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January 6, 2023 at 5:14 pm #128125
My poor November has quite a go of it in my series….as does Corvina
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 5:16 pm #128128It’s…a good thing Ara and Ellie left the mirror when they did…
Ara would be heartbroken to see November like this….
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 5:19 pm #128130For some reason I didn’t get notified when you had replied. (Or maybe I did and forgot about it… er… 😅) XD
Corie
We walked along down the hall. When would we ever reach food? As soon as the question popped into my head, the luscious smell of seasoned meat reached my nose. I cocked my head. Aloth seemed to notice. He smirked.
All of us seemed to pick up our pace at the smell filling our noses. Finally, we reached a large door. I pushed through it first to reveal a long banquet table stacked with all kinds of food: seasoned turkey, goose, and mutton; exotics fruits; an endless number of luscious side dishes; and best of all, dessert.
I gasped and ran to the table. I slowly started walking around it, staring at the food. The others had already rushed to their seats and began shoving food down their throats. I happily joined them. We ate in silence. Aloth seemed satisfied at how eagerly we ate.
Both Ty and I eyed him the whole time. After every bite, Ty would glance up at Aloth. All of us slowed down the rate of our eating as we became full with the delicious meal. I was the only one to speak. “Where did all this food come from?”
Aloth shrugged. “Why should you care?”
I furrowed my brow. Then a terrible, terrible thought came to mind: what if he had poisoned the food? But no… where would the poison come from?
Probably after reading my thoughts, Aloth picked up a leg of turkey and took a bite out of it. He raised his eyebrows at me. “See?” He said.
I sighed. Maybe there was no poison after all. I need to relax, I thought. But as soon as I thought it, the doors to the room slammed shut. We all jumped. Ty hopped out of his seat and ran up to Aloth, pulling out his knife. “What did you do?” He commanded.
Aloth threw his hands above his head. “I didn’t do anything!”
As Ty kept Aloth at knifepoint, I ran to the doors and tried to open them.
Locked.
I looked back at Ty with worry.
We were trapped in a room with our greatest enemy.
Ok… I think this will be fun. I want them to try to figure out how to get out. And having all of them try to work together… especially with Aloth “trying to help”… man, this will be interesting! XD
(And i have no idea how the doors closed. XD)Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 6, 2023 at 5:46 pm #128133@esther-c oooh boy, Nyx is not gonna be happy
Grimm
“Nyx…you need to eat,” Jocelyn said, prodding the creature as they sat at the table.
The kit shook his head defiantly, nose high in the air. “I refuse to eat anything here. Not after being led here by…this….madman.” He glared at Aloth.
Grimm was grateful again that the man couldn’t hear the kit. Grimm let out a sigh, and then placed a hand on Lyn’s shoulder.
“Don’t worry. He’ll eat.” Grimm said.
Though…he had to admit he too had his doubts about this man, and the food, and it took him a while-and quite of a bit of smelling and testing the food-before he ate it, or let Lyn eat any of it.
But once he did, he had to admit it tasted delicious.
Lyn must’ve agreed with how quickly she was devouring it all, manners chucked to the wind. Not that that was anything new.
Nyx watched them all with a glare, his stomach rumbling. He growled low, fur ruffling. He muttered under his breath and then huffed, staring at the food before him, watching as others ate.
Grimm glanced at him, raised a brow, then returned to his eating.
Lyn, however, couldn’t help taunting her darling. “Come on, Nyx. It’s reeeeaally good!”
Nyx scowled. He looked away, shoulders scruffing. His stomach growled again and he hissed at it.
“Traitor…” he whispered, staring at his stomach.
But…after a few minutes…Nyx slowly made his way over to where Lyn sat, paws gently padding on the table. He sat down, ears low and head hanging.
No one said a word, but they couldn’t help but glance his direction as the kit slowly sniffed a piece of meat in front of him, and then….
Took a bite.
After a few seconds, obviously being pleased, Nyx began to eat, and also conversate, returning to his normal self.
Though, still a bit more agitated then usual, which was to be expected of the injured animal.
Grimm couldn’t help the small smile on his face. He was thankful the stubborn kit had finally relented.
Lyn beamed beside him.
And then…
The doors had slammed shut.
And…they were right back where they started.
“I told you we couldn’t trust him! You!” Nyx hissed, now standing, hackles raised. He glared at Grimm, eyes filled with fire. “This is all your fault! You should never have trusted him!”
“Nyx, calm down! If we hadn’t followed him we wouldn’t have been able to eat. Even you have to admit the food was good.” Jocelyn said.
Nyx shook his head, ears and tails twitching. “Not worth getting trapped with a bunch of strangers! Who knows what they’re capable of!” He glared at Aloth, and then Ty and Corie. His gaze moved to Everton and Amidala next.
“Nyx. You’re injured, and you’re tired,” Grimm spoke cooly, standing from his seat, but making sure to keep an eye on Aloth, who seemed curious as to why they were speaking to an animal. “You need to calm down.”
“I’ll calm down when you start listening to common sense, Wolfboy!” Nyx’s eyes flared, canines bared.
“Nyx…” Lyn cooed. She slowly approached the animal, hand outstretched. “Take it easy, love. You’re gonna hurt yourself!”
Nyx’s breath hitched, wide eyes shaking. He winced, glancing down at his torso, noticing the faint splotches of red forming on the bandages. His ears lowered, eyes softening. Slowly, his shoulders relaxed and he frowned, backing away slightly, like a scared animal.
Lyn’s eyes widened. “Nyx…Oh…” She reached out and gently picked him up, bringing him to her face. The kit was shivering. She looked at Grimm, face pale.
Grimm looked around, then ripped a piece of fabric that was hanging from a wall.
“Here, wrap him in this.” He handed it to Lyn and she did so, swaddling him like a baby.
The kit’s eyes glazed over.
“Stupid…fussing…I-m fine…”
Lyn rocked him, a small smile on her lips. “Yea…yea…” She bit her lip, looking at Grimm once again.
Grimm’s fists clenched.
These bandages weren’t enough. The kit needed real help.
Grimm turned to the others.
“We need to get out of this place. And then…if we wish, we can all go our separate ways. It’s up to you. But for now, we’re going to have to work together.” He pointed his gaze at Aloth, who was still smirking, despite the obvious pain of the small creature in the group. “All of us.”
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 5:49 pm #128134Bruh my RPs are sooo long sometimes 🤣
@freedomwriter76 @koshka one of y’all wanna go?
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings same here 😊 anyone of y’all wanna go?#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 5:53 pm #128135Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Mine are long sometimes too. XD
Uhm…I was waiting to see if @koshka was going to have Zlatan being there or not before I RP’ed again as Riker. 🙂
Also, like, I totally have this crossover fic idea in my head where some of my charries meet the Avengers, and I’m just laughing thinking about all the funny things that could happen.
That was soooo random. XD XD XD XD XD
January 6, 2023 at 5:54 pm #128136@freedomwriter76 oh girl that’s totally understandable because I luv imagining if my charries met the KOTLC charries XD XD
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 5:55 pm #128137I don’t know if @koshka is on anymore. She was last on an hour ago….
idk when u have to get off 😅 Ik ur busy with school 😊 and Koshka is busy with Bible quizzing
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 6:00 pm #128138Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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oh girl that’s totally understandable because I luv imagining if my charries met the KOTLC charries XD XD
It’s just too much fun to imagine. XD XD XD
I feel like there will be distrust between Steve/Riker at first, lol.
I get off around 6-8 PM CST, most of the time, but it really depends on the day. I wasn’t on much today bc school lasted until almost 2 PM and I really wanted to get it done and not get distracted. 😅 (Mostly the Math taking forever…took, like, an hour!)
I can go on ahead and do a quick RP as Riker reacting to what just happened, tho, like, just his reaction to it. 😉
January 6, 2023 at 6:02 pm #128139@freedomwriter76 gotcha. Yea and then if @koshka RPs u can RP again if u like 😊
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 6:06 pm #128140Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Riker
November was on fire.
Completely.
But there was a sudden gust of wind, and a voice screamed from behind Riker, “November!”
Riker briskly turned, but no one was there.
And suddenly November hit the floor. He whimpered.
Riker turned back around, just as November curled into a ball.
Riker ran towards him, only one thought running rampant in his head, one word, No. No. No. No. No. No!
“November!” Riker screamed, falling to his knees beside the ginger, but not touching him, knowing it would likely cause him more pain. “November…!? November…? Please…just…say something…” He whispered, feeling a couple tears begin to make their way down his cheeks. “…Please be okay.”
(Uhm…Riker ran away with that one, lol. XD @koshka, you can change whatever you need to in order to include Zlatan if you want him to be there…Riker just ran away with the computer. XD)
January 6, 2023 at 6:06 pm #128141Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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So…it was a bit more than a reaction…XD
January 6, 2023 at 6:08 pm #128142@freedomwriter76 that is totally fine because uh November ran away with the last two 🤣
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 6:09 pm #128143I am seriously wondering how Hans is going to react when they rejoin the others…
How all of them are going to react….
😬
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#ProtectSebJanuary 6, 2023 at 6:16 pm #128144Milo
Milo walked slowly behind Aurivis and Feather as they talked about magic. Magic. He knew there must be something going on for all these people to be stuck in a castle in the middle of nowhere. And, of course, there was the dragon. But magic? It still seemed strange.
A loud clap of thunder shakes (I completely forgot where they are… on top of the castle??) and rain begins to pour down on them. Aurivis unfolded his wing and held it above them as it continued to pour. Milo sighed. First magic and dragons, now rain.
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