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January 4, 2023 at 11:48 am #127744
*Me over here eating popcorn* Ooh conflict!
I didn’t think about the charries not having food in the castle! But that’s definatley a problem. My poor charrie is gonna starve under my care XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 4, 2023 at 1:46 pm #127758“Brave one.” I love that……..
Feather
“If it isn’t the owner… it could be some other magician working from the shadows. It has to be some kind of magic user. Perhaps…” Aurivis trailed off, smoke rising from his nose. “What do you suggest we do them, brave one?”
“Hey Feather, wait up!” Milo called, running up to her. Crosshair trailed behind.
“I’m not sure.” Feather admitted. “Last time, we went home after we beat the castle owner, but we didn’t kill him. I think he disappeared just like us after it was over.”
Then her brain registered the other thing he’d said. “You have other magic users in your world?” she asked. “In my world there are several types….to be honest, I have a few simple powers myself. The ones from my world have created structures and buildings like this…but I don’t think it was one of them.”
(For clarity, even though Feather and Crosshair come from a Star Wars fanfiction, that’s not the world she’s talking about–that world is sort of a world connecting different story universes, if you know what I mean. She sort of considers that to be her home as much as the universe she was born in.)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 4, 2023 at 2:08 pm #127761@freedomwriter76 u still on?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 4, 2023 at 2:19 pm #127762Grimm
Grimm narrowed his eyes at Aloth. He didn’t trust this man. Not for an instant. But he couldn’t deny the truth behind his words.
They were all hungry.
Evidence by Nyx’s sudden growling stomach, which he immediately hissed at, as if his own body had betrayed him.
He too glared at the man, and then looked to Grimm. Thankfully the man couldn’t hear his words.
“We’re not seriously gonna trust this freak, are we?”
Grimm didn’t say a word, though Lyn frowned, resuming her calm petting of the kit on his head. Nyx still trembled slightly, showing his wounded and slightly emaciated state.
Grimm let out a small sigh.
His eyes met Ty’s, and then he watched as Amidala and Everton slowly nodded, conceding to follow this untrustworthy man.
They all looked to them now. Waiting for their reply.
All the while, Aloth smiled.
“You can’t actually be considering it!” The kit’s young voice echoed.
“Nyx, shush.” Lyn prodded.
“No! I refuse to let dark-hair here ruin our lives!” The kit growled, now glaring at Grimm instead of Aloth.
Grimm returned the glare, noticing once again just how pale the little creature was. He frowned.
He knew then what had to be done…
Just like back home, in the rebellion. With all of the children under his care. Children, just like himself…
Sacrifices. Hard decisions, had to be made. In order to care for others.
He returned his eyes to Aloth and then to Ty, his gaze steely. He straightened.
“We’ll go.”
Nyx’s maw fell slack, eyes wide. “What?!” The kit tried to stand in Jocelyn’s arms, only to stumble slightly. He growled low. “I knew you’d be nothing but trouble from the first time we met you, Wolfboy! Never should’ve trusted you! Never!”
“Nyx!” Jocelyn cried, eyes filled with fire, though it was extinguished quickly at the sight of her beloved creature.
Grimm ignored the kit’s words, to the best of his ability, knowing he was only speaking out of pain. Fatigue. Hungry.
Perhaps even a bit of disillusionment.
The words held no real force behind them.
And as soon as they were spoken, the kit huffed, eyes dimming as he curled into a ball with a pout.
Everyone was watching the threesome at this point, waiting to see what would happen next.
Grimm shook his head, another sigh escaping his lips. He looked to Aloth, eyes narrowing. “Well…I suppose we should be on our way.”
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 4, 2023 at 2:35 pm #127764Tyrone
Aloth, pleased with our decision, turned on his heel and led the way down the hall. We followed, keeping a distance between ourselves and him.
I glared at Corie. Her face hardened and she looked away. Despite my show of displeasure, I was probably as happy about this decision as anyone else. It was our only choice. Everton sidled up to me.
“Despite the fact that he had kidnapped your sister,” he said. “What’s so bad about Aloth?”
I groaned. “He’s selfish… vile… and pushes people out of the way to get what he wants.”
Ev sighed. “Do you know… er… why, he’s like that?”
“His past… he’s been wronged by a… certain group of people and he wants revenge. He also… Corie and I have ruined his plans and he doesn’t favor us very much.”
“Mm,” Ev replied, nodding in understanding. I looked straight ahead of me as I walked. I hated to admit it, but Everton seemed to understand what I meant. Maybe he had gone through something similar.
Thoughts came to mind about Corie wanting our relationship restored. I inwardly humphed. I did have a relationship with Corie, a good person, but look where that got me. Why try again?
Corie
I made sure to stay far behind Aloth. I didn’t want to be closer to him than I had to be. After all he’d done… I shuddered. Why would God put us in a situation in which we had to trust the one we distrusted the most? I sighed.
I fell in step beside Jocelyn, tenderly reaching toward’s Nyx and beginning to pet his head. He tensed up, but I could tell he was slowly relaxing under my touch.
“I don’t like being pet,” he grumbled.
I smiled softly and slowly removed my hand. “What… uh… are you?” I asked Nyx.
Nyx scoffed slightly offended and said, “____________”
You can fill in there. ^ 😉
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 4, 2023 at 3:13 pm #127769@loopylin @theloonyone You on? Totally ok if you aren’t–I’ll be off in about thirty minutes so…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 4, 2023 at 3:55 pm #127773Nyx
Nyx shifted uncomfortably, eyeing the girl who had touched him. His eyes narrowed, staring daggers at her, though he felt the look didn’t quite come off the way he wanted…
Nothing seemed to at the moment.
But he was too tired to care. His stomach rumbled with emptiness, making him quiver.
When had he last eaten?
He could barely remember what he and the gang had been doing before being sent to this Light forsaken castle…much less the last time he’d filled his belly.
“I am what I’m called,” he said indignantly, fluffing his fur. He held his head high-or, as high as he could.
His neck felt as though it were trying to hold up a stone.
“I am a Nyx.”
“And usually, he’d have already bit your hand off,” Jocelyn remarked, noticing Corie’s hand was still hovering above the kit.
Corie’s eyes widened and she quickly removed her hand from the vicinity of the creature’s mouth.
Ty looked at the animal warily, as if weighing wether he was a threat or not to his sister.
Nyx just huffed. “As if I’d anger the mind reader.”
Corie frowned. “I won’t read your mind. Honest.”
“Psh. As if that means anything.” Nyx curled back into Jocelyn.
He knew he was being a pain. Knew good and well!
But, at the moment, he didn’t care.
He was hungry. He was cold. And he was hurting like all get out.
His entire body stung with every movement, burning with heat at every touch, even the ones that came from his girl…
Jocelyn.
Not that he’d tell her that though….
He…he’d rather endure the pain then have her stop.
But it was starting to become too much.
His tails flicked anxiously against Lyn’s ribcage. She let out a small laugh as they tickled her, making the kit smile. It didn’t distract him entirely, but at least, even this wretched state he could still make his girl happy.
But how was he supposed to protect her like this?
His nose scrunched up at the thought.
Sure, Wolfboy was there… but he might’ve just doomed them all! Stupid…
The kit’s ears flattened slightly, dropping down against his skull. He felt Lyn’s fingers touch his ear, making him blink and look up at her.
“You alright, love?” She asked softly.
“Peachy.” Of course he wasn’t alright.
But he wouldn’t tell her that.
Lyn gave a small but bright smile, emerald eyes shining. Nyx forced a smile back, turning around in order to nuzzle his head into her chest. She laughed.
He sucked in a deep breath and sighed, trying to ignore the aching under his bandages.
Yea…no.
If anything happened…it didn’t matter if he was hurt. He’d protect his girl. No matter what.
No matter what.
So in case y’all didn’t know Nyx’s biggest strength (and also the crystal he has on his collar) is Loyalty.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 4, 2023 at 8:01 pm #127809Lol Nyx referring to Grimm as “Wolfboy”
😂🤣😂
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 4, 2023 at 8:10 pm #127811@princesachronicle22 @loopylin
“I’m Ellie. And that’s Dante.” The girl says, pointing to her one eyed companion. “Are you… gonna come in out of that weather?”
The women glances around before stepping through the window, avoiding the shattered glass. Layson follows with Maylee in his arms. Upon entering, the women stands tall in the center of the floor. She ignores the water dripping from her hair and assumes a imposing posture.
“I am High General Serin Ki Untikal. First daughter of King Ourbrine, and heir to his throne. Princess of the Pelgarkine race.” She says, watching to see the response.
“Very cool.” Layson says absentmindedly, wringing out his hair onto the floor. Maylee hops around excitedly, staying within a five foot radius of Layson. “So… we can call you Serin?”
Goodness… I hope I’m not provoking her… But she’s not my general, she’s not where I’m from and I’m not calling her anything special.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 4, 2023 at 8:17 pm #127819Oh! And about the quoting, I had to ask for help with it at first too, it’s not intuitive. You copy and paste a section you want into the text box, and then highlight it, then click the block quote tool. It is the third symbol from the left top of the text box, next to the italicize symbol.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 4, 2023 at 8:43 pm #127823Thanks! I just figured it out and it helps XD.
Goodness… I hope I’m not provoking her… But she’s not my general, she’s not where I’m from and I’m not calling her anything special.
Lol! Serin would probably hate that and for some reason that’s super funny to me XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 4, 2023 at 8:48 pm #127824Lol, she gave this elaborate title and Layson was probably thinking like I’m not calling her general if that’s what she wants. XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 4, 2023 at 8:56 pm #127825@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22
Goodness… I hope I’m not provoking her… But she’s not my general, she’s not where I’m from and I’m not calling her anything special.
If you think that will get on her nerves, wait till Dante finally opens his annoying mouth. :/ I apologize in advance XD
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 4, 2023 at 8:58 pm #127826XD Dante’s a bit of a brat then?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 4, 2023 at 9:23 pm #127837If you think that will get on her nerves, wait till Dante finally opens his annoying mouth. :/ I apologize in advance XD
Can’t wait! XD. I think it’s your turn if you have time and wanna go
Lol, she gave this elaborate title and Layson was probably thinking like I’m not calling her general if that’s what she wants. XD
Lol! I see now, let’s hope their relationship doesn’t start off too rocky
I wanna say I can’t take responsibility for Serin’s actions here but… XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
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