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December 30, 2022 at 8:34 pm #126792
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Maybe Eddie can meet up with Reuben and Jakob because she never really met Reuben even though he helped her when she was hurt.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 30, 2022 at 8:57 pm #126801@freedomwriter76
Ughhh Leo!!! He is so precious. I had forgotten that he was still injured!! He’s probably gonna need medical care pretty soon! Good, Felix!! You need to be a little worried about your son. Who is way more of a man then you’ll ever be. ADOULPHUS AND ARAMIS AND EDRICH!!!! Ugh they make me so angry DX DX!! (Not so much Dietrich, bc of his change of heart, but the others? Oh, they better be glad they’re fictional.
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December 30, 2022 at 9:05 pm #126802@lightoverdarkness6 IKR!! @loopylin do either of y’all wanna RP?
@mineralizedwritings u on?#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebDecember 30, 2022 at 9:09 pm #126803Yea, I’ll rp soon.
What is Easton’s backstory/motivation? I’m kinda nervous to play him cuz I don’t feel like I know him well.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 30, 2022 at 9:10 pm #126804Watching wingfeather saga with my sister long distance rn!
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December 30, 2022 at 9:20 pm #126806@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 Aww, poor Paxton!! He’s so sweet. None of the charries will let mean old Easton hurt you! @loopylin I have a feeling Carter is not gonna like Easton XD. @mineralizedwritings Aww, sweet Tauren!! Haha, I don’t like Easton already XD!
Matthew
We started walking down the hall, the others talking about who each of them were looking for. Suddenly, Tauren opened a door, and I jumped at the sound of a loud voice booming, “WHO GOES THERE?!!” “This is my castle.”
A short but proud looking man stepped out of the door, and flamboyantly threw it shut behind himself.
Tauren nervously backpedaled towards the wall. “Uh-oh! I’m very sorry, I don’t even know how I got here!”
I shrunk back to the wall, eyes wide. Why oh why are there so many scary people in this castle?!
“Is that so.” He narrowed his eyes at Tauren before turning to survey the rest of us.
I shuddered when his eyes landed on me.
“Y-yes.” Tauren stuttered.
I looked over a few feet at Paxton, who was clinging to Luna’s side, eyes wide with fear. Poor, sweet, little guy!
I watched Luna whisper softly in his ear, and then she stepped forward, anger dancing in her eyes. “And who exactly are you?!” She cried.
“I’m Easton. I’ve traveled far to get here, to defend the castle of my heritage.” Easton straightened, standing in the opening of the exit, looking proud at succeeding in scaring a bunch of young teenagers.
Anger welled up in me. What a jerk!
“I mean to eventually empty this castle to be reclaimed, by me that is.” He pointed to himself, then shot a tense gaze at Tauren who flinched. He scooted warily down the wall towards Lesli.
“Although perhaps… a couple young people…” He raised an eyebrow at Luna’s unusual appearance. “Could be of help?”
“I will leave you all alone, for awhile, under one condition.” He glared at the small group of people that I had come to cherish. “Tell me the location of this so called ‘dragon’ so I may rid my castle of it’s existence.”
“I figure it’s best to tackle the biggest problem first.” He paused. “If you do not know where it is, you may find it for me.”
Suddenly I found Lyla at my side. “We may find it for him. Ha!” She was seething. My eyes widened. I hadn’t seen her this angry in…a long while.
Then Luna stepped up to the man, Easton, and stood tall. “I’m sorry sir. But first, we don’t know where the dragon is, and secondly, if we did,” she sucked in a breath, “We would not tell you where it was.”
The man glared at her, eyes fiery. I sucked in a breath. She was so brave. And standing up to the man, all alone!
I was struck with guilt. What am I doing over here, cowering like a little toddler? Luna needs some support.
I stepped away from the wall where I had been hiding, shakily took a deep breath, then breathed out and walked up beside Luna. She glanced at me gratefully, and I beamed a lopsided smile. Then I turned to the man, stood up straight, and gritted my teeth.
“Y-you leave u-us alone, a-and we won’t have a-any p-problems,” I stated as fiercely as I could, which, honestly, wasn’t very.
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December 30, 2022 at 9:23 pm #126808That sounds like fun!! We haven’t watched the 3rd episode yet. I’m excited for when we will, though!! “In the Catacombs below.” That’s one of my favorite parts in the first book, when they go to Anklejelly manor. 🙂
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December 30, 2022 at 9:41 pm #126811@lightoverdarkness6 AWWW MATTHEW!!! I absolutely love him!! He’s so much like Paxton, just a bit more out there because Paxton’s still just come out of all the abuse he’s been through.
AND UR NOT A COWARD MATTHEW!
Luna
Luna looked over where Matthew now stood beside her, trying to stand as tall as he could, though he was still a bit shorter then herself (Luna is a bit tall even as a 13 year old, tho paxton is small as an 11 year old lol)
Luna smiled at the boy’s bravery and he returned it with a small one of his own. (I also am afraid of writing Easton because I don’t know him that well @mineralizedwritings)
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#ProtectSebDecember 30, 2022 at 9:42 pm #126812I really want some more convos now with Paxton and Matthew (and all the others really 😊)
alsl really love how Luna and Pax’s friendship is growing!!
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#ProtectSebDecember 30, 2022 at 9:57 pm #126816AWWW MATTHEW!!! I absolutely love him!! He’s so much like Paxton, just a bit more out there because Paxton’s still just come out of all the abuse he’s been through.
IKR?!?! Both of our boys are SOOO PRECIOUS!!! I’m so glad we’ve had them meet. I LOVE writing their little interactions <3 <3
AND UR NOT A COWARD MATTHEW!
Aww, no he is not!! He thinks he is tho, and that’s one of the main things he struggles with in his book 😭😭
Luna looked over where Matthew now stood beside her, trying to stand as tall as he could, though he was still a bit shorter then herself (Luna is a bit tall even as a 13 year old, tho paxton is small as an 11 year old lol)
Yeah, and Matthew is really short for a 13 year old. Like, probably shoulder/neck height to Luna XD. That’s another thing he beats himself up about 😭😭
Also, I think Easton’s like, motivation is getting his father’s castle back, and emptying it of characters 😬
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December 30, 2022 at 9:58 pm #126817@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
Carter and Carmen
The man, Easton, walked out of the shadows. Carter tensed, stepping protectively in front Carmen, Lyla, and Matthew. He shoved his hand in his pocket to grip his piece of dragon stone. He didn’t know how to use it, but it gave him some sense of control.
“I will leave you all alone,” Easton said “For awhile, under one condition. Tell me the location of this so called ‘dragon’ so I may rid my castle of it’s existence.”
He thought he could kill a dragon? Carter almost laughed. Sure, the man looked intimidating, but there was no way he could be a match for something that big and powerful.
The man continued. “I figure it’s best to tackle the biggest problem first. If you do not know where it is, you may find it for me.”
Heat rose up in Carter’s chest. Who did this guy think he was? He stepped forward, but Luna beat him to it.
“I’m sorry sir. But first, we don’t know where the dragon is, and secondly, if we did, we would not tell you where it was.”“Ha! Yeah, I’d be wrong for us to lead you to your own death.” Carter said, now standing next to Luna.
Carmen crept up behind him and whispered, “I don’t think you should be aggravating the rude guy with the sword, Carter.”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 30, 2022 at 9:59 pm #126818@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings Whoops I missed a couple posts. You can ignore my last rp
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 30, 2022 at 10:15 pm #126819@loopylin nawh ur post still works, we’ll just stick what Carter says after what Matthew says 😊
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#ProtectSebDecember 30, 2022 at 10:21 pm #126821ok! But ignore what Carmen said, and I’m gonna add a little more
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 30, 2022 at 10:23 pm #126822Yeah! They made some plot changes, but they were all really good and imo the animated series is a little better than the first book.
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