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December 31, 2022 at 5:51 pm #127015
Crosshair
“What do we do?” Milo asked, before Aurivis turned to look at him.
“Finish something?” the dragon replied in answer to Feather’s question. “How about I find the person responsible for bringing us here and finish him? That’s what we’ll do.”
He climbed back down the castle wall. “Are you coming?”
“…..Finish him?” Feather only seemed to realize now that this would probably consciously involve killing someone.
“You did it all the time back in the war, Feather.” Crosshair hissed. Did she not remember that?
“That was different.” Feather protested. “We were mostly fighting droids.”
“We fought the castle owner. Maybe he’s returned and out for revenge.” Crosshair pointed out.
“Fair point. I guess we’ll follow the dragon, then.” Feather climbed down to follow Aurivis.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 31, 2022 at 6:08 pm #127023@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Luna
The man left, after glaring at Matthew, and the rest of them. Luna released a breath she didn’t realize she’d been holding, and then turned to Matthew and Carter with a smile.
“Thank you both.” She looked past them at Paxton who still stood in the same spot, now much more relaxed looking, his bear held only in one hand, by a paw at his side. He tilted his head, lips pursed and brows furrowed, as if asking permission for something.
Luna beckoned him over. Slowly, he approached, warily eyeing the rest of the group.
She grinned, turning him to face everyone. “Well…now that that’s dealt with,” she placed her hands on both of Paxton’s shoulders, giving them a small, gentle squeeze. “Should we continue?”
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 8:39 pm #127035Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @koshka. Yes, Hans is here. *groans*
And yeah…good question…he does hate the Russian people after all…so he may just hate them almost instantly just for that.
Fin
One of the young men, Zlatan, locked eyes with Hans, before looking back at Riker. “Good to see you, Riker.”
His face showed no emotion.
Fin saw the distaste instantly spread across Hans’ face.
Zlatan had a Russian accent, and Russians were considered “sub-humans”…almost considered as low and undesired as Jews.
But everyone was equal in the sight of God, and God’s opinion was the only one that mattered.
Not that Hans would listen to that.
“It’s good to see all of you again…are you alright?” Riker asked, eyebrows furrowing together, smiling, speaking to the three.
December 31, 2022 at 8:41 pm #127036Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @lightoverdarkness6. @mineralizedwritings. So glad y’all love Leo so much. XD I’ll continue that RP in a sec. But do y’all and @loopylin want them to run into Joshua/Wolfgang/Camille now, or wait?
@godlyfantasy12. I did see the backstory RP, but I don’t know if I will have time for that, especially after school starts back up…I’m barely keeping up with this right now. xDDecember 31, 2022 at 8:55 pm #127038Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Now…to continue Leo. 😀 (and y’all, the thing is, in my mind, Felix is still a little better than Frida…but he still ain’t a good dad. Like, he won’t be happy that Leo was stabbed, unlike Frida, who didn’t care.)
Leo
“What happened? Are you injured?”
Leo nodded, even though it hurt, and Felix raised an eyebrow. “Where? How?”
Leo pointed at abdomen, towards the bottom left.
Felix carefully and slowly lifted Leo’s shirt, and Leo gritted his teeth against the pain.
Felix paused, and Leo could almost swear that he heard a curse escape his father’s lips.
Felix turned and looked up at Frida. “What happened!?”
Frida waved a hand in dismissal. “He was stabbed for trying to stop a mother from getting her child back…one of her older sons went at Leo with a knife and stabbed him.”
“He was stabbed…because he was helping a kid…?” Felix asked, confused.
“No, Felix, dear, Leo was stabbed because he disobeyed. There’s a difference.”
Felix shrugged, softly pulling Leo’s shirt back down. “…I suppose so.”
“He’ll be fine, Felix.”
“He just collapsed on the stairs. Leo, can you walk?”
Leo just nodded, knowing they expected him to be able to.
Felix nodded. “Alright then. Here,” and he extended his hand out to Leo.
Leo paused.
Memories surfaced…but Leo pushed them away, took his father’s hand, and stood, even though it caused pain.
Frida just stared at him, before walking away. “Come along, then, Leo. Keep up.”
December 31, 2022 at 9:07 pm #127042@freedomwriter76 FINALLY! His father’s being decent! I like this side of Felix.
Also! I totally understand, and I haven’t said anything but I don’t think I’m gonna be on in January (I’ll be making a post about it once it’s finalized if I will or won’t be lol) so yea… I get it, 😊
November
Hans’ face twitched as soon as Zlatan began speaking, expression becoming even more sour then it already was, though November wasn’t entirely sure why.
Riker stepped forward slightly, “It’s good to see all of you again…are you alright?” He smiled, meeting each of their eyes as he spoke. November couldn’t help but smile back. He nodded slightly.
“Fine,” Vulkasin smiled, then placed a large hand on November’s shoulder. November stumbled a little under the weight. “Ve vere just trying to find November’s friends.”
November nodded, looking up at Riker. “Y-Yea. I got separated from them…” He furrowed his brows, lips pursing.
His mind was still a bit confused on how Riker was…younger when only minutes ago he’d been with Leon, older, with Lily.
But…things could be strange here apparently. As already known by November’s sudden closeness in age to the twins.
“H-How are you?” November asked, glancing from Riker to the others behind him. He smiled slightly at Jezyk and Fin, and tried for one with Erich, though the man didn’t really seem all that “smiley.”
As for Hans…November had a bit of a harder time offering him a smile.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 10:02 pm #127053@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Yes, FINALLY Felix!! Finally you’re being a decent father. He’s your son, after all! And he’s precious! Aghh FRIDA 😡😤!! You enrage me DX
So glad y’all love Leo so much.
Oh, yes!! Who wouldn’t love him?! XD <3 <3
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December 31, 2022 at 10:06 pm #127056@freedomwriter76
But do y’all and @loopylin want them to run into Joshua/Wolfgang/Camille now, or wait?
Um, I’m okay with it right now! @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin what do y’all think? I think we’re about to start walking down the hall again, so you probably could before they’re out of eachothers area, if that makes sense ;).
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December 31, 2022 at 10:59 pm #127064@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings I’m good with it!!
Also @lightoverdarkness6 u wanna RP maybe an RP of talking to Paxton? Maybe ur charries can be like “But where do we go” because now we have a dragon in one direction and Easton in the other….
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 11:04 pm #127066@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12
Oh… that is a problem XD
Maybe they have to search for a undergound passage to travel under the dragon, and run into some lost charries in the dark down there?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 31, 2022 at 11:06 pm #127067@mineralizedwritings hmm idk! That’d be cool! OOH AND THEN UR CHARRIES COULD BE LIKE “oh ya we live underground” and Luna be like “GASP!! I DID TOO!!!!” XD XD XD
Also does anyone wanna RP them chatting? I’m bored 😂
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 11:07 pm #127068@freedomwriter76 is in bed I believe so we’ll have to wait till tomorrow to meet up with Wolfgang and then, but we can just chat for now. Maybe they sit to come up with a plan and end up chatting to learn more about each other (cuz rn Luna and Paxton know like nothing about them and vice versa XD)
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 11:14 pm #127071@godlyfanatsy12 @lightoverdarkness6
“Hey that wasn’t too bad!” Lesli says, her heart beating with the exhilaration of adventure.
Tauren gives her a look.
“What?” Lesli crosses her arms. “Not too bad.”
“He’s scary.” Tauren says quietly glancing around the group for others of the same opinion.
His eyes meet Paxton’s.
Obviously he agree’s
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 31, 2022 at 11:28 pm #127073@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Poor Tauren! XD! I feel like Lesli is the Jocelyn of this group lol!!
Luna
Luna smiled politely at Tauren and Lesli, then glanced down at Paxton, whose head was hanging slightly.
She whispered, “You alright?” He slowly nodded, but she knew it wasn’t completely the truth…
His eyes said he was elsewhere, though his physical self was standing right beside her.
She looked down the hall, and then back at the others. Someone spoke up.
“Where do we go now? That man went that way, and I do not want to run into him again. But the dragon is in the other direction…”
Luna’s blood ran cold at the mention of the great creature.
She really didn’t want to run into one of the species who had slaughtered her family…
But…
She might not have a choice…
This time, it was Paxton’s turn to look up at her, eyes bright. He took her hand from his shoulder, entwining their fingers, then offered a sad, but small smile.
She returned it.
“Well, until we figure it out, I suggest we stay right here,” Carter said. “No use in tiring ourselves out when we don’t even know where we’re going.”
Luna agreed, and looked around, then, with Paxton’s hand in her own, walked toward one of the hallway walls. She slid down into a sitting position, cross-legged, but making sure she was still modest. Paxton sat close beside her, folding his knees to his chest, Hope by his side, one arm hooked around the stuffed creature.
Luna gazed up at the group with a grin. Perhaps she could get to know all of these new friends better now that they had a small chance to sit.
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 11:37 pm #127074@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin
Tauren sits down on the ground, following the rest. Lesli sits down next to him, resting her head on his shoulder.
Oh goodness… I feel like I could sleep. How long have I been awake for?
She glances down at Tauren’s watch.
Wow, that all happened so fast. It’s only been a few hours, but it feels like It’s been a day.
“Well well. A eventful day I suppose?” Lesli says sarcastically.
“Yeah.” Tauren says, resting his head on his chin.
“How did you two get here?” Lesli glances across the small hallway at Luna and Paxton.
Ok you descriptions of Paxton hugging hope are sooooo cute
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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