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January 7, 2023 at 10:09 pm #128333
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22
Dante
A soft cool breeze swept down the hall. Dante shivered. He hated the cold. Reaching into his pocket with his left hand, he pulled out his lighter. He flicked it on. It didn’t provide hardly any heat, but he was bored. Another breeze blew through the hall, snuffing out the flame. The hair stood up on Dante’s neck and he started to feel uneasy. The darkness seemed to grow around him and the torchlight ahead seemed to grow more distant.
He shoved his fear down with a grunt and flicked his lighter back on. It flickered for a moment and then went out. Goosebumps spread down his arms.
We’re being watched. He thought. He didn’t know why, but he knew.
He acted quickly.
He snatched the stick from Serin, saying “Sorry, Princess.” He then pulled a small vial of of liquid and poured it on the stick. Then he flicked on his lighter and the end of the stick burst into flames. He waved the new torch behind them, revealing whatever was in the darkness.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 10:10 pm #128334Lol Serin’s gonna be so mad
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 10:22 pm #128335@loopylin BRUH NOT HER STIIIICK!!!!! XD XD @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings
Corvina
The smaller, red creature spun around, the stick he held now burning with flames.
Corvina scowled, the shadows around her shuddering.
They shouldn’t have been affected…shouldn’t have moved…
But…they did.
The shadows dispersed from around Corvina, dissipating in a sizzle, and Corvina shuddered, feeling suddenly exposed, her eyes widening.
She grit her teeth, fists clenched as the blue skinned girl reeled on the red creature, eyes blazing, but then focused on her.
The others turned their attention to her as well, each with their own reactions.
Corvina’s heart shuddered, but she stood her ground. If all else failed, she’d just shift and fly away…
No big deal….
But…
Why had her shadows failed her? Why…why had they left so easily?
“Because…the boy has weakened you.” The voice whispered in her head.
She swallowed, eyes narrowing, realizing…
It had been the fire…
The memory…
She stared at the flames still held before her, in the hands of the smaller creature. His one eye glared at her, and then he smirked. She glowered, adjusting her stance, preparing to fight, If need be.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 10:50 pm #128340Yes I totally understand! Like on here it’s so easy and I’m writing super fast, but when I write my books I’ll stare at the page for like 2 hours before getting a sentance down Xd
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 10:52 pm #128341@princesachronicle22 YES FR!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 10:56 pm #128342Lol Serin’s gonna be so mad
Haha, probably XD, seriously though, Dante and my oc Kun’en would be such good friends XD
BRUH NOT HER STIIIICK!!!!! XD XD
Lol, yep
Also those two RPs tied together so well and I loved it
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 8, 2023 at 2:04 pm #128381@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c anyone on?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 8, 2023 at 2:05 pm #128382January 8, 2023 at 2:12 pm #128383@GodlyFantasy12 @loopylin @princesachronicle22
Layson and Maylee
Layson looks back again, noticing a cool breeze. He furrows his eyebrows, looking towards the window.
It’s not coming from there.
Maylee seems to notice, shifting slightly in his arms.
“Sorry, Princess.”
Layson looks over as Dante who takes Serins stick. He stiffens slightly at the sight. Dante pours a liquid onto the stick and lights it with his lighter. The air fills with a warm glow, but the cool breeze remains. Maylee shivers slightly, and Layson gives her a gentle squeeze. Dante marches forwards ahead of the group, Layson and Serin close behind.A dark figure apears out of the shadows.
“Hello?”
Layson shouts into the darkness, but quickly comes back to the rest of the group.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 8, 2023 at 2:41 pm #128385Dante marches forwards ahead of the group, Layson and Serin close behind
I think Corvina is behind them actually, not that it matters that much
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 8, 2023 at 2:43 pm #128386@mineralizedwritings ok then! Just checking 🙂 And that’s a pretty cool idea.
@loopylin @theloonyone Anybody wanna RP?Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 8, 2023 at 2:44 pm #128387@loopylin actually I also imagined her in front of them but yea it doesn’t matter that much lol
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 8, 2023 at 2:51 pm #128392lol ok it’s confusing with so many writers on one story
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 8, 2023 at 2:53 pm #128393Are we having Easton and Aurivis fight?
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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