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November 14, 2022 at 6:25 pm #121399
Whoa that was a long oneđ€Šđ»ââïžđ. Sorry yâall!
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November 14, 2022 at 7:37 pm #121406@lightoverdarkness6 Â Thatâs not very long, actually. You should see some of the things freedom and godlyfantasy have written đ. The longer ones are the most fun to read anyway. Â @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Simon
âShould we follow them? Weâll need a place to sleep and shelter if it rains. And maybe we can find something to eat in that castle.â
Simon glanced over Carter. At the mention of food, the young boyâs eyes had widened and his mouth had opened slightly. Simon smirked. Carter had reach the age in a boyâs life where he had the constant appetite of a lion.
Simon nodded and started casually walking towards the castle. âYeah. Letâs go.â
Matthew and Carter followed immediately. The redhead boy hesitated for a moment, but then followed as well.
As they walked, Simon answered Matthewâs previous question. âI havenât seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.â
Carter let out a small gasp. âYouâre right! I canât believe I didnât notice. CarmenâŠâ
Guilt covered his face and it was clear he was beating himself up in his head.
âItâs alright, Carter.â Simon reassured him. âWe only woke up here a few moments ago. Weâll look for themâ
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
November 14, 2022 at 8:42 pm #121409@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Lol, we seem to have a thing with missing sisters, Kaine has one too đđ€Ł
Kaine
âItâs alright, Carter.â Simon reassures him. âWe only woke up here a few moments ago. Weâll look for themâ
Kaine follows behind the larger group.
Yeah that girls got a good idea.
We need to reach shelter.
Kaine turns around face Carter and Simon.
Carter lets out a small gasp. âYouâre right! I canât believe I didnât notice. CarmenâŠâ
“Your missing a sister?” Kaine asks. “So am I.”
I hope my sister is doing okay… I have no idea how time works in this world. She will probably need some water soon… and who knows if she has the energy to get it herself.
These people seem pretty safe. But I’ll still have my bow at the ready. You never now when a grouse will show up. We need food.
“Well, lets go to the castle. We don’t want to be caught out in the cold.” Kaine says loudly, so the entire group can here. He runs up to the rest of the group towards the castle.
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 14, 2022 at 9:04 pm #121414@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Oh okay! Lol yea, we should make a group of all the sisters inside the castle!
Matthew
âYeah. Letâs go,â the boy, Simon said. Then he said, âI havenât seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.â My face fell. She was 8 minutes older than me, she was supposed to be taking care of me! And yet, I was always getting her out of trouble. She wasâŠvery care free, outgoing, bubbly. Always happy and liked making me laugh. I groaned inwardly. With my luck, she was probably on the moon!! Heck, maybe this place is the moon, I thought. I realized that the boy Simon was taking again. âCarter and I are missing some sisters as well.â
Another Carter! Just like my brother. Carter started visibly beating himself up,Youâre right! I canât believe I didnât notice. CarmenâŠâ His face showed his lamentation.
âItâs alright, Carter.â Simon reassured him. âWe only woke up here a few moments ago. Weâll look for them.â Â I heard Kaine ask us, âYâall are missing sisters? So am I.â
âYeah, my sisterâs name is Lyla. Sheâs very outgoing. A-and sheâs my t-twin! Whats your sisters like?â I turned around and started walking backwards to face the other boys.#HugRikerSquad
November 14, 2022 at 9:07 pm #121415Hereâs Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthewâs hair is different though.
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November 14, 2022 at 9:08 pm #121416Hereâs Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthewâs hair is different though.
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November 14, 2022 at 9:39 pm #121422@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin
Ok sooo… I forgot Kaine sisters name đ« I never came up for a definitive one and forgot my placeholder lol. I’ll pick something that works. Did some searching, lol were going with Evelyn (that might change). THIS IS WHY U WRITE DOWN YOUR NAMES PEOPLE!
Kaine
“Y’all are missing some sisters? I’m missing mine too” Kaine says to Mathew.
âYeah, my sisterâs name is Lyla. Sheâs very outgoing. A-and sheâs my t-twin! Whats your sisters like?â
“Oh, twin! Nice.” Kaine says.
“Umm.” Kaine pauses, looking at the floor.
“She’s uh… really sweet. She’s older than me too.” Kaine looks back up. “She’s injured. I take care of her everyday. She’s a really good shot, much better than me, but I have to do the hunting because of her injury.” Kaine says, gesturing at his bow. He walks in the direction of the castle alongside Mathew.
“Yours?” Kaine asks Mathew.
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November 14, 2022 at 10:23 pm #121426@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Thatâs funny that they all each have a missing sister đ. Would you guys want to maybe add all the sisters in a separate group later? Then our characters would all have a goal (finding their sibling) to complete before we take them out of the castle. We donât have to, though.
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
November 14, 2022 at 10:26 pm #121427That sounds great! Good idea!
Not sure how that’ll work with mine, She’s injured and at this point was under Kaine’s pretty constant care. Lol, we’ll figure it out. I’d love to do that though! Whenever you want to start that is good. Let’s give the boys (and cammie) an obstacle so it isn’t immediate though… maybe they have to cross through a dense forest, a river, or cave… whatever works.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 14, 2022 at 10:43 pm #121431Yay! Iâm glad you like the idea! My characters could probably take care of Evelyn if it doesnât take a large amount of medical knowledge. Theyâd certainly be willing to.
I think they already have an obstacle because the castle is pretty much a never ending maze and there are a few villains roaming around that we could bump into. Also, itâs in the original rules that we canât leave the outer walls of the castle, so no forest or caves. Unless we put a small forest inside the castleâŠ?  Oh! Or a cave system under the castle! With a monster in it!
Never mind, ignore my crazy ideas đ
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
November 14, 2022 at 10:49 pm #121433@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Milo
Milo listened as the rest of the group talked about their sisters. He walked beside Cammie in the front, the rest followed behind them. His legs were starting to get sore making it harder to put each foot in front of the other. From beside him, Cammie finally spoke to the group, “Sorry, guys, for ditching you all. I just ah,” She rubbed her neck in thought. “I don’t know what is going on either and I needed to do something. Maybe if we can get to that castle, thing, we can get some answers.” She looked hopefully behind her at the cluster of people who had somehow ended up together.
November 14, 2022 at 10:58 pm #121436Oh ok! Yeah, cave or village, whatever works. At this point in the story, Evelyn is sitting inside all the time (Kain insists she doesn’t move a finger unless she wants to and it won’t hurt her đ) But yeah she has a gash in her arm and I think it’s a bit infected. I say infected because she extremely tired and he helps her with everything, and that would be a reason she is so tired. But I can speed up the healing abit if it becomes necessary for the RP.
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November 14, 2022 at 11:03 pm #121437@mineralizedwritings @loopylin hey so itâs totally up to yâall it doesnât really affect us at all, but I think the original creator of this (who isnât on here anymore) had once said that like the castle was limited to only within like the castles courtyard and the actual castle??
idk thoâŠ.
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#ProtectSebNovember 14, 2022 at 11:23 pm #121439@godlyfantasy12 Thatâs what I said. But that doesnât stop us from putting weird stuff like an entire forest inside the castle.đ  Just kidding, thatâd be a lil too crazy. (I do like my cave system idea from earlier thoâŠ)
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November 14, 2022 at 11:32 pm #121442@loopylin OOOH I LUV THAT!!!!
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