! Don’t stress!!
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 8:51 am #128906Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @loopylin. Yes, my charrie Hitchens is to blame for Paxton and Nyx’s injuries, not Godly. XDXDXD
Anywho…Godly, this is gonna be interesting between Ara and A&D. xD
Adolphus
The girl who had helped Leo walked faster, slipping in between the two of them, being quite shorter than them both. “Ah…Dietrich and Adolphus, right? We haven’t been formally introduced. I’m Arabella.”
Dietrich nodded. “Nice to meet you, Arabella.”
They lapsed into silence again.
Adolphus just kept walking.
“Too bad the girls aren’t here…” Frida suddenly mused, looking around at the castle walls, “they would likely love to see a castle.”
Adolphus was glad they weren’t here.
They were both complete and total brats.
He glanced at Dietrich, who had rolled his eyes, and also turned to look at Leo, only to notice that all of Leo’s attention was on his fiancée. They talked, smiled, and quietly laughed, as Ella drifted off to sleep in Leo’s arms.
Adolphus turned back around, clenching his fists and biting his lip, hard, to force back his thoughts.
“Well, Arabella…where are you from? Do you have any family?” Dietrich suddenly asked, making small talk.
January 12, 2023 at 9:10 am #128910Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. Aww, Eddie! *sobs* <3333
Reuben
They walked down the hall, and Eddie kept looking out the window. “I hope she’s not out there in the rain.”
Reuben smiled. “I’m sure she’s fine, Eddie…and we’ll find her…don’t worry.”
Eddie looked up at him, and he gave her a warm smile. “…We’ll find her.”
(soooo…I guess we need to brainstorm some things for them to do, lol. XD Maybe a cool room or something?)
January 12, 2023 at 9:18 am #128911@freedomwriter76 aww poor boys….
Arabella
“Yes, I do…” Ara smiled fondly at the thought of her family, though it faltered slightly.
Were they doing well? Back in A’Grend…?
Was her home…still the same? Or was everything different now?
It felt like only yesterday when she’d left in order to protect it…yet…at the same time it felt like centuries ago…
“I haven’t seen my parents or my grandfather in a long while…” Her voice drifted. “I must admit…I miss them fiercely…”
The three were silent for a moment. She could tell the two young men were uncomfortable.
She glanced at them, wondering what they were thinking at the moment. She smiled once again.
“Ah…but I have my friends with me…and now, I have a little brother.” She let out a small laugh. “It’s…a bit of a long story…but, We are tied together now. By blood,” she looked at her palm. At the scar so evident on it.
She looked back at Leo, and then at the two boys beside her. She spoke softly, “He’s a lot like you all…”
The two boys blinked, heads jerking in her direction. They both raised a brow in question. She frowned, eyes furrowing, gaze becoming serious.
“I can tell they don’t treat you very well…” She clasped her hands in front of her, raising a brow. She pursed her lips. “Though that doesn’t give you an excuse to treat others that way…”
Both boys stared at her wide eyed, jaws hanging slightly open, as if she’d read their minds, letting her know she’d hit the nail on the head.
They both looked away, ashamed.
Ara’s eyes softened. “You know…my little brother…he had siblings who…weren’t kind to him. Hurt him. A lot. I…I don’t know if he’ll ever fully heal from it. But…” She offered a small, sincere smile, “One of them…one of them changed, and my brother forgave him. It’s never too late to change.”
The brothers looked at her, eyes low. Questioning. Like children who didn’t know what to do.
She smiled, gently placing a hand on each of their arms before walking a few steps ahead.
“Arabella?” One of the boys, Dietrich called softly. She turned. “What’s your brother’s name?”
Ara smiled. “Paxton….I…I hope to find him soon.” And then she turned back around, walking ahead.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 9:19 am #128912@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 sooo does anyone wanna RP in our group or who’s turn is it?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 12, 2023 at 9:33 am #128913Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Oh nooooooo…. (btw, I’m called Adolphus and Dietrich A&D now, lol, and I wanna RP as them both right now, so…yeah…XD I’ll put a ~*~ when I’m swapping POV’s between the two of them, just to make it easier. =D)
A&D
Dietrich’s mouth instantly went dry.
Paxton? The little boy they’d threatened? The little boy Frida had slapped? The little boy Leo and his brothers had protected?
Oh…oh…oh no.
Dietrich’s stomach churned with a feeling he had gotten used to.
It felt horrible, but he accepted it as just a consequence for his actions.
Guilt.
This girl…Arabella…was Paxton’s sister?
She was friendly to him and Adolphus…but if she knew what they had done…she wouldn’t be friendly.
Oh, far from it.
Dietrich brought his fingers up to his cheeks, only to pull wet fingers away.
No, not tears! Not now!
~*~
Adolphus forced himself to keep moving, even though he didn’t feel like doing so.
No…no…Arabella was that little boy’s, Paxton’s, sister?
He glanced at Dietrich, only to see tears coursing down his brother’s cheeks.
Adolphus fought back his tears, clenching his fists and biting his lips.
Now he really felt awful.
Not physically awful…but inside of him…he felt…horrible.
Arabella turned around, and her eyes widened. “Adolphus…? Dietrich…? What’s wrong?”
“Nothing!” They both replied at once, way too loudly, causing everyone to stop in their tracks.
January 12, 2023 at 10:41 am #128916@Freedomwriter76
Poor A&D!!!! You’ve made us fall in love with them!!! 😭😭😭😭 And Leo and his fiancee!!! And little Ella calling him Daddy <3 <3 <3
And Precious November!! He’s so sweet. Oh my word, and @Koshka Ugh I love Zlatan!!!
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January 12, 2023 at 11:26 am #128918@freedomwriter76 Do you want to do the portrait room? Or we could make up a new one… Maybe they can find a random pantry so that they don’t starve
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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