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January 3, 2023 at 2:37 pm #127534
@freedomwriter76 LOVE THEM!!! AHHHHHHHH NOAAAAHHHH!!!!
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#ProtectSebJanuary 3, 2023 at 2:43 pm #127537Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww, poor November! đ @koshka.
Fin
November just nodded, before tugging at a curl.
He had jumped at Hans’ harsh reply, same as Riker had.
Fin chewed his bottom lip, thinking.
Maybe it was a clue that November had been hurt too.
Just like Riker had been.
Fin still didn’t quite know exactly what to say to Riker…but he was glad Riker trusted him enough to open up about his childhood.
“We are not helping them.” Hans snarled, suddenly interrupting Fin’s thoughts.
Fin turned to face him again. “Hans, all they need is some help finding their friends.”
“It doesn’t matter, Fin. We’re not helping them. I don’t care about your opinion. Those two sound like Russians…” Hans pointed at Zlatan and Vulkasin, “and we don’t help sub-humans.”
January 3, 2023 at 2:43 pm #127538@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Paxton
Skme of the group had wandered away, hearing something. Paxton watched them warily, but was quickly drawn away by someone asking him a question.
The conversation was interrupted however by a familiar voice.
His head snapped up and he looked over, eyes wide at the sight of the familiar sight of Joshua, Wolfgang and their young cousin stepping out from behind a corner.
Paxton immediately jumped up, smiling wide. He ran full force at the three, arms wide, wrapping them around Wolfgang.
âW-Wolfg-ang!â He cried, embracing the young man enthusiastically, thankful to see another familiar face.
âPaxton!â Wolfgang cried, lifting the boy into his arms and returning the embrace. Paxton didnât even mind the stinging against his bandages as they hugged. He was just glad to see one of the brothers.
He lifted his face, turning back to see the stunned faces of everyone else. He flushed lightly.
He hadnât acted like that withâŚany of them as of yet. Only thing close would be Luna. And heâd had no reason at the moment to get quite that out of his box.
Luna smiled, standing to her feet. âYou must be one of the brothers who helped Paxton!â She nodded her head, approaching Wolfgang and Joshua. âI am Luna!â She extended a hand to Joshua, and then grinned at Camille.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 3, 2023 at 2:44 pm #127539@koshka Iâll let u RP next, tho Iâm sure November is going to have some thoughts on what Hans just called the twinsâŚ.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 3, 2023 at 2:59 pm #127542Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Noah is just so adorable, isn’t he? XD <3333
January 3, 2023 at 3:08 pm #127543Alright. Here we go!
Tyrone
I placed my hand on the sheath containing my knife. Out of the corner of my eye, I watched Corie and Jocelyn converse
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I sighed. What was with her and animals? I started walking down the hall, knowing Corie would follow. But unfortunately, so did the rest of the group. Corie continued the conversation. âSo,â she started, looking over all of our companionsâ clothing. âWhere are you from?â
Amidala
Ami replied to Corie first. âEv and I are from the country of Themelios.â
Corie raised an eyebrow. âWhere in all of Eyravon is that?â
Ami cocked her head, confused. âWhatâs Eyravon?â
âThe place we live in. It contains all of the countries of the world?â Corie said this as if she thought Ami would know what she was talking about.
âYou mean the earth?â Ev replied.
Corie furrowed her brow, turning around. Then grinned. âIf you call it that!â
Ev and Ami exchanged looks. This castle was very odd. And contained some different people.
âSo where in Eyravon do you live?â Ami asked, trying to pronounce the foreign word.
âTy and I are both from the tribe of Encarda,â she said, starting to walk backwards. âSo watch your thoughts,â Corie winked. But after seeing Ami and Evâs reactions, she sighed. âEncardans can read othersâ minds as long as they can focus on one strong emotion they are feeling at the moment.â
Ami furrowed her brow casting Ev a worried glance. Corie laughed gently. âDonât worry. I wonât read your mind if you donât want me to.â
Ami forced a smile and nodded. Corie looked over at Jocelyn, Nyx, and Grimm. âWhat about you? Where are you from?â
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 3:36 pm #127544Jocelyn
âRead minds?!â Nyx screeched. His hackles raised. He was getting anyway again.
âEasyâŚthey already said they wonât! Itâs alrightâŚâ Lyn soothed.
âYea right! Like we can trust them. Listen, I can deal with Lunaâs crazy emotion sensing stuff, but I draw the line at mind readers!â Nyx glared at both newcomers, thought the young men were still unable to hear his voice.
âNyx, please, calm downâŚitâs alright.â Jocelyn frowned. She turned back to the group. âAhâŚsorryâŚAnyway! Iâve never heard of those places before, but then again I lived my whole life in my homeland of Cirque until a few years back. Now I travel around with my friends.â
Grimm seemed to be listening to the conversation, taking in all of the facts, eyes growing wary when hearing of the mind reading skill, but otherwise he was a bit disinterested.
âWe should probably get moving if we wish to find anyone else.â
Lyn nodded. âYea, itâd be nice if we could find some food. I think Nyx is a little hangryâŚâ
âI am not!â
âAnd a bit tiredâŚâ Lyn frowned, watching as Nyx twitched within his bandages, then let out a stifled yawn, showing his canines. He let out a small groan and grimaced.
She hated seeing him hurtâŚ
If she ever saw Hitchens againâŚ
She shook her head. Hopefully that wouldnât happen. OtherwiseâŚshe wasnât sure what sheâd do.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 3, 2023 at 3:36 pm #127545@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Here it is!
SERIN
The stick shattered the glass easily, most of the pane falling out completely. She studied the hole, judging if she could fit, before noticing that there were people on the other side. Serin blinked wet eyes at the shady forms as one spoke up, “Um… hi?”
She didn’t have time to respond before she heard a deeper voice behind her. “Ma’am?” and then again, “H-Hello?” Serin whipped her head around, keeping a firm grip on her stick-weapon. She studied the boy with a critical eye, swiftly deciding he would be an easy opponent to face if needed. He had blondish hair with a small braid on the side. His blunt ears and tan skin seemed to match only one other race on Ohven, but she’d never seen any in person before. She cocked her head as she stared at his clothing, he had a strange contraption strapped to his back.
A small gasp caught her attention and she noticed a small girl clinging to the boy’s legs. She clutched a small bundle of water pelted flowers. Serin felt her posture relax slightly at the sight. She wouldn’t fight the boy with her watching.
She looked back inside to the other pair. As they inched closer to the shattered glass, she was able to better make out their features, the male had one large eye and a mishievious mouth, while the short girl, the who had spoken earlier, had green eyes and a tail. She didn’t think she’d ever heard of any races that looked like this before.
Glancing between both duos, Serin opened her mouth to demand, “who are you?”
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 3:49 pm #127547@koshka @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 anyone on?
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#ProtectSebJanuary 3, 2023 at 4:43 pm #127554I love your drawing of Serin! The shading and coloring is so good!
January 3, 2023 at 4:49 pm #127557Milo
Milo ran after Aurivis and Feather with Crosshair following behind him. When he got closer he heard the dragon speaking, “What do you suggest we do them, brave one?”
He called out once he saw them, “Feather, wait up!” Milo ran up to them and joined them, although much closer to Feather than to Aurivis.
(just catching up)
January 3, 2023 at 5:41 pm #127593Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. @mineralizedwritings. @koshka. @lightoverdarkness6. @koshka. @anyone-else-who-wants-and-needs-to-know.
So…I’m pulling out Adolphus/Dietrich/Hilda and not bringing in Adrian/Evelyn/Noah, at least not right now, and bringing this group in! Bc they need some development and they’ll be fun, y’all will see. đ
First off, I must say I’m bringing Ezra back.
Yep, my Kentucky boy is making a comeback in the castle! XD And his ragtag group from the POW camp is coming with him. đ
So, without further ado, I first introduce Jameson!
Age: 25
Personality: Protective, intelligent, a fighter, loyal, devoted, brave
Other: Jewish American. Ezra’s Co-Pilot. Will always fight for the people he cares about and will do everything in his power to keep them safe.
January 3, 2023 at 5:45 pm #127594Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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My favvvvvv!!!!!!! LUIS!!!!!
Age: 21
Personality: Courageous, fierce, fiery, somewhat short-tempered, very optimistic, always encouraging others to keep fighting
Other: Fighter Pilot in the RAF (Royal Air Force). Middle kid of 7 kids, of which he’s the only boy, lol. Comes from a well-to-do-family and was supposed to enter parliament like his father, but enlisted in the RAF after war was declared. Not on speaking terms with his father.
January 3, 2023 at 5:49 pm #127595Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Curtis!
Age: 30
Personality: A leader, brave, loving, caring, compassionate, always listening, helpful
Other: African American. Married and has a young son, Jedediah, at home in Georgia.
January 3, 2023 at 5:51 pm #127596Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Yoshio!
Age: 22
Personality: Patriotic, intelligent, caring, brave, encouraging, loving, friendly
Other: Japanese American, born in California. Oldest of four. Family is in an Internment Camp.
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