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January 7, 2023 at 12:48 pm #128201
Just read it, gahhhh, just thinking of it makes me sad, š
I’m so emotional sometimes XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 3:07 pm #128207@theloonyone @loopylin That’s a good idea. I’ll hold off RP-ing till then, I guess.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 7, 2023 at 3:10 pm #128210@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
SERIN
She straightened out of her bend, it looked as though the group had taken the apology and greeting well. All except Dante, anyway. He seemed almost dissapointed. “It’s fine.” The boy muttered before looking up at Layson. “Itās getting cold in here, and you guys are wet. We should probably keep moving.ā
Layson’s face had softened, and he said to Serin. āI can see why that may have offended you. In my world, and I suppose Dante and Ellieās too, we shake the other persons hand as a greeting.ā She nodded. While it seemed Dante had been trying to rile her at least slightly, the gesture had just been part of his introducing himself.
Seeming to agree with Dante Layson said next, āShould we uhā¦ look around for a warmer spot I suppose?ā He eyed the rain drenched floor and broken window as Dante had.
It seemed both men had the right idea. While Serin’s body was built to withstand extremeĀ temperatures while swimming, her preferance lied with the warm and humid air of Pelgar. Not to mention that the others might not have her same body tempature regulation.
Suddenly the small girl Maylee blurted, āWhy is your skin blue?ā She leaned forward in her father’s arms.
Serin blinked at her, surprised at the random question. “Mayleeā¦ please donātāā Layson turned towards Serin. āIām really sorry, you donāt have to answer that.ā He sighs.
She waved the concern away with a small flick of her wrist. She appreciated the child’s asking. Most of her students in spear training weren’t bold enough to speak to her about anything, they always prefered to ask Kun’en when they did combined classes.
Serin moved closer to the girl, bending slightly so she was more at her eye level. “Well, Little Bloom,” She began. “I am decended from a people who lived entirely underwater. In fact some of my kind still do.” It was only because that half had been the ones to drive them out of the ocean in the first place. It had been generations ago, but Serin knew how to hold a grudge.
They could still breath water as well as air, and most of the upper class prefered to stay immersed in the water within Depths hands, the large outcropping on which Pelgar was built. Serin liked the water, but she enjoyed the air just as much, and didn’t understand their aversion. She figured that it was mostly a political statment of seperating the rich and poor. When she was crowned queen she was determined to fix that.
“We are traditionally night hunters.” She continued. “And when the water glows such a bright blue at night time, it makes it especially hard to see us when our skin is like this.” She raised back to her normal height. “It is to blend in.” Serin finished.
Looking up at Layson and Dante, she said “I agree that we should move from this spot.”
I mentioned some stuff about Pelgar’s structure but feel like it was sorta confusing so if y’all want I can post a picture I drew of it š
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 3:18 pm #128214@freedomwriter76Ā @godlyfantasy12
I’m currently sitting in on a quiz, so I have a minute. I don’t know if I’ll get another chance today, and I’ll be off and on for the next couple weeks, so maybe RP as you like and I’ll try to pop in when I can? Unless one of my charies need to respond, then like, triple tag me or something.*Shrug* I don’t know.
Zlatan
The flames were gone. November had fallen, curled on the floor. Riker knelt beside him, tears sliding down his face.
Zlatan dropped beside him, digging in his pack for his water flask. He held it to the young man’s lips, his heart sliding back into place as he realized November was awake.
“Oh, NovembrĆ©…” The burns were dark red and blistering. November’s blue eyes were clouded in pain. Zlatan replaced the flask and handed Riker his box of herbal honey. “Spread this over the worst places.”
(honey was not only a medieval wound treatment, but is used in modern burn hospitals too. It relieves pain and speeds up healing.)
Vulkasin
He smothered a grin. The group behind him were just keeping up with his pace, although he was ‘only walking’. Maybe it was petty, but something about that officer just begged a little fun. He paused at the top of the stairwell, more to listen for whatever was happening below than for his followers. And to enjoy Hans’ muttered threats.
He smoothed away another trace of a smile and started down the corridor at a slightly calmer stride. No use in getting to far ahead of his brother, although perhaps he should keep this Hans away from the group below for just a little bit longer.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkJanuary 7, 2023 at 3:26 pm #128216All except Dante, anyway. He seemed almost disappointed
Hehe. Yeah, sorry. Dante knows how to deal with people being mad at him because he kinda stirs up chaos wherever he goes. However, he has never had anyone apologize to him really for anything, so he has no idea how to respond.
I mentioned some stuff about Pelgarās structure but feel like it was sorta confusing so if yāall want I can post a picture I drew of it š
Yeah! Iād love to see that!
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 3:28 pm #128217@princesachronicle22 Ooh, even though you’re not part of my RP your world sounds really cool!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 7, 2023 at 3:37 pm #128220Xd I figured it was something like that, it makes sense and I couldn’t help laughing while I read your last Rp about him
though sad no ones really apologized to him before. He’s an intruiging character and I’m excited to see how he develops!
Yeah I’ll show you!
@keilah
Thanks!Ā Her world Ohven is part of a big project I’m working on and I’ve had so much fun developing it!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 3:51 pm #128221@mineralizedwritings @loopylin (and anyone else who wants to see!)
Oookay, so this is Pelgar where my race the Pelagrkine’s live (Aka Serin’s home). So originally they lived in the ocean. But then a civil war broke out and they split into two seperate tribes, one half was drivin on land. They found refuge in a strange anomoly of land, a large outcropping with a gyser at the foot of it, making a bowl of water suspended above the ocean. Their belief is that their deity He of the Depths, provided it for them, and since the strange outcropping resembles a pair of cupped hands they sometimes call it Depths Hands. They built large towers, but since they had originally come from the water, the higher classes prefered to stay below in the water, creating a kind of reverse heirachy system. Of course some events are still held above water and the king has a throne above and below the water.
Military training is also above and below, they have seperate methods for both. But in all fighting, the military is all made of a pairs of one male and one female units. The men have bulkier armor made for defense and heavy attacks while the girls have light armor made for swiftness and nimbleness.
So this is why their are two High Generals, they’re a military unit together.
Lol, sorry I got excited to explain stuff XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 3:55 pm #128222@princesachronicle22 That is really cool!! Do you have a picture of the Pelgarkine species you can show us?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 7, 2023 at 3:58 pm #128223@keilah
Thank you! I only have one of Serin that I’ve already shared but I can show it again! I wanna do one with their armor soon, and some of Serin’s formal wear that I had imagined for a scene in the book
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 4:19 pm #128224Woah, your world building is so extensive! That’s really cool, and I love the lore behind it all. If you do those other drawings of her I would love to see them!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 7, 2023 at 4:23 pm #128225Hehe, yes I love worldbuilding if you couldn’t tell XD And yeah I’ll definatley share them when they’re drawn!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 4:33 pm #128227@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings I know Iāve already said this, but Maylee is so cute š
DanteĀ and EllieĀ
āI agree that we should move from this spot.ā
Dante held back a laugh. He had never heard anyone speak as formally as Serin did. He was more used to the crude, common slang used by the people on his planet.
āLetās go this way. I think I can see torch light.ā Ellie said. Dante waited to let Ellie and Serin walk in front, and then walked behind them next to Layson and Maylee.
Ellie looked up at Serin as they walked and timidly asked, āHave you possibly seen a girl who looks a lot like me, but wearing yellow?ā
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 4:34 pm #128228:O Ā That looks so cool! I love your world building
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 7, 2023 at 5:31 pm #128238@loopylin Thanks! I love writing those two XD
@princesachonicle22
“Very cool.” Maylee nods seriously at Serin’s explanation, despite not understanding it.
Ya’ll know who she got that from? XD
Ellie looks up at Serin as they walk and timidly asks, āHave you possibly seen a girl who looks a lot like me, but wearing yellow?ā
Layson looks behind them briefly, but no movement shows in the darkness.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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