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December 31, 2022 at 3:06 pm #126920
SERIN
Serin blinked open mud covered eyes. Looking around, she felt her body go on edge.
She didn’t recgonize her surroundings. Rather than the thick jungle outside of Pelgar, this forest was of tall pointed trees covered in mist.
Wiping her drenched face she surveyed more closely. It appeared that she hadn’t been kidnapped, there were no signs of a settlement, or any life for that matter. But she had to have arrived somehow. Had they taken her, only to dump her here and leave? Why?
Serin glared at the dewy sky. The air felt to thin. Is it really raining? What kind of place has cold rain? She thought to herself.
Grumbling, she lifted her body from the mucky ground with a squelch unbefitting a High General or a princess. Ugh, I’m getting too old for this. At the age of fifty, she was still approuching full adulthood in Pelgarkine years. Many had been surprised when her father had dubbed her a High general at such a young age, but they aknowledged that she had earned it.
Pulling excess mud from her dark teal hair, Serin started to move forward. This oddly freezing rain would be a real problem if she stayed still too long. She considered her options. Top prioraty was obviously to find some sort of shelter, but without any foreknowledge of where she was, that would be difficult.
Serin pursed her blue lips, almost wishing she had been surrounded by kidnappers. On the one hand it was good that both her menacing reputation and the saftey of Pelgar witheld. But on the other, she could have questioned any abducters after she’d inevitably incapacitated them. They would have known where they’d taken her.
As it was, it seemed that she was now by herself in this strange place. Alone. Serin shivered. I’m only reacting to this darn cold air. She told herself. High Generals were strong. They were leaders. They never worried about being alone in the dark.
A streak of light lit up the sky and her eyes followed it. A large tower flashed to life in the distance, then disapeared. Her eyes widened, then narrowed as she tried to make out the structure through the rain.
Serin stumbled toward it. It seemed her limbs wanted to remain frozen rather than seek out their natural agility. Reaching a clearing of trees, she arrived at the odd building. It was large, and had a strange shape with lots of towers and rooms put together. It was also the wrong color.
She shook her head as she tilted it up and down to look. Her home, the city of Pelgar, was made up of tall pale spires and bridges over water. Where was this buildings water? It looked like it had been built right into the ground.
Serin marched forward through the streaming downpour. The windows would be to hard to reach since they seemed to have glass in them. Though Serin wasn’t sure why anyone would put glass in a window, seemed wasteful.
Regardless she wouldnt be able to climb up in this weather anyway. That left the giant door before her, which appeared to be locked. Serin sighed again. Then, raising her fist, she banged loudly on the door, hoping for an answer.
SORRY THAT WAS SOOO LONG!!! XD once I start, sometimes it’s hard to stop.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 31, 2022 at 3:18 pm #126922Girl!!! You’re finally here!! Yay!! Maybe Serin can join the group my charries are in, once she enters the castle ;).
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December 31, 2022 at 3:21 pm #126924Um, I think I’ll wait for @mineralizedwritings to go ;). I’m gonna wait to write Easton until we have him interact a little more, so I don’t do it wrong ;).
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December 31, 2022 at 4:17 pm #126932I’m so sorry! I think I wanted to wait for @theloonyone to do something, but she isn’t on that often so I will rp soon!
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December 31, 2022 at 4:32 pm #126957milo
Milo slowly stepped closer to the dragon, Feather, and Crosshair. Feather was talking to it (Aurivis?) not scared at all. Crosshair didn’t seem worried, but wasn’t getting any closer, either. He took a couple more steps, tapped Crosshair on the shoulder, and whispered “What should we do?”
Aurivis’s huge head swing toward them, hearing the quiet whisper.
December 31, 2022 at 4:35 pm #126960@mineralizedwritings u on?
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 4:37 pm #126962@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
So sorry for the wait yall! I’m on now I’m about to rp
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 31, 2022 at 4:39 pm #126965December 31, 2022 at 4:48 pm #126972@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Easton
“Y-you leave u-us alone, a-and we won’t have a-any p-problems,” Mathew tries to stand tall.
Easton glares down at the boy. His gaze softens as he watches Mathew shake slightly. Mathew face turns to a shaky grimace of defiance, and his eyes flame for his companions around him.
“Easton! Get up.” 14 year old Easton is pulled up from the ground roughly by his father.
“S-s-sor-ry.” Easton cringes at his own stutter, pushing against a tree to balance himself.
“What are you doing out here?”
“I-I was looking for the Himmler’s. I thought maybe-“
I thought maybe they were too young to be on there own out here?
“You worry about yourself.” Easton’s father glares wholes through his back as he turns to walk away.
“You want to be a fierce warrior- you fight for yourself. You don’t use precious time worrying about the kids next door.”
“Right.” Easton cringes, looking over to the other side of the pasture. His older brother stands by, watching from a distance. He waits for his father to return to practice fighting.
Easton backs off a few steps, disturbed by the similarity.
I’m not like that anymore…. but I once was.
He turns, shooting a death glare at everyone else in the room before leaving down a passageway. Tauren flinches again, his hand now in Lesli’s.
The room stays quite for a moment of shock.
(Ok yall can tell me what you think about that, I didn’t really want him to hurt anyone 😂 he might shove somebody to the ground if it’s a adult later idk.)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 31, 2022 at 4:56 pm #126979Aurivis
“I don’t know how to get back. I think something has to happen….We always have to do something, or finish something before we leave.”
”What should we do?” One of the other humans whispered. Aurivis swung his head around to look him. The human went silent and stared.
“Finish something?” He said “How about I find the person responsible for bringing us here and finish him? That’s what we’ll do.”
With that, he began climbing back down the castle wall. “Are you coming?”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 31, 2022 at 4:57 pm #126981Awwww! You have successfully made me love Easton <3 XD. All you gotta do is add a backstory of a younger version of anyone with a stutter and being pushed around/abused and I fall in love. Especially bc I love my Matthew, and they remind me of Matt.
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December 31, 2022 at 5:00 pm #126982@lightoverdarkness6 IKR!!!! @mineralizedwritings EASTON IS NOW OFFICIALLY A CHARRIE WE CAN CONNECT WITH XD XD but if he shoves someone, depending on who it is he can probably expect retaliation XD
*Me thinking if he shoves someone around Grimm, or Riker and The Twins*
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 5:02 pm #126985Hello Hello!
Here on Kp, we like to ask people a lot of random questions when they join to get to know them better 😉
Have you made a “start here” entry post? It’s the best way to get to know everyone here and have them get to know you, and you’ll get to answer fun questions about your wip and stuffs.
If you click community at the top, then start here should be the first forum to show, and you can make a post to introduce yourself, and people will ask you stuffs (Sorry if that was confusing)
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylinOk so we are on the hunt to look for Beth, Simon, November, and Ara right? Maybe we can run into them in front of the castle door where @princesachronicle22 has her character? If you guys have a better idea feel free to share! Or another group can find her.
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December 31, 2022 at 5:13 pm #126991@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Maybe we could wait to run into November and them since that’s such a big group with him rn, but we can run into Arabella and @freedomwriter76 character Ellie if she doesn’t mind!
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#ProtectSebDecember 31, 2022 at 5:13 pm #126992Finally reunite paxton and Ara
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