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January 7, 2023 at 6:05 pm #128250
@princesachronicle22 That is really cool!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 7, 2023 at 6:26 pm #128256@loopylin @theloonyone @whoever-else
I was reading some of the old RP’s and realized part of Easton’s motivation was to kill the dragon. And I realize it’s kinda Aurivis’s plan to kill Easton, so…I wonder if they can come across each other somehow? He is @mineralizedwritings ‘s character but she (you are a girl right mineral? Kinda hard to keep track when everyone has usernames) said anyone can write him if they want.
We don’t have to do that now but it’s a good idea if anything gets boring…I think all our charries are just standing in the rain right now.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 7, 2023 at 6:48 pm #128263@koshka @freedomwriter76
November
“November!”
November’s fingers reached along the cold stone floor, grasping at nothing. His breaths hitched with every intake of air, sending pain riveting down his chest.
“November?! Plea-se-…”
His eyes opened halfway, the world around him blurry, eyes stinging. Someone…someone was speaking…
Who…who had stayed…?
“Say…something!”
He licked his lips, mouth dry, unable to do as requested. He raised his eyes slightly, two blurred figures coming into view.
He opened his mouth again, eyes wide now, heart drumming in his ears.
Who…?
Something touched the back of his head gently, making him tense. His body froze, fear twisting his nerves.
“Oh….Novembré,” an accented voice cut through the fog, making his senses relax slightly.
Zlatan…
His vision cleared slightly, able to now recognize the eyes of both men, hovering over him.
Something cool ran down his throat, calming the burning inside. And then, it was gone, though he wished for more.
He watched with heavy lids as Zlatan fumbled with something at his side, and then turned to the other man…
Riker…
“Spread this….worst….”
November couldn’t catch everything he said, his ears ringing, but soon he could feel something cool being rubbed on his arms and palms. A groan escaped his lips as his shoulders relaxed.
A few moments passed as Riker continued to place whatever salve Zlatan had given on November’s skin.
November turned his head then winced at the sudden slight sting it brought. He must’ve burnt his neck too…
“Why….w-why did…did you stay….?”
“Zat question should not even be asked,” Zlatan said, eyes narrowing, but still holding their softness.
Riker returned the same look, though his face was much paler, and his eyes…wider. Like…
No, November shook the thought away.
“Of course we weren’t going to leave you.” Riker said, finishing up his chore and handing what looked to be a vial back to Zlatan.
“B…But…I could’ve…I almost…” November didn’t finish. He felt as Riker gently lifted the ginger’s head, pulling it into his lap. And, November couldn’t help but lean into the embrace, feeling a different warmth run through him. Different from the ones the flames had just poured out.
UGH that was so sweet to write.
I seriously Love how November has a Brother relationship with Zlatan and Vulkasin, and a Father/Son relationship with Riker 😭 like fr!!
Also…in case u were wondering Freedom, the thought November had about how Riker looked, but he chased it out of his head was “Maybe that’s how a father would look About their child” but November chased it out because it was silly and he wouldn’t even know truly what that would be like anyway 😭 ❤️
ugh these relationships kill me in the feels
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 6:51 pm #128265@esther-c so Grimm isn’t the type to just start a fight at all. He’s really calm and sensible and practical actually (seems to be the opposite of Everton 🤣)
BUT NYX would, however he’s hurt and kinda not doing well.
Jocelyn is the fun upbeat one who wouldn’t UNLESS one of her friends was threatened (ESPECIALLY NYX. She uhh nearly killed a dude in the RP earlier cuz he’s the one who did this to Nyx)
BUT Jocelyn would totally be willing to try and make friends with Ty, or get Ty, Easton and Grimm to become friends. Maybe it works or maybe it backfires idk XD
GASP
maybe the girls make a scheme to get the boys to become friends 🤣
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 6:53 pm #128266@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @princesachronicle22
Heey…so I just read minerals last RP….and realized the very last sentence where Layson looks into the shadows…
Makes a really awesome entry for a Charrie of mine if y’all would want to meet her/let me join ur group!
Her name is Corvina and she’s been following November for the past while, but now she’s disappeared from him and decides to venture out
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 6:58 pm #128267January 7, 2023 at 7:03 pm #128269Sure! I’ll add a bit where he see’s Corvina and runs back to investigate if you want her to join!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 7, 2023 at 7:04 pm #128270BUT Jocelyn would totally be willing to try and make friends with Ty, or get Ty, Easton and Grimm to become friends. Maybe it works or maybe it backfires idk XD
GASP
maybe the girls make a scheme to get the boys to become friends 🤣
*gasps as well* What great ideas!! I can’t RP right now, but you can start if you want! 🙂
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 7, 2023 at 7:07 pm #128271yeah! Good idea! I’d love to write Aurivis battling someone
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 7:08 pm #128272January 7, 2023 at 7:27 pm #128273@mineralizedwritings well actually what he said just about looking in the shadows works perfectly because she had Shadow Elf blood and has shadow abilities so she can hide in the shadows/control shadows.
Also I can tell ya rn her and Serin are probably gonna clash XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 7:37 pm #128276@freedomwriter76 u on?
Jocelyn
“Find anything?” Corie yelled across the room. Both Lyn and Ami shook their heads.
“No, you?” Lyn replied. Corie sighed, returning to the group with a sad shake, “no.”
“That was a bust,” Ami said.
“Well, we’re doing better then they are at least,” Corie whispered, poking her finger towards Easton and Ty, who were still trying to get Aloth to help.
When they weren’t bickering between themselves.
Amidala squeaked a laugh, hiding it behind her hand. Lyn grinned, leaning against one of the walls. She’d set her darling Nyx down in a comfortable nook, swaddled in his fabrics to rest.
To her surprise…he’d gone fast to sleep, reminding her once more just how serious the situation really was.
“Ah, at least yours seems to be doing pretty well…” Amidala said, looking over Jocelyn’s shoulder at Grimm, who was busy inspecting one of the doors, trying to figure out how to get it open.
Lyn smiled. “He’s usually pretty focused. Though…sometimes a bit too focused.”
Then again…in this situation, she was thankful to have him by her side…
Without Grimm…she wasn’t entirely sure what she’d do…
While thinking, the dark-haired young man looked her way, eyes narrowed. He called her over.
“Yea?” She yelled, instead of coming to him. He sighed, coming to her and the other girls instead.
“I’ve been thinking,” he began.
“Isn’t that all you do?” Lyn teased.
Grimm ignored her, “This might go quicker if I shift.”
“Mm, true.”
“But…the last people I did that in front of, well…”
Lyn chuckled, “You are pretty intimidating. Even not in that form.”
Corie and Amidala were glancing at each other confused. Lyn smiled at them, and then turned back to Grimm. “It’s alright, I’ve got your back.” She turned back to the girls. “Just letting you both know…don’t be freaked out, alright?”
Grimm crossed his arms, narrowing his eyes at the girls, and then over his shoulders at the young men still arguing. He let out a breath and then nodded.
Not more then a few seconds passed before, standing right in front of them, where Grimm used to be, a beautiful, grey wolf stood with silver markings etched on his face and limbs.
The girls shrieked.
And the boys…jumped into action.
(I’ll let you RP real quick, I’m sure you’ll have reactions XD)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 8:28 pm #128289I know I’ve already said this, but Maylee is so cute 💕
She so is!!!!
Also @mineralizedwritings is it okay that Serin called her Little Bloom? I wanted to give her a flower nickname but wasn’t sure if you would like it or not XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 8:32 pm #128292Sure! XD
Honestly just do whatever Serin would call her in story, If Layson thought it was weird he’d let her know by making a face at her lol.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 7, 2023 at 8:39 pm #128295Yasss! Corvina should totally join!!!!!
well actually what he said just about looking in the shadows works perfectly because she had Shadow Elf blood and has shadow abilities so she can hide in the shadows/control shadows.
Wow! that is sooo cool!!! I love it!!!!
November didn’t finish. He felt as Riker gently lifted the ginger’s head, pulling it into his lap. And, November couldn’t help but lean into the embrace, feeling a different warmth run through him. Different from the ones the flames had just poured out.
Ahhhhh that is sooooo sweeeeet!!!!!! Your last several Rps have totally made me want to bawl my eyes out XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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