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January 6, 2023 at 6:23 pm #128145
@theloonyone oh! I have an idea. Milo could get a text from Cammie about the wind thing and then they can go find that group to make sure they’re ok. @keilah-h
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 6, 2023 at 6:25 pm #128146“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 6, 2023 at 8:09 pm #128153@esther-c @koshka @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 anyone here?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 8:30 pm #128157can I just say I LOVE SERIN AND HER CHARACTER/WORLD AND EVERYTHING!! I am already invested in this world and people u have created and it is so intriguing!! I love the greeting you have created and it’s just…Ah so awesome!
Awww! Thanks! I’m glad you like her and Pelgar’s culture! I haven’t started the book she’s in yet (she has a plot view but isn’t the main character) but I’ve had a lot of fun developing everything! It was one of my first book ideas and what inspired this huge universe thingy so I really want to start writing it, I just have less plot ideas than culture and race ideas for it XD
Funny story XD. I had the idea for Pelgar’s architecture from a sheet I put over my pet bird’s cage once. Such random insperation XD
Serin is really cool, by the way. I love how you have a different cultural greeting for her people.
Thank you! I love Dante! And Ellie too, Serin and her totally need to talk weapons together! You said she was an expert because she and Eddie are bounty hunters right? Because that’s pretty cool 😀
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 6, 2023 at 8:41 pm #128158Ok… I think this will be fun. I want them to try to figure out how to get out. And having all of them try to work together… especially with Aloth “trying to help”… man, this will be interesting! XD
(And i have no idea how the doors closed. XD)Haha! An escape room sounds so fun! Don’t mind me outside a window spying on all your charries XD
NOVEMBER!!!! I don’t care if he’s on fire I’m hugging him anyway!!! And Riker <3 wait is he koshka’s charrie?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 6, 2023 at 8:50 pm #128159@freedomwriter76
Also, like, I totally have this crossover fic idea in my head where some of my charries meet the Avengers, and I’m just laughing thinking about all the funny things that could happen.
Oh my gosh!! That would be so awesome!! I would totally read that XDXD!!
Now I really want to do something like that with my charries and maybe Lord of the Rings, Avengers, or maybe charries from another book series!! That would be awesome XD!!That was soooo random. XD XD XD XD XD
LOL!! I think us authors are pretty much made of randomness XDXD.
#HugRikerSquad
January 6, 2023 at 8:53 pm #128160NOVEMBER!!!! I don’t care if he’s on fire I’m hugging him anyway!!! And Riker <3 wait is he koshka’s charrie?
IKR!?!? He is so precious 😭😭😭<3<3!!! And Riker is too!!! Uh, no, Riker is @freedomwriter76 ‘s charrie. Vulka and Zlati are @koshka ‘s charries, and November is @godlyfantasy12 ‘s.
I Love them all so much!!!!!!!!! <3 <3#HugRikerSquad
January 6, 2023 at 9:53 pm #128165IKR!?!? He is so precious 😭😭😭<3<3!!! And Riker is too!!! Uh, no, Riker is @freedomwriter76 ‘s charrie. Vulka and Zlati are @koshka ‘s charries, and November is @godlyfantasy12 ‘s.
I Love them all so much!!!!!!!!! <3 <3Ooh okay! It’s hard to keep track sometimes XD
LOL!! I think us authors are pretty much made of randomness XDXD.
Hahaha! Lol, this will be my life’s quote XD
And yes @freedomwriter76 an avengers crossover sounds totally epic! XD. you should totally do that, I am in full support of this idea 😀
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 12:44 am #128172@princesachronicle22 @loopylin
Layson and Maylee
Layson watches, brow furrowed, as Serin bows, some form of greeting from her world. He nods at her, accepting her apology.
“I can see why that may have offended you. In my world, and I suppose Dante and Ellie’s too, we shake the other persons hand as a greeting.” Layson says, softening slightly.
“Should we uh… look around for a warmer spot I suppose?” Layson looks over at the broken window, rain pelting through sideways from the strong wind gusts.
“Why is your skin blue?” Maylee blurts, leaning towards Serin from Layson’s arms.
“Maylee… please don’t–” Layson turns towards Serin. “I’m really sorry, you don’t have to answer that.” he sighs.
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 7, 2023 at 1:40 am #128176@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
the whole Pax and Wolfgang thing is so cute 😭😭😭
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 7, 2023 at 1:50 am #128178@mineralozedwritings IKR!!! ❤️😭
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 1:57 am #128179@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Paxton
Paxton returned his attention back to Wolfgang, a smile plastered on his face. He peeked over his shoulder, brows furrowing, then tapped the older boy on the shoulder.
“W-Where’s the o-o-others?”
Luna
Luna shook Joshua’s hand, grinning. The little girl standing beside him, introduced as Camille, gasped, eyes wide.
“Are you a fairy?”
Luna bit her lips, a laughing smile peeking through. Whatever worlds the others came from must have been quite different for Luna to be mistaken for a Fae!
Well…unless they still perhaps considered Dryads or Pixies as Fae, which…they were technically still Faer Folk…
But, Luna had no wings, and…besides it was just…strange to keep getting mistaken for a Fae.
She giggled, shaking her head. The little girl’s eyes dimmed slightly, face flushing a bit of pink, obviously a tad embarrassed.
Luna leaned down, “I’m an elf!”
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 7, 2023 at 10:21 am #128182Everton
Everton jumped out of his seat and ran to Aloth until he was only a few feet away. “You lied to us,” he said through clenched teeth.
“Ev!” Ami cried out. “He didn’t mean to.”
Aloth motioned towards Ami. “Listen to the girl.”
Ev glanced at Ami and back at Aloth. He looked him in the eye, wanting to say so much more, but the look on Ami’s face forced him not to say another word.
He slowly walked back to the table, aware that everyone was watching him. “Grimm’s right. We need to get out of here.”
Ev looked around. He pointed to a window high on the wall. “If we could get up there and break it, we could get out.”
Ty shook his head. “First of all, we have nothing to break it with.”
“We could use your knife,” Ev suggested. Ty didn’t think so. He protectively placed a hand over it. Ev rolled his eyes.
Ty cleared his throat. “Secondly, it’s probably forty feet off the ground. The only one who’d be close to surviving is me.”
Ev grunted, agitated that Ty thought so. He could easily survive. He had climbed out of windows multiple times before… just maybe not forty feet off the ground. He bit his lip and glanced at the others. “What do you all think?”
“Just look for a way out,” Grimm said, already walking around. Ev and Ami followed suit, just on the other side of the room.
Everyone did the same, looking for something but not quite sure what.
Tyrone
I slowly walked around the room, checking the walls for loose bricks and looking in corners for maybe a hidden key. As the rest of us exhaustively searched, Aloth sat down at the table and helped himself to more food.
I stopped and looked at him. “You gonna help at all?”
He just shrugged. Then he made eye contact with me. I quickly looked away.
“You feel betrayed… again…” Aloth said, eyeing me.
I clenched my fists. It bothered me that almost all of my tribe could read minds… except me. I had never practiced. And I would never bring myself so low as to ask Corie or even a teacher for help. I’d survived this long without using my gift… I could survive longer.
I took a few steps closer. “You listen,” I said, pointing a finger at him. “If you know something and won’t tell us I will—”
Aloth held up a hand. “Woah… slow down! I promise you I don’t know anything. Don’t you trust me?”
I grunted and started searching again. Of course I didn’t. Why would he ever assume that? We all searched in silence, exchanged a few words ever now and then. I noticed Corie, Amidala, and Jocelyn were all walking together and talking like good friends.
At least Corie was able to make… and keep… friends. Friends weren’t my strong suit. Why waste time in relationships that were sure to end?
Ok… after all that I’m done. Lol. I don’t know what else to do. XD
Maybe one of your charries could like start a little quarrel. (And it doesn’t have to be just between them and Aloth…) (Idk. Whatever you wanna do 😉)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 7, 2023 at 10:37 am #128185At least Corie was able to make… and keep… friends. Friends weren’t my strong suit. Why waste time in relationships that were sure to end?
Awww, poor Ty! *dabs watery eyes*
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 7, 2023 at 10:45 am #128187I know!! My poor Ty!! 🙁
I do have a sad scene from the book I can share if you’re interested…
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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