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January 2, 2023 at 10:26 pm #127471
@loopylin love him!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebJanuary 2, 2023 at 11:35 pm #127477@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
I love those drawings! I have one of Serin if you wanna see 😉
[quote quote=127453](He’s the only character in my story with a completed character sheet, these take forever XD)[/quote]
Character sheets are difficult! I don’t think I’ve ever completed one before XD.
I’m with you! Layson looks fiine!
Also! I’m fine with Serin running into all your charries! Whatever sounds funnest for everyone!
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by PrincesaChronicle22.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 9:32 am #127493Wow! She looks so cool! I love the hair and the shading 💙
ok, I’ll start
Ellie
Why am I even following this idiot? Ellie thought as she trailed cautiously behind Dante. He doesn’t know where he’s going any more than I do. The so-called-idiot in front of her was uncharacteristically quiet as they walked. He seemed like he was actually worried about something. The strange behavior kept Ellie on guard.
At least he is walking where I can see him.
A window shattered next to them, making Dante leap back in alarm, and Ellie draw her gun.
“What the…” Dante began to say, but faded off as he looked out the window. Slowly, he crouched, creeping back into the shadows. Ellie crept closer, her shoes crunching on broken glass. She looked up to see a tall woman standing in the rain with blue skin and pointed ears. Ellie mentally ran through all the species she knew. This person didn’t fit any of them. Another unknown species, she thought.
She stared at the woman for a few moments as her mind said a million different things, but all she was able to say out loud was, “Um… hi?”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 3, 2023 at 9:47 am #127494Aurivis
Up in front, Feather was walking beside Aurivis. “I don’t think the owner of the castle is here anymore.” she said. “And he’d been brought here like everyone else. Killing whoever owns the place won’t change anything.”Aurivis’ tail lashed in frustration, but he was careful not to hit anyone with it.
“If it isn’t the owner… it could be some other magician working from the shadows. It has to be some kind of magic user. Perhaps…” he huffed, letting two smoke puffs rise from his nostrils and float off. He looked down at Feather. “What do you suggest we do then, brave one?”
(he still hasn’t asked them what their names are, lol)
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
January 3, 2023 at 11:57 am #127509@loopylin thanks! My other drawings haven’t turned out quite as nicley XD I’m still practicing with my personal style and stuff
Also I love what you just wrote of Ellie and Dante. I’ll try to Rp soon unless somone else wants to first 😉
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 1:14 pm #127513Thanks! I think my oc Everly would agree XD
Love that drawing of Serin! What program did you use to draw it? And do you use a touchscreen, or like a graphics tablet?
I’ll rp soon! Just finished my tiny amount of schoolwork for today
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 3, 2023 at 1:22 pm #127517Okay, awesome!
I used two different programs on my computer actually XD. So I couldn’t find a ligit drawing platform so I used 3D paint which isn’t really supposed to be for 2D drawings but I used it anyway. Then I found a free program called krita that I use now. It’s pretty nice and it has all kinds of digital brushes which I used it to finish and edit her face.
So I have a little drawing pad and pen that plugs into my computer, it makes it sooo much easier XD.
Do want to rp first, or should I write a little part? I’m good either way 😀
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by PrincesaChronicle22.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 1:26 pm #127519I’ll go next if that’s ok! I want Layson to get to see her busting the window XD
Nice! I can’t imagine using paint 3d for much art lol great job! I’ve used krita before too, It’s my favorite of all the digital art programs I’ve used. I use photoshop right now because my sister doesn’t use it anymore and we wanted to get out money’s worth, but the transform tool is weird and I don’t like it 🤣
I have one of those plug in tablet thingy’s to, and they do help so much! My art improved a lot after I got one.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 3, 2023 at 1:33 pm #127520lol I haven’t tried photoshop before, but I think it’s what most people use. I really like krita so far, sometimes it’s glitchy with certain brushes but I don’t really use those ones anyway so it’s great. Do you mostly do character art?
Anyway, you can totally go! It’ll give Serin more to respond to. (Bwahahaha, evil author laugh again)
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 2:04 pm #127523@princesachronicle22 @loopylin
yes! I do character art. I have done some various art of locations in my book, but most of that I do traditionally. what about you?
Layson and Maylee
“Ugh!” Layson brushes a large branch out of his face. Water drips from it’s needles, and the smell of pine fills the air.
Looking around, he takes in the view. Large and thick trees shoot up from the forest floor from all directions, and sprawling roots reach for the sky. Layson turns, blinking water out of his eyes.
Where… am I?
Layson grips his backpack strap, suddenly realizing he was wearing it. Walking forwards, he pushes another branch aside. It snaps backwards into his face, it’s needle’s scratching his skin. He bats in out of the way and steps on it, this time making sure it stays down.
I feel like I’m missing something…
Maylee!
Layson starts off in a run, crashing through the brush and snapping twigs underway, before suddenly realizing he doesn’t know where he is going.
“May!” Layson shouts into the wet forest, rain pelting his back.
“Maylee?”
Layson stops to listen.
“EeeEE!” A squeal of delight echoes from a clearing nearby.
Glancing into the clearing, Layson notices a small flower patch. Maylee stands at the center, picking off their tops one by one. She throws up a handful into the air, which is quickly taken back down by the pelting rain. Layson smiles.
“Hello!!!” He runs towards her, scooping her up into the air. “I see you found flowers?”
“Yeah!” Maylee throws a handful into Layson’s face.
“Ok, well we can take a few but I think we need to find some shelter before we spend any length of time here.” Layson pushes back his wet hair, which is starting to stick to his face.
Layson sets Maylee down and opens up his backpack. “You want that one?”
“Yeah! It’s yellow.” Maylee shoves a bunch of flowers into Layson’s bag.
“Nice.” Layson puts his backpack back on.
“There’s a mountain over there!”
“Oh cool!” Layson says mindlessly.
Mountains don’t have shelter.
“It has these pointy things going towards the sky, and little windows.”
“A mountain with windows?”
“Yea.” Maylee takes Layson’s hand as they start walking.
“Where was that?”
“There!” Maylee points at a large castle nearby, tiny spires towering towards the sky.
“Woah! That’s a castle.”
“A what?”
“Uh… a place rich people live.” Layson hesitates. “It looks pretty abandoned though, maybe we could use it to get a break from this rain.”
Walking towards the castle, Layson stops short. Squinting to see through the rain, he watches as a blue figure wanders around the door.
“Uh… hey let’s wait here for a sec.” Layson reaches down to squeeze some water out of Maylee’s hair.
“What’s that?” She points off into the distance at the figure.
“I’m not exactly sure…” Layson picks up Maylee as they walk closer.
A loud banging sounds from the direction of the castle. The two watch in horrible fascination as a blue women, unlike any they had ever seen before, bangs on the castle door loudly. She turns aside with a frustrated growl and picks up a piece of wood. Layson squeezes Maylee a little tighter as he approaches, put off by her racket and unsure of what she is. The women thrust the wood forwards through the castle window, shattering it.
“M’am?” Layson approaches from behind towards the shattered window.
“H-Hello?” He hesitates as she turns to face him. “Do you know who uh… owns that castle?” he wipes his wet hair out of his face once more.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 3, 2023 at 2:10 pm #127525XD I love it! And Layson and Maylee are adorable!!!!! I’ll write my rp in a sec 🙂
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 2:22 pm #127527Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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So…a couple characters need some more development from one of my WIP’s. So…I introduce to everyone here, if they even see this, lol, first off:
Adrian Lee Roberts
Age: 26
Looks: Brown, curly hair cut short, pale skin, green eyes. Wears a 19th century/Victorian men’s suit, like the pic above. 😉
Personality: Kind, loving, compassionate, generous, faithful, devoted, never backs down from his convictions, courageous, firm in his beliefs
Other: A Southern Pastor in the middle of the American Civil War, Adrian has had to make a choice to stand for his convictions, in that he is now standing against Slavery. He is now very unpopular and is currently on the run from a wealthy slave trader that wants him dead. And is falling in love with Evelyn, who I will introduce in a second. 😉
January 3, 2023 at 2:27 pm #127528Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Evelyn!
Age: 23
Looks: Dark brown skin, black hair cut short, dark brown eyes. Wears a worn white blouse, a dark blue skirt, apron, and a dark blue kerchief over her hair.
Personality: Hard-working, loyal, loving, compassionate, sweet, devoted, stubborn, faithful woman of God, loves children, always sees the best in people, no matter how bad they may seem
Other: Speaks French as well as English
January 3, 2023 at 2:32 pm #127531Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Noah Peter Roberts!
Age: 6
Looks: Pale skin, freckles, bright blue eyes, curly, bright blonde hair, 1 front tooth missing. Wears a Victorian little boy’s suit.
Personality: Silly, loving, sweet, innocent, adorable, compassionate, generous, loves almost everyone he meets, the cutest and sweetest little boy you’ll ever meet
Other: Adrian’s youngest nephew
January 3, 2023 at 2:36 pm #127533Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings. @loopylin. @lightoverdarkness6. @godlyfantasy12.
Wolfgang
The group suddenly came towards them from around the corner, almost making Wolfgang jump right out of his skin, surprised.
“Um, hello. Were you… spying on us?” One of the boys asked.
Another one said softly, “Uum Hi.”
Joshua suddenly stepped forward, Camille now at his side clutching his hand, and stepped in between the group and Wolfgang. “We didn’t know if we were safe to come out, so…yes, we were. To see if you were safe. I’m Joshua, this is my cousin Camille, and this is my brother Wolfgang. We mean no one any harm…”
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