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January 11, 2023 at 3:39 pm #128816
@koshka ZLATAN 😭 @freedomwriter76
November
Caned? Celled?
As in…beaten…?
But…but why…?
November’s heart lurched, stomach twisting. He was already nauseous…
He grunted, gripping his stomach. Nope. No. He was not about to get sick on top of everything else going on…
Tear-streaked eyes met Zlatan’s. “W-Why…?” He choked out.
Zlatan’s gaze softened. “Novembré…it’s alright…”
November shook his head. No…no it…it wasn’t! What was…what was wrong with people?
This…wasn’t normal!
Yet…everyone surrounding him seemed to…act like it was.
Even Riker and Fin could only give looks of pity, and sadness, as if they understood…though maybe not to the exact extent.
And…what did Zlatan mean he deserved worse? Did no one else think this was insane?!
November grabbed at his head.
“It’s just the way the world works, November.” The voice whispered in the back of his head. He winced.
But…Ara…
“She’s the minority. Her, and her family? Think about it. How many have you met like them on this journey?”
November thought for a moment, realizing…
The only ones were his friends…
“Exactly. What do you think daddy was trying to teach you all those years ago? That people like you…bleeding hearts? They don’t make it in this world.”
November released his head, feeling Riker’s hand gently shaking his shoulder.
“November…? You alright?” He whispered.
“Time to realize that.”
“November?”
But…I can’t just change myself…
“Well, that’s your business. I’m just staying the facts.”
“November!” Riker was in front of him now. November blinked, coming out of his own thoughts.
“Huh? Oh! Uh…s-sorry…I’m…I’m fine,” he forced a small smile, stomach still twisting.
He looked away from Riker’s studying gaze, knowing the man didn’t believe him. But…at the moment he didn’t care.
The voice…
The shadow. It was right…
This was how the world worked…
No matter what you did…someone got hurt.
November clenched his fists.
But…maybe…he could at least save…one person.
(okay so this obviously doesn’t happen in the actual series, (tho he does make this choice, and it is for pretty much the same reason so this was awesome to write cuz it helps for when the time comes to write that scene!) but what y’all don’t know is that during the timeline that November is in rn, he’s having to make a choice that was presented to him by Corvina….
Well…he just made his choice)
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 3:49 pm #128820Wait, November, WHAT? NOO! What does she want you to do?
What did you just decide to do?!
And no, this may be normal, but that doesn’t mean it’s not horribly messed up.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkJanuary 11, 2023 at 4:07 pm #128822heh heh…yea this is a decision he makes in the series as well.
In Corvina’s defense she also only gives him this decision because she too is trying to protect him in her own way.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 4:08 pm #128823Bruh wait a min Hans and Erich is alone with Vulk rofl that must be awkward
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 4:44 pm #128828@loopylin you see my last RP yet?
@princesachronicle22 awesome! I’ll add him in now. He’s probably a teenager, but I’m not quite sure how old. Wears an Imperial cadet uniform, carries a small pistol.Oh, and one thing. My tag is “Keilah-h” with my initial at the end, I noticed you missed that.
@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12Allen
Where was he???
He stood up, taking in his surroundings. A stony castle. Definitely not Imperial.
Maybe a Rebel base….?
How’d he get here?
He heard voices in the hall nearby and took out his blaster, just in case.
They got closer. Close enough to where he could see them.
At least three humans…..a red one-eyed creature as well. A tailed, short alien….and a blue-skinned one. (tell me if I’m missing anybody)
She was the weirdest one. Not a Chiss like him. Not a Pantoran either. Perhaps a hybrid? He’d heard that was possible…..
“Who are you?” he asked them all, pointing his weapon out at the one in the lead. (whoever that is)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 11, 2023 at 4:49 pm #128829Oh sorry @keilah-h!
Okay cool! Hello Allen!
I’ll have to Rp to everyone soon
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 11, 2023 at 4:50 pm #128830@princesachronicle22 Totally fine!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 11, 2023 at 5:31 pm #128837Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. ZLATI!!! 😭😭😭😭 @godlyfantasy12. WHAT DECISION!?!?!?!? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO NOVEMBER NOW!?!?!?!?!? 😭 UGHHHHHHHHHH
Fin
“I deserved worse. Much worse… Ve need to catch up vith ze others.”
Fin slowly nodded.
Wherever Zlatan was from, it didn’t seem much different than Germany. At least it’s rules on discipline weren’t much different.
Fin heard Riker trying to get November’s attention, and Fin glanced over, silent, rushed prayers tumbling from his lips for all of them.
He faced Zlatan again. “I suppose you’re right, about needing to catch up with the others, at least. But if you did what was right, then you truly didn’t deserve any of the treatment you received.” Fin smiled.
Riker
November was not alright.
Riker could tell.
He knew what it was like to hide everything.
All your feelings…your hurts…the thoughts that ran through your head…
…and hiding them from view…
…stuffing them all away.
All because he didn’t want to be hurt again…because he didn’t want to bother others with his own problems, when they were his to bear. His and his alone.
But since talking to Fin about all of his past, Riker had felt a little…better somehow. Not completely, but a little.
Maybe November needed someone to talk to.
But not Riker.
Definitely not Riker.
He’d just mess things up.
Like he always did.
January 11, 2023 at 5:44 pm #128838Whew! Ok. I finally got to this! XD
Everton
A grin found its way onto Everton’s face. Break down a door? Of course! If only he had come up with that idea…
“I’m in!” Ev said, looking to Ty to see what he would say. Ty sighed.
“It’s worth a shot,” he said. Grimm nodded.
Ev glanced over at Aloth. He leaned close and lowered his voice. “What about Aloth? We gonna ask him?”
Grimm shook his head. Ev nodded his agreement. Probably better that way. The three guys made their way to the door.
“Alright,” Grimm said. They lined up, ready to attack the door. “On three.”
Ev smirked. He glanced at Ami. She offered a small smile. He gave her a look to indicate that she needed to calm down. He’d be fine.
Grimm began, “Three… two… one!”
Ev shot off towards the door and threw all his body weight against it. He felt it give a little. Nonetheless, he felt like he ran into a brick wall… which had happened before… Ev rubbed his shoulder as pain shot through his arm. He shook his arm. Grimm looked at the two of them. “You good?”
“Yeah.”
“Fine.”
Grimm nodded. “Let’s go again.”
So they backed up and repeated the process. This time, Ev was ready for the shock. He braced for impact. The door budged slightly, a little more than last time. They repeated this a few more times. They finally stopped when they found they were making little progress. The only things that were even close to being broken were their arms.
Ev collapsed into a chair. Ami came up to him and placed a hand on his shoulder. “Are you sure you’re okay?”
Ev shrugged. “Yeah, I’m fine.” Though that wasn’t the complete truth. The pain was worse now and his arm must have been more than bruised at this point. Ev looked around the room. That table might be light enough to lift, he thought.
“Hey guys,” he said. “You think this table might work? We could use it to slam down the door.”
Grimm nodded. “It’s worth a shot.”
The girls removed some food and a few dishes off the table before the rest of it was knocked off by the guys. They positioned themselves around the table. Ev yanked up on the table. He let go. He dislocate his shoulder if he tried to lift it anymore. They stopped. “It’s too heavy,” Grimm said.
“Thanks for pointing out the obvious,” Ev said, his frustration growing.
Grimm shot him a look. Ev sighed. “How about we push it into the door instead. It may be easier. And the girls could help us if they want.” Ev looked their way.
Corie shrugged and joined them. Ami reluctantly stood by Everton. Jocelyn made her way to Grimm. All together, they slid the table across the ground and ran it into the door. It left a large crack.
Ev whooped. “This will work!”
They dragged the table back again and rammed the door another time. After a few more tries, it was almost open.
Panting and sweating, they prepared to ram it one more time. The table was slammed into the door and a large crack resounded throughout the room. Then, the door creaked, starting to fall backwards. The group backed away from the door.
With a resounding thud, the door fell to the ground outside the dining room. Dust rose up around it. “Let’s go!” Ev cried, slapping the guys high-fives.
They all rushed to the door, waiting for the dust to clear before they walked out. Ev gasped when he saw what was behind the door.
Idk what is behind the door. XD You could come up with something, or we could just pretend Ev never gasped and there is nothing special at all. XD Whatever you wanna do. 🙂
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January 11, 2023 at 5:48 pm #128839Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww, Ara! <3
Leo
“My brother has one. It’s a bear, her name is Hope. Does yours have a name?” Arabella asked with a smile.
Ella sat, silent, for a minute, before looking up at Arabella, smiling. “…Rosy.”
Arabella smiled and nodded. “Beautiful…that’s a wonderful name.”
Ella smiled, hugging Rosy closer.
“Ah, Talia, you’re here? We didn’t know you were here.” Frida said, suddenly coming over, Hilda beside her along with Felix.
Talia looked up. “Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Baumann. Miss Klein. I didn’t know any of you were here either, but Ella found you.”
Frida nodded and sighed. “Well, I suppose we better get moving again, shall we?”
Felix nodded in agreement. “We should get moving again.”
Footsteps sounded, and Adolphus, Dietrich, and Ellie were also over.
Ellie smiled softly at Arabella. “I finally got Abel to sleep.”
Arabella nodded and smiled faintly.
“Leo, can you walk?”
“Of course he can, Dietrich. He’s fine. Isn’t that right, Leo…?” Frida asked, eyebrow raised, turning to Leo with a pointed look.
Leo nodded. “Of course, Mutti.”
And he slowly stood, setting Ella down. Talia grabbed his hand and helped him stand.
Ella handed Talia the last bite of the bread, which Talia ate, and yawned and rubbed her eyes. “Mama…I’m sleepy…”
“I know, baby…” Talia soothed, brushing strands of Ella’s curly blonde hair out of her eyes.
Leo smiled softly and picked Ella up, even though his wound protested a little bit, and lifted her up into his arms.
Ella’s legs wrapped around his waist, and clutching Rosy, she laid her head on his shoulder.
Leo looked around at everyone, mouthing a quick “thank you” to Arabella before asking; “…Will we keep moving now…?”
January 11, 2023 at 5:50 pm #128840Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oh yeah…Hans and Erich ARE the only ones with Vulk…hmm…that would be interesting. XD
January 11, 2023 at 6:38 pm #128847@freedomwriter76 @koshka AUGH RIKER 😭 AND LEEEEO AND DIETRICH AND ADOLPHUS UGH! I think I’m going to have Ara strike up a conversation with those two…
Arabella
Ara nodded with a small smile at Leo’s silent thanks, then waited on the reply from Felix. He huffed, nodding. His eyes landed on Ara and Ellie.
“Will you be joining us?”
“We’ve no time for them Felix.” Frida tsked.
“Nonsense. She helped Leo. I don’t see any reason they can’t walk with us.” Felix snapped back, making Frida’s face turn red.
Ara kept silent.
At least someone here had a bit of sense…
She met eyes with Ellie, then turned back to Felix, nodding. “Yes sir, we’ll stay. Thank you.”
Felix nodded, turning to lead the group onward. Ara followed, Ellie by her side. She watched with a small smile as Ella slowly drifted to sleep in her father’s arms.
The little girl really was adorable.
Ara’s eyes scanned the rest of the family, unable to keep from noticing how the two other young men kept glancing their way, eyes distant. Foggy.
She rubbed her palms together, a shudder running down her spine.
Picking up the pace, she stepped between the two tall young men, finding she was quite shorter then them both. She shrunk slightly, realizing that, if they wished to, they could probably crush her in a moment’s notice.
She sucked in a breath, removing those thoughts from her mind and straightening slightly.
She kept her eyes focused ahead, only removing them to glance at the women-folk, making sure they weren’t eavesdropping.
“Ah…Dietrich and Adolphus, right? We haven’t been formally introduced. I’m Arabella.”
(Bruh I just realized they might be feeling guilty cuz they threatened Paxton…and she does NOT know that. Or that Frida slapped him…) 😳
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by GodlyFantasy12.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 10:02 pm #128859you see my last RP yet?
Yeah, sorry 😞 I’ve been too tired to rp lately
Aurivis
Aurivis rushed over to the man who had dared to speak so carelessly to a dragon. He crouched, glaring down at the man with his teeth bared. It took a lot of restraint to not simply burn him to a crisp right then and there.
“We would love nothing more than to leave this cursed place. Are you the magician who brought us here? Send us back to our own worlds!”
(Can someone else rp for Easton so that this isn’t super one sided? Also, Milo, Feather, and Crosshair can also help fight Aurivis or Easton)
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January 11, 2023 at 10:12 pm #128863@esther-c WHOOPS totally forgot to respond to this 🤣 hmmm idk what could be on the other side…
Would Aloth have anything interesting in mind? 😂 or nah
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#ProtectSebJanuary 11, 2023 at 10:16 pm #128866Ya know….
we really could use a healer or doctor in this RP btw….XD
we’ve got Leo’s wound, poor baby Paxton’s whip strike, though thankfully it’s not bothering him much, November’s burns, Nyx is DYING…. (Okay maybe that’s a bit dramatic? Ok maybe not…), Everton’s now hurting, maybe dislocated shoulder,
And If Koshka wasn’t taking out the twins we’d have Zlatan’s injury.
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