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January 9, 2023 at 4:41 pm #128614
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Riker
âBâŚButâŚI couldâveâŚI almostâŚâ November didn’t finish, trailing off as Riker slowly and carefully pulled November’s head into his lap.
November leaned into his embrace.
“I already said it, November, we weren’t going to leave you. No matter what you could have or almost did.”
“B-But-”
“Shh…” Riker soothed, brushing red curls out of November’s eyes and off his forehead, “we weren’t leaving you, and we won’t leave you, November. Because we care about you.”
There was another word for it, but Riker wouldn’t exactly put those words in Zlatan’s mouth, nor did he know if he had the courage to say it himself.
Because when you loved someone…
…you had a good chance of losing them.
UGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! đâ¤ď¸đâ¤ď¸
January 9, 2023 at 4:42 pm #128615@freedomwriter76 thatâs fine!! I hope u donât mind me still tagging u sometimes đ just to double check ya know? XD also it makes me feel like Iâm doing something⌠đ¤Ł
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 4:43 pm #128616@freedomwriter76 AUUUUUGGGHHHH đ he and Corvina also share such similar mindsetsâŚ
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 4:46 pm #128618@freedomwriter76 hey!! What if Arabella and Ellie (up to u) ran into Leo and them??
im just imagining Ara meeting Leo and feeling sorry for him/caring for him and standing up to his mother (but she wouldnât be able to do anything about it and probably end up like âcaptured by themâ or something in return for being able to help Leo)
And then it comes out that Leo met Paxton and Ara is the sister Paxton kept talking about and yea idk I just think it would be really sweet
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 4:51 pm #128619So idk if I should rp till @koshka does lol
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 4:52 pm #128620Anonymous
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@lightoverdarkness6. @godlyfantasy12. @mineralizedwritings. @loopylin.
Wolfgang
Joshua turned to Carmen and Carter. “We met Paxton earlier in the castle, before we were all somehow…transported to different places.”
Wolfgang felt a sudden tap on his shoulder, and he looked down to meet Paxton’s gaze. âW-Whereâs the o-o-others?â Paxton asked quietly.
Wolfgang bit his lip and faced Joshua, who sighed quietly and smiled softly. “We…we don’t know, Paxton. They disappeared just like you did. We don’t know where they are…or who they’re with…”
Wolfgang brushed hair out of Paxton’s eyes and smiled. “But we’ll find them, Pax, don’t worry.”
Camille
The girl leaned down. “I’m an elf!”
Camille’s eyes widened.
An elf!?
She’d heard of those in storybooks Mama had once read to her too!
She gasped. “An elf!? That’s so cool!”
January 9, 2023 at 4:55 pm #128622Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. She said to keep going unless one of her charries absolutely had to say something, so you can go, but it’s totally up to you. đ
AND YES!!!! I’d love to combine those groups!!! (Bc alas, I keep forgetting about Ellie. XD) You wanna RP them meeting up? đ
And yes, it’s totally fine if you’re tagging me! đ I’ll try to be on when I can still! đ
January 9, 2023 at 5:15 pm #128626@freedomwriter76 sure! @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 do one of yâall wanna RP in our group next?
November
November looked up at Riker, feeling as some of the burning inside and around him faded away.
TheyâŚthey did careâŚ
Why else would they stayâŚ.?
November looked away, eyes glassy. He bit down the emotion rising to his throat, refusing to cry, not wanting to seem childish.
Though, at the moment, all he wanted to do was curl into Rikerâs arms and cry.
A single tear ran down his cheek, this time not burning up at impact, cooling his skin. He felt as Riker gently brushed it away, pulling November closer.
Zlatan gently reached down under Novemberâs torso, lifting him into more of a sitting position. âDo you think you can stand?â He asked softly.
November muscles ached, but he slowly nodded, head still leaning against Rikerâs chest. Zlatan carefully wrapped Novemberâs arm around his shoulder, and the ginger couldnât help but notice the dark-haired man stiffen as he did so.
Riker did the same on the other side, and they both gently lifted November up from the ground, helping him to get his footing.
The boy winced, letting out a small cry as his burnt skin scratched against the two menâs shoulders, and his own clothes as he stood.
He felt hot. Sweaty. Sticky.
Miserable.
He whimpered.
âEasyâŚâ Riker said, pulling him closer.
Thankfully, whatever theyâd put on his skin earlier was still helping to soothe the burning a bit, butâŚit didnât help with the scratchiness. Or the burning inside.
He let out a sigh.
Riker faced him. âIf you need to waitâŚâ
November considered it, wondering if he should even rejoin the othersâŚ
Should he even risk going with them?
Wasnât he just a liability now?Â
If this happened againâŚheâd definitely hurt someone.
ButâŚthere was no way Riker, or Zlatan would leave him behind.
Which meant, heâd just have to go with them.
That isâŚuntil he got enough strength to get away himselfâŚ
âI-Iâm fineâŚâ He said hoarsely.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 5:20 pm #128628@freedomwriter76
Arabella
âYou doing alright back there?â Ara paused, turning to check on her companion.
Ellie nodded, gently rocking the fussy baby in her arms with a small laugh. âYesâŚheâs just a bit tired I think. But weâre fine.â
Ara nodded, continuing ahead down the hall. She paused at the sudden sound of voices, holding a hand out to Ellie, who stopped.
âWhatâŚwhat is it?â The young woman whispered.
Ara shook her head, unsure.
Shadows approached from down the hall. A group, more then just one figure. Ara backed up, standing next to Ellie, glancing at the baby in her arms, who let out a few cries.
The voices stopped at the sound, the shuffling of footsteps sounding louder.
Araâs heart beat in her ears, and she held an arm out in front of the older lady.
âAra, I wonât let you-â Ellie started but was cut off as the figures rounded the corner.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 5:44 pm #128637@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
Dante
âLook, unless youâre planning on roasting me alive, in front of the kid, I can just go.â
Dante raised his eyebrow at the comment. âOh, wait, no. Donât go. I wouldnât do that.â
He trust the torch into Ellieâs hands, who fumbled with it for a moment. Then he held up his empty hands for Corvina to see. âLook. I wonât hurt you unless you try to hurt us.â He grinned, showing his sharp teeth. âWhereâd you come from? Howâd you sneak up on us like that?â
Have you drank water today?
January 9, 2023 at 5:49 pm #128638Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww, November! *sobs*
Leo
They continued down the hall, Leo barely keeping up, his side aching even more with every step.
The medicine and medical care Zlatan had given him earlier seemed to be quickly wearing off.
He fought back hisses, curses, groans, and tears, pushing through the pain, same as he’d done a lot recently.
Same as he always had.
He had to be strong for his younger brothers, after all.
His thoughts were interrupted by a cry.
Frida and Felix both stopped in their tracks, and Leo did the same, silently thankful they had stopped, if just for a minute.
“…Did you hear that?” Frida whispered, leaning closer to her husband, as Felix nodded.
“I did…I think we both did. Stay behind me.” Felix pulled out his pistol, ready for anything.
Leo took in and let out a deep breath, before following his parents around the corner.
“Who’s there!?” Felix demanded, as they rounded the corner and stepped into another hallway.
January 9, 2023 at 6:05 pm #128640@freedomwriter76
Arabella
âWhoâs there?!â A gruff voice shouted, echoing through the hall.
The babe in Ellieâs arm let out another cry at the sound. She soothed him, rocking him gently, eyes wide.
Ara swallowed the nervous tension that was rising to her throat.
Whoever this wasâŚdidnât sound very friendlyâŚ.
She adjusted her stance, standing tall, refusing to let them see weakness. The figures emerged, allowing them to be seen better by the two young women.
There were three men, two women.
Most of whichâŚlooked very unpleasant.
Except for one, who lookedâŚ
Extremely pale. Tired.
There were deep bags under his eyes, and his hair was disheveled. Sweat beaded on his brow, his eyes glassy, hands holding to his abdomen whereâŚ.
Was that blood�
Oh Light OneâŚ
Ellie let out a sharp gasp at the sight.
Ara pinched her lips, forcing her eyes to the eldest man, gaze as calm as she could make it.
âMy name is Arabella. This is Ellie, and her son. We donât mean any harm, weâre just looking for our companions.â Her gaze once again drifted to the hurt young man, and then to those around him.
He seemed to be bleeding nowâŚ
AndâŚno one was helping him.
A horrid thought crossed her mind, making her stomach tighten.
HadâŚhad these people done this to him?
She bit the inside of her cheek. No, she didnât know who this person wasâŚbut no one deserved to suffer like thatâŚ
She glanced back at Ellie, whose eyes were wide. They met eyes, and seemingly exchanged thoughts, because the young blonde gave a subtle nod.
Ara turned her attention back to the group, eyes wary. Sheâd have to approach the subject gentlyâŚ
âI see that one of you is injuredâŚmay we help?â She ventured.
(Leo might recognize Araâs name idk)
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 6:13 pm #128642@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings
Corvina
The red creature was grinning now. He tossed the stick to the girl beside him, who fumbled with it for a moment, before holding it up like a torch.
âOh, wait, no. Donât go. I wouldnât do that.â
Corvina raised a brow, as did blue-skin, though she seemed more agitated then anything.
âLook. I wonât hurt you unless you try to hurt us.â The one-eyed creature, ah, male, held up his hands for her to see. As if that made her at ease. âWhereâd you come from? Howâd you sneak up on us like that?â
Corvina quirked her lips, crossing her arms. So the creature was curious, that was it.
Well, she wasnât very well going to start spilling her life story to a bunch of strangers.
âHow did I get here? Like all of you I suppose.â She said, âBut as for sneaking up on youâŚI donât have to tell you anything.â
Blue-skin didnât seem too pleased with that. Her eyes narrowed into slits, fists falling to her side, fire in her gaze.
âYou will tell us whatever we wish.â She spoke, full of authority.
Corvina glared at her, poking her tongue into her. She stifled a laugh.
âUh-huh. I donât think so.â
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 6:19 pm #128644@freedomwriter76 ikr!!! U wanna RP again as Riker? Or u can RP as Hans or fin or whoever and have November and then rejoin the group.
im curious to see the othersâ reactionsâŚ
hey @elishavet-pidyon is @koshka busy? Itâs fine if she is I was just wondering đ I knew u were on earlier
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#ProtectSebJanuary 9, 2023 at 6:19 pm #128645@godlyfantasy12 Lol did Corvina actually stick her tongue out at Serin? đ¤Ł
@loopylin @princesachronicle22Layson watches the three converse tensely over the dark haired girls appearance.
“Well we’re moving on.” Layson says, gesturing down the hall. “Is there something you want? Or should we be on our way?”
Oh I hope we can just move on without her…
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