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December 26, 2022 at 12:16 pm #125740
@sarafini
I last mention I could find of her was on page 231, but then I don’t know where she went or with what group.
I was also skim reading so may have missed her.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 1:05 pm #125744@freedomwriter76
š„³ So glad youāre back!!!!!! I know Iāve only known you on here for a bit, but I missed ya!!!
Our group is getting a little big. Do you want me take a pair of my charries and have them find someone else? Or should I keep them? I really have no preference. I just know that you already have a lot of charries to keep track of all over the castle.
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
December 26, 2022 at 1:08 pm #125747I hope I got what November would say right…
The Twins
Run? The very idea! Vulkasin crossed his arms, face solemn.
Zlatan stepped back slightly to think. He ran one hand down the back of his neck, winced. “Then v’at would happen to you?”
“You…you don’t understand.” NovembrĆ© frowned and tugged at his curls. “I’m… dangerous.”
“So am I.” Zlatan sighed. Blind rage was so much closer for him right now, what with pain and the constant faint scent of blood. Then again, he didn’t know what November would do. He had looked about to combust, to burst into the flames that had flickered in his eyes. Still. I already have too much regret. “Ve shall see. I can’t leave you Brot’er. What v’ould happen to you?”
“I’d be alright.”
The twins locked eyes. “Ve shall see.”
They started walking again.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 1:44 pm #125752Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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SCREEEE I JUST SAW UR BACK!!! I MISSED U SOOOOOOO MUUUUUUCCCCCHHHH!!! *huuuuugs tight!!*
*hugs you back even tighter!!!* I missed you soooo much too!!!! <3333
YES PLEASE KEEP THE BOYS!!! Oh hey maybe this can make Reuben end up with one of his brothers again, idk.
You love them so much, and that makes me so happy. XD Yes! That’s actually the plan!!! š
Also thisāll be cool because when November sees Riker again (if he does) heāll know like āwhoaā¦.didā¦he leave andā¦time change?!?!ā And Rikerāll be like āNOVEMBER I MISSED YA!ā XD XD
Lol, yes! XDXDXDXDXDXD.
Iām glad u kept Riker in!!!
Me too! My baby is always around…I can’t bear the thought of taking him out…xD
ALSO freedom, Ara is all by herself if u want her to meet one of ur charries!!
even one of the bad onesā¦up to u!!
Ooh, I’ll see what I can do! š
@mineralizedwritings. Yeah….Julius is gone…it just got really confusing for me, especially since I was gone. XDAnd thanks! I love (most of them) too! xD
@koshka. YESSS!!! I’m sooo happy to be back!!! I missed y’all soooo much!!!Yes, I love them so much! (most of them, anyways…xD)
OOH, can’t wait to meet him!!! Or should I be scared…? Hmmm…*thinks deep* XD
@esther-c. I missed you too! Yep, happy to get back to everything and everyone on KP! šAwesome!! Thatās great!! Yes, me and my family had a great Christmas too! I got a character work book that Iām really excited about! Iāve been looking for a good Character development sheet, and that one looks really good.
Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! š š
Lol. You always choose the best looking characters!! And they fit their names perfectly!
They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XDI’m glad they fit their names! š
He is!! So PRECIOUS!!!
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Oh, and Iāve got something to ask youā¦*whispers* Can I be part of the protection squad?? I may have someone to protect. šš
Absolutely! š
December 26, 2022 at 1:58 pm #125756Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oh, and there’s a few more charries I want to add to develop more…I’ll be spreading them out to keep track of everyone better, lol. XD
So, without further ado, I first introduce y’all to Ezekiel Reiner Gessner!
Age: 32
Profession: Pastor
Personality: Courageous, firm, loving, compassionate, always stands for his beliefs and convictions, always tries to do whatās right, honest (sometimes somewhat brutallyā¦), a faithful and strong man of God, does everything he can to protect the innocent
Looks: Dark brown, wavy hair that comes right below his ears, pale skin, light brown eyes, a somewhat muscled build
(A Pastor, husband, and father to 3 young kids)
Ellie Hannah Braun
Age: 20
Profession: Mother and Wife
Personality: Forgiving, loving, devoted, hard-working, faithful, a strong woman of God, always sees the best in others, never gives up on the people she loves
Looks: Long, bright blonde hair, more often than not worn in a long braid, bright blue eyes, pale skin, freckles on her nose and cheeks, and wears a 1940s era light pink dress, stockings, and white flats
She is Erich’s wife.
She will have her son with her, so here’s her six-month-old baby boy, Abel. <333 (i’ll put the other pics separately…)
Hilda Matilda Kleine
Age: 21
Profession: SS Officer (1st Lieutenant)
Personality: Vain, prideful, arrogant, manipulative, controlling, cruel, hard-working
Looks: Bright blonde hair cut shoulder-length and in a 1940s era bob, dark brown eyes, pale skin, and wears an SS Female Officer uniform. (basically the same as the man’s, just with a skirt instead)
December 26, 2022 at 1:59 pm #125757Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Ezekiel
December 26, 2022 at 1:59 pm #125758Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Ellie
December 26, 2022 at 2:00 pm #125759Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Hilda
December 26, 2022 at 2:19 pm #125760Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I’m gonna have Ellie meet Arabella, if you don’t mind! š And I’m gonna RP as a few others, too. š
Ellie
She heard a voice…soft…maybe…muffled…
Was someone crying? Or maybe Praying?
Ellie held Abel, who slept in her arms, closer, shielding her baby boy with her arms.
The voice sounded…feminine, though.
But it was getting louder…closer…and she couldn’t take any chances.
But she felt…safe, almost. God was with her, and she had no reason to fear.
She stepped around the corner, just as a brunette girl came around the corner. Her eyes fell on Ellie and widened.
Ellie held out a hand. “Wait…I mean no harm. I don’t know how I got here…I am Ellie. Ellie Braun, and this is my son…I mean you no harm.”
Himmler
Edy wrapped her arms tighter around his neck.
Himmler gently eased her grip, not wanting to be choked, and kissed her forehead. Edy sniffed and clung to him tighter, wrapping her legs around him tighter instead of her arms.
It was better. But he hated having his little girl so scared to leave his side.
And he had no idea where Camille was…and if she was safe.
Oh, dear God, please let her be safe, he thought.
“If we’re going to get anything done, we need to move.” Felix mused.
Himmler turned to face his oldest brother.
Felix had seemed to come out of nowhere, as had Hilda, one of the female SS officers, who was also engaged to Adolphus.
Frida nodded; one arm wrapped around her husband. “That is true, darling. We should get moving.”
“There must be other people here, isn’t there?” Hilda asked with a raised eyebrow.
Adolphus nodded and kissed her. “There are, my love. Including my other stepbrothers.”
Hilda nodded and smirked. “Well, at least one of them is here.” She mused.
Himmler glanced at his nephew, who was sitting on the floor against the wall.
Leo glanced up, and their eyes met.
Leo had shown up out of nowhere with Edy, but none of his brothers were with him. Which was extremely odd.
Felix nodded. “Let’s move then.”
(Ezekiel is just in the castle walking around praying somewhere…but he’s alone for now, lol. xD)
December 26, 2022 at 2:31 pm #125762@freedomwriter76
Bwahaha!!!
Actually, there isn’t much to worry about when it comes to Wilkins… DaithĆ may be another problem, but the two both need help, er, development.
Awww, no body better hurt those poor darlings!
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 2:35 pm #125764Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than DaithĆ’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous manner. A poet at heart, even if he doesn’t write much verse. A deep rooted love for his Maker burns inside, a relationship which has grown through trial and overflows into all other areas of his life.
He wears a kilt of solid green, a gray tunic and cloak, and soft leather turn shoes. Carries a small Irish battle-ax hanging from his belt, and a round shield on his back.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 2:37 pm #125766DaithĆ MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, DaithĆ has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. He’s a master of deception and fluent in several languages.
Wears a kilt of the Lasairin tartan (dark red, yellow, and white, on a field of light red), a dark, hooded cloak (although he rarely wears the hood up), undyed tunic, and soft leather boots. Carries a dirk and small leather pouch in his belt.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 2:40 pm #125767@freedomwriter76
Freedom!! Youāre back! *tackles you with a hug* How was your Christmas?
@sarafini
ok, you mean the group with me, loony, and e m trepke, right? That group has Simon, Beth (my characters), Elissa, Cammie (loonyās characters), and trepkeās character (I forgot his name). They wereĀ attacked by a really powerful wind storm, but they just escaped into the next room. Simon, my character, probably got a concussion from getting thrown around by the wind.
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
December 26, 2022 at 2:46 pm #125769@freedomwriter76
Is Reuben still here?
Godly teleported some of her charries around and just blamed it on my dragon joining. I might do the same thing with my aliens and just leave the ship there for people to mess around with. That group hasnāt done anything since you left.
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āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
December 26, 2022 at 2:47 pm #125770Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. I am sooo intrigued. š
AND WILKINS!!!!! *heart eyes* I’ve always loved him. XDXDXDXD
*hugs you back, tightly* I’ve missed you!!!!!!!
It was great, thank you!!! Had a great time with family and got some notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted for Christmas!!! (though the week leading up to Christmas…it was scary outside. Negative 20-something degrees at night…XXXD) How was your Christmas? I hope it was amazing! <333
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