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January 5, 2023 at 11:28 am #127906
Don’t worry. He kinda knew it would upset her, too XD
Lol, yeah, she won’t hurt him though. Now if she ever runs into Hans however… I think he’d be in serious trouble XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 5, 2023 at 11:31 am #127907@freedomwriter76 @loopylin
I must say, I love him tho. XD
Same! XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 5, 2023 at 12:13 pm #127910@freedomwriter76 ooh boi….HANS!!! Gotta say he’s made November especially heartbroken but…also especially angry (as angry as my cinnamon roll can get) @koshka
November
November’s face paled considerably as his father’s voice echoed in his head.
“Can’t you ever keep your tongue in check? Always babbling about like some sort of fool. It’s not becoming.”
November’s gaze dropped, heart falling into his chest. He felt a hand on his shoulder and glanced up to see Vulkasin behind him, fire in his eyes, though his expression towards November was soft. Warm.
November forced a small smile, trying his hardest to push back the emotion in his chest, listening as Fin and Hans dueled it out.
Ah…so Hans wasn’t Riker’s commanding officer…
November’s shoulders slightly relaxed at that. He had no control over him. Not anymore.
He…he wouldn’t be able to punish him. To hurt him…
November glanced at Riker, offering a small smile.
And then….
Hans said it…
Why did he have to say it? Why did he have to bring all those memories back…
“…And Franz wouldn’t like to hear about Riker’s insolence, would he, Riker…?”
November’s stomach lurched. Riker’s face flushed, eyes widening slightly. He watched as the man visibly flinched, though maybe no one else saw it. Maybe no one else would’ve known…
But November did….
November remembered…
The last time in the castle…meeting Franz. Talking to Riker about their shared experiences…
Though…his father wasn’t all that physical…like Riker’s was, the hurt was shared.
He watched as Riker glanced at Hans, and then gazed at his shoes, clenching his fists tightly.
Knew exactly what was going through his head.
And…this time, November almost couldn’t stop it.
As the heat spread through his chest, running down into his arms, filling his entire being, he found himself suddenly overcome. His head beaded with sweat as he began to pant, eyes blurring.
“Novembré?” Zlatan looked at him worriedly, eyes wide.
November felt like he was about to explode, the flames bubbling inside. Threatening to come out. Whispering, screaming for him to release them.
He pinched his eyes shut, biting his tongue until it hurt.
No! Stop!
But it wouldn’t leave.
He opened his eyes.
And all he saw was Hans’ dark ones staring back at him.
He couldn’t help it….
Flames burst from his hands, but thankfully this time it wasn’t his entire body that exploded into flame. They just shot from his palms, and engulfed his arms, licking at his face.
“Leave. Riker. Alone!” He cried, hot tears falling down his face. A mix of sadness, for Riker and himself, and…
Pain.
Because…the flames…were hurting him.
Not too severely. But enough to be uncomfortable.
And…he couldn’t stop them.
They spread out from his palms, headed in every direction. November’s eyes widened and he backed away, eyes turning to the twins.
“Go! Y-you need to go!” He cried, knowing he probably wouldn’t be able to bring himself out.
The fire would have its way. It wouldn’t stop until it was finished.
Wether that meant burning everything-and everyone-down.
Or killing him.
The fire wouldn’t end until something gave in.
More tears streamed down his cheeks, evaporating upon impact. “I-I’m sorry. I’m s-so sorry! I-I can’t. I can’t control it!” He shook his head. Backing further away as more flames shot from his arms. Now they licked at his legs, and the burning around him grew. He grit his teeth in pain.
“You need to leave!”
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 12:16 pm #127911@freedomwriter76 I have a feeling when all of this is over either 2 things will happen
1. Hans will think November is a freak/monster
OR 2. Hans will want to take advantage of this ability….
……but idk
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 12:26 pm #127912AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! NOVEMBER!!!! I nearly cried at his utter pain. That was so crazy, ah!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 5, 2023 at 12:27 pm #127913@princesachronicle22 I’m glad u liked it!! My cinnamon bun is a super sweetie 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 12:28 pm #127914Btw if u wanna see some art I’ve done of him and others I’ve posted some in the Art Sharing For All Forum! (Others have posted their art of their charries too!)
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 12:29 pm #127915Yes, he so is!
Oh you drew him? Yes! I’ll have to check that out!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 5, 2023 at 12:46 pm #127924@princesachronicle22 yup! To see all the pics I’ve drawn you’ll have to start on one of the earlier pages of that forum and then keep going cuz they’re sporadically posted 😂 but there’s a lot of great art on that forum!!
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 1:00 pm #127932@princesachronicle22 @loopylin
Dante reaches out to shake Serins hand. She responds by whacking his hand away with her stick.
“You never offer to touch me.” She says, poking him in the chest with her stick.
Layson raises an eyebrow.
Not even a hand shake?
Well she sure thinks she’s special.
“You just keep your stick away from my little girl, ok?” Layson says, picking up Maylee, who had been cowering behind his legs at the sight of the commotion. He gives Dante and Ellie a sympathetic look.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 5, 2023 at 1:01 pm #127933Wow, Serin sure has a hard time making friends XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 5, 2023 at 1:12 pm #127938Wow, Serin sure has a hard time making friends XD
XD, sadly yes, she’s super intense and few can really handle her. A lot of her character arc is realizing this and softening some of her edges
Most of her anger in this case was because she saw it as an offense to her culture and because Dante reminded her so much of Kun’en. Kun’en upsets her because she sees him as constantly mocking her personal pain of being both a princess and general of the army, constantly bearing that weight.
Once you’ve earned her loyalty though, she’ll protect you with her life, again intense XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 5, 2023 at 1:34 pm #127939@freedomwriter76 wanna go?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 2:44 pm #127958@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @koshka anyone on?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 5, 2023 at 2:46 pm #127961@godlyfanasty12
I think we are waiting for freedoms charries right? Idk maybe I’m getting lost in here XD
I’m half on… I should be doing school… but I’m back and forth XD
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