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January 2, 2023 at 9:18 pm #127438
@Lightoverdarkness @Mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @Loopylin @freedomwriter76
I’ve been reading some of your character snippets and they are SO STINKIN CUTE!!! I love it! Y’all mind if I write a little more? ;D Also @esther-c, I haven’t met your charries I don’t think but they can join mine at any time! Serin needs some friends XD
Also I don’t know if I made this clear enough before sorry! But Serin is about 5o years old because she has a longer lifespan. So really she’s like 20. š
SERIN
Serin banged harshly once more on the large door before giving up. Growling, she turned from the cursed piece of wood. She was a trained warrior! A mere door shouldn’t be a problem. To be fair, Pelgar didn’t really have doors.
Serin pinched the bridge of her sculpted nose. Kun’en would have teased me endlessly about this. She still hadn’t forgiven her father for pairing her up with the immature Pelgarkinian man. She reluctantly admited that he was a great High General. But she was the one that had to be stuck working with him, why not let her choose?
She shook her head and focused again on her chosen task. Get inside the strange building. The sky was still dumping oceanfulls of icy rain, and Serin’s limbs were growing heavy. Her sacred armor was meant to be light, but the sopping clothing she wore underneath added extra weight.
Serin sent a final glare at the building entrance before stepping back out into the rain. The patter was terribly loud to her ears, but she tried her best to ignore it. Stepping carefully she managed to navigate her way around the front of the structure to the right side. Maybe it would have lower windows on the other sides of the building.
Shivers raced up and down her body in the cold, and she clenched her jaw to keep it from chattering. finally reaching the corner she turned by the new wall. She put her hand along the slick wall, searching for a window while keeping one eye on her footing.
Suddenly, a faint sound reached her ears, something other than rain. Singing?Ā It seemed like it might be coming from one of the higher levels in the building. Serin scrunched her lips, she was probably just hearing things. The voices would have to be immensly powerful to reach her.
She was probably just missing Ghatii. A pang resounded in her chest as she thought of her young niece. The little girl had always prefered singing rather than chanting, as was their custom.
When Serin’s sister had been killed years ago, she had been Ghatii’s main care-taker in secret. Where was the girl now? Serin could only hope she was safe. Breathing in, she stuffed her worry down, forcing calm. She had to stay on track.
Soon an indent in the wall appeared near her hand, leading to smooth glass. Her eyes could vaugely make out some color and shape. Colored glass? This place keeps getting stranger. Regardless, Serin gave a slim smile in triumph. She looked around for something sharp nearby. One of my spears would be pretty useful right about now.
Eventually, after digging through some nearby bushes, Serin found a thick enough piece of wood. Pulling back her wet hair, she raised her makeshift weapon. While Ghatii was still on her mind, Serin couldn’t help but think that the small child would disaprove of her aunt’s breaking and entering.
Serin steeled herself, moving in practiced form while lurching forward. She quickly thrust the stick forward, shattering the glass.
Sorry it’s so long again! Hopefully it makes some sense XD
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 2, 2023 at 9:25 pm #127440If Serin doesn’t meet somebody soon I’ll add another one of my charries to meet her : )
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 2, 2023 at 9:28 pm #127444Thanks! Sounds good! I’m excited, it’s been cool reading everything so far and I can’t wait to see how it developes! š
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 2, 2023 at 9:37 pm #127447@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
Okā¦ I canāt think of anything for our charries to talk about, we have more than a page of asking each other what we should do, and Iām impatient, so Imma just start doing stuff. š
Carter
After they finished singing, the group chatted for a while about different things, feeling much more lighthearted than before. Carter went back to his usual teasing self and talked with Matthew. It was nice to have him around since Simon was gone. (You guys can fill in the conversations if you want)
Carter stiffened suddenly. He thought he heard a noise down the hall.
āJust a second, Matthew. Let meā¦ā He stood cautiously and crept along the wall, following the faint sound of whispering.
He went around a corner, and found three people.
āUm, hello. Were youā¦ spying on us?ā
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 2, 2023 at 9:40 pm #127448oh! I have two characters aimlessly wandering around. Dante and Ellie. They are both aliens. Do you want Serin to meet them?
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 2, 2023 at 9:43 pm #127450@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
@loopylin
LOL!! Okay, then! šMatthew
Me and Carter sat aginst the wall, talking about our homes, and our regular day to day activities–on days where we weren’t being teleported to strange castles with other people.
Carter laughed at that. I liked being around him. He made me laugh.
Then he stiffened, hearing something down the hall. I straightened too, perking up. āJust a second, Matthew. Let meā¦ā He stood cautiously and crept along the wall, following the faint sound of whispering.
He went around a corner, and I followed slowly and found three people.
āUm, hello. Were youā¦ spying on us?ā Carter asked.
“Uum Hi.” I said softly.#HugRikerSquad
January 2, 2023 at 9:44 pm #127451@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Tauren and Lesli
Tauren watches as Carter rounds the corner, apparently following a sound.
āUm, hello. Were youā¦ spying on us?ā
Tauren edges up behind, slowly peeking out behind Carter, before pulling back behind the wall.
Eeck. Hopefully it’s not the guard person again.
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 2, 2023 at 9:49 pm #127453Dante and Ellie can join us too if you want!
Here I come! XD
Two characters I’m adding:
Layson Pembrick: 19, kinda long gold blond hair (he has braids but it’s to complicated for me to try to explain here XD) 5′ 11″
Here’s a bit of art I made of him: (his hair has changed many times since these drawing, idk what it even looks like now lol)
(He’s the only character in my story with a completed character sheet, these take forever XD)
Maylee: 3, asain features, black hair with flowers braided into it, just average toddler height.
She’s the one in my pfp!
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 2, 2023 at 9:57 pm #127455@mineralizedwritings OH MY GOSH LAYSON IS HOOOT
*did I say that out loud?* XD XD
i already loved him but uhā¦I love him more so now XD!! Heās now gonna be my other fav character besides Keiryn š¤£
@freedomwriter76 ur probs not on anymore but hereās my reply RPs!
November
November jumped at Hansā sudden, harsh reply. Heā¦hasnāt been expecting it to be honest.
He noticed Riker jumped slightly as well.
The man definitely held power over Riker.
Andā¦November definitely didnāt like that.
The twins didnāt seem to either, as both tensed. Though, the only movement they made was Zlatan, shifting closer to November after noticing the gingerāsĀ pale face.
Thankfully, the other high ranking man, Fin, stepped in, asking why it was they couldnāt help.
Hansā¦didnāt seem to like this, and November braced himself for further conflict.
He grimaced, taking a small step back, behind Zlatan. He felt a bit like a coward doing soā¦butā¦he justĀ couldnātĀ handle Hansā dark, penetrating eyesā¦or the tension in the room.
It was honestly so thick at this point you could probably cut it with a knife. Novemberās stomach twisted.
Before anything escalated he spoke, āI-Itās alrightā¦Ah, Z-Zlatan and Vulk are helping me. Itās fine. Reallyā¦ā As eyes turned to him he winced, regretting having said anything at all, since the mention of the twins seemed to make more disdain flicker on Hansā face.
āNo, November. Weād be pleased to help you,ā Fin spoke. November swallowed, knowing at least one, probably two from the looks of Erich, didnāt agree with Fināa sentiments.
November merely nodded, tugging at a curl.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 2, 2023 at 9:59 pm #127456@freedomwriter76
Arabella
āSounds good,ā Ara nodded, taking one last look at the mirror, and the last trio of friends that remained on it, smiling. She was thankful they were all safe, and hoped to see them soon.
Slowly, she and Ellie began to make their way through the dust-filled room and over to the back door. Ara opened it, revealing a much better lit hall, though a bit narrow.
āHopefully weāll find someone down here.ā Ara said.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 2, 2023 at 10:05 pm #127458OH MY GOSH LAYSON IS HOOOT
*did I say that out loud?* XD XD
i already loved him but uhā¦I love him more so now XD!! Heās now gonna be my other fav character besides Keiryn š¤£
LOLLLL
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He upgraded on your character list because of that lol
YeAh…
you did just say that out loud XD
I mean I’ve spent the longest on his character design out of all my characters. I spent like a really long time getting it just how I wanted it XD. My sketchbook has so many ugly sketches of him from before I figured it out lol
Oh and he’s coffee obsessed too, he’s holding coffee in that picture. š¤£
- This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 2, 2023 at 10:14 pm #127464@mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22
Dante and Ellie can join us too if you want!
ok, cool! Iāll give some descriptions and drawings.
So hereās Dante:
Heās mischievous, cocky, selfish (but he gets a redemption arc later), but very loyal once someone has gained his trust. So far in the castle, that has only happened once. He is also fire proof to an extent, and from a volcanic planet, so he really loves playing with fire.
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 2, 2023 at 10:17 pm #127467Love the lighting in that drawing!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 2, 2023 at 10:23 pm #127469And hereās Ellie in the top left corner. (Only drawing of her I have)
She is shy, practical, and strategic. She and her twin sister are bounty hunters, so Ellie is the weapons expert. (They mainly only use non-lethal weapons)
oh, and physical description: sheās about the size of a hobbit, has a tail, and has green eyes and brown hair. She wears a blue hoodie with the little ears on the hood.
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
January 2, 2023 at 10:24 pm #127470Love the lighting in that drawing!
Thanks! I spent way too long on it, lol
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
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