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November 8, 2022 at 8:17 am #121043
@lightoverdarkness16 aww thx! Yea, I gotta wait for others in my group to RP
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebNovember 8, 2022 at 8:19 am #121044@godlyfantasy
You’re welcome! Yep. See you around!
#HugRikerSquad
November 8, 2022 at 8:29 am #121045This is a reference pic of Matthew’s hair. He keeps it over his ears. But his hair is more light brown.
#HugRikerSquad
November 8, 2022 at 8:31 am #121046@theloonyone @loopylin @@mineralizedwritings
#HugRikerSquad
November 8, 2022 at 11:12 am #121057@loopylin Yeah, you should join us! I chose a bad week to start, though, cause I’m really busy. I’ll try to keep up. đ
November 8, 2022 at 12:51 pm #121062Perhaps I should put “Not one writing, but many writings” As my quote thingy at the bottom to help people remember my tag đ
Ok, Cool! How old is Mathew?
Kaine is 5′ 4″ for anyone wondering.
Kaine
Kaine’s eyes meet Milo’s.
“Do you know what’s going on here?” Milo says.
Kaine brings his bow down to his side, but keeps his confident stance.
“No. I thought maybe you would.” Kaine says. “I would like to know what land this is, who rules here, and who you ally with.”
“My name’s Kaine.” Kaine says.
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 8, 2022 at 2:25 pm #121066@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 anyone on?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebNovember 8, 2022 at 4:15 pm #121067Okay y’all I’m about to post. I’m going to add Matthew. I might add Carter a little later if y’all think the castle can handle it XD.
Thank you! Matthew is 13 almost 14.
Yeah, join us!
Yeah, I’m struggling to keep up too. You’re not alone XD!
#HugRikerSquad
November 8, 2022 at 5:10 pm #121069@godlyfantasy12 I’m on now! Just finished watching a Lego Jurassic World short with my brother, who had been wanting to watch it since yesterday…..
@freedomwriter76 @koshka
Feather
âI think weâre almost finished. Just a bit more, but yes, weâd appreciate the help.â
“All right.” Feather kneeled down to inspect the little fox’s wounds. He snapped at her, but she moved her hand away in time.
“Hey, you’re okay,” she whispered to him, holding his little paw in the position it needed to be as the boys bandaged it. “We’re helping you. You’re going to be fine.”
He screeched again as they finished, but was quiet in a few seconds.
Feather turned to Grimm. “He’ll live, right?”
Kad
âAlright, everyone chill. We all just want to go home and we need all this ship to do that, right? Yeah? But thereâs only so much food and air and water available for the trip. So, the way I see it, only two or three people are actually gonna get home. And I know I’m going to be one of those people.â said the red creature with one eye.
[Just one question, has he always had only one eye–like a cyclops-looking sort of creature–or is he supposed to have two and something injured one?]
He raised a weapon and fired. One of the alien twins went tumbling, although not seriously hurt.
The place erupted into chaos.
Kad flew up and away from the conflict, trying to assess the battle before attacking.
What weapons did he have again?
Of course, I have frostfire, claws, teeth, tail barb….he ran over his natural weapons in his mind. Then I have a blaster, my lightsabers, and the grappling hooks on my gauntlets. Should be enough, if one of them attacks me.
One of the humans went straight for him. He hissed and whipped around, his tail coming within inches of the smaller creature’s face. The human staggered back a few steps.
Good. Hopefully they realized he was best left alone.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 8, 2022 at 5:11 pm #121070@mineralizedwritings (many writings đ)
Yeah, Milo is taller. I don’t have an exact height but he is a tall adult-man đ. I don’t know what I’m saying.
Milo
What?
Cammie spoke from beside him, her eyes wide, “Uh, I ally with him.” She pointed at Milo.
“Right,” he mumbled before speaking to Kaine, “What do you mean who rules here?” Milo attempted to change his surroundings but couldn’t control it. He wasn’t in the simulation. He spoke to himself again, “Although I’m pretty sure I’m dreaming.”
“Wait!” He turned to see Cammie pulling out a phone. She powered it on and looked at it for a second. “That’s not right. I should be able to connect to the internet anywhere.”
Milo took a moment to study the third person. He was short, very short. Even shorter than Cammie. His hair was bright red and curly. In his hand was a- a bow? How had he not noticed that? “Is that a bow?” he asked with wide eyes.
November 8, 2022 at 5:21 pm #121071@keilah-h heya! @freedomwriter76
Grimm
âHeâll live right?â
Grimm swallowed, looking at the kit. He glanced at Nathan and Wolfgang, both with purses lips and pale faces. They held determined gazes in their eyes and offered a small, reassuring smile.
Grimm eyed the kitâs bandages, made from a variety of fabric Nathan and others had on hand. Theyâd stemmed the blood flow, and the kit had settled, going back into a fitful sleep, twitching every few minutes.
Grimm glanced back, seeing Paxton, held half asleep in Leoâs arms. He was glad the little boy had been nearly asleep for most of NyxâsâŠ.distressing situation.
He nodded. âI think heâll be alright. Like I said, kitâs a fighter. Have to be honest, I didnât expect as much from him when I first met himâŠbutâŠâ He shook his head, remembering the two and theirâŠ
First few months together.
âHe can surprise you.â He looked up at Nathan. âYou think heâs alright pick up?â
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebNovember 8, 2022 at 5:46 pm #121072@keilah-h hey u wanna RP as Crosshair? Iâm gonna do a Paxton RP. @freedomwriter76
Paxton
Leoâs arms were strong. Warm. Comforting.
Paxton felt himself sink into them, eyes drooping. Heâd squeezed his eyes shut, gripping the young manâs shirt tight every time Nyx let out a screech.
Finally, silence took over the halls again, and Paxton let out a sniffle. He peeked open his eyes, eyeing the group still around Nyx. He looked up at Leo, eyes lidded.
âItâs alright, PaxtonâŠtheyâre finished now,â Leo held him closer, arms careful to not touch the extremely sore spot on his back.
He shifted slightly with the movement. The wound still stung. A burning pain that enflamed whenever he moved.
He was thankful for the coat wrapped around him, no longer feeling as coldâŠ
ButâŠ
It didnât help the other feelings insideâŠ
The fear. The pain.
The sudden itch of lonelinessâŠ.
Feeling as though heâd done something wrong. Like heâdâŠneeded to be punished for something.
Like he was back homeâŠ
Though he was never hit with a whip beforeâŠhe wasâŠhit before.
He gripped Leoâs shirt, fingers twitching, skin crawling. He let out a pained sound. Not because he was hurt. More a sound of distress, like a child whoâd lost somethingâŠ
Because he had.
His mind reeled with the realization as tired eyes grew wide. He sat up, making the noise again, unable to speak. (So, I kind of have thisâŠthing where Paxton has a hint of autismâŠ.)
âPaxton? EasyâŠitâs okay,â Leo looked at him worriedly.
But that just made him grow all the more frantic, fingers squeezing the young manâs shirt tighter, pulling at it. He opened his mouth but no words came out.
Grimm looked back, hand on his knee. His brows furrowed. âHeyâŠâ His voice was loud, but soft, able to catch Paxtonâs attention. âItâs alright, Snowflake. Breathe. Just breathe.â
Paxton shook his head, looking around.
âWhat is it buddy? SlowlyâŠcome on,â Grimmâs voice was soft, as if heâd done this a million times over.
Paxtonâs lip trembled, a single tear falling. He looked over his shoulder and then gasped, pointing frantically.
There, on the ground, was Hope, his bear, lost in all the shuffle, right next to Crosshair.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebNovember 8, 2022 at 6:01 pm #121073@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
I’M HERE!
Also, do y’all mind if I add Winifrith? I’ve been thinking about it, and I’d really love to see her with Ara and the other lasses…
If I did add her, I think all my KoS characters would be in book two, all learning to “keep the faith”.
If that wouldn’t work, I understand and don’t mind. đ
Viktor
Did they know their way about? Viktor shot a glance at ReĂșven, brow quirked in question. ReĂșven nodded and twirled Lily in a circle. Viktor smiled and turned back to the adults.
“My cousin and I will help however.”
Besides, what better excuse to do some snooping with friends? His smile twitched broader and he turned to the door.
‘Not that our friends know that’s what we’re doing.’
He bit the inside of his lip and looked away.
The hall stretched before him, full of shadows where secrets danced.
Secrets.
Viktor touched the rod at his belt and sent up a prayer for strength.
‘Oh Lord, One Who Sees…’
ReĂșven
“I want a piggyback ride like Esen. Please?” Lilly’s blue eyes glowed with entreaty as she tugged on ReĂșven’s hand. His heart twisted but he laughed and looked back to Riker.
“Do you mind?”
“I mind?” Riker smiled. “No, as long as you don’t.”
Lily tugged on his hand again, and he used the force of her weight to swing her in another circle.
“All right, then, milady. Up you go!” Her laugh rang out in the passage as he lifted her up. The weight was familiar, although a lamb didn’t wrap tiny hands around his throat and choke him.
“Here. Hold my hands.” He let out a breath of relief. “Zeh tov.” (That’s good)
Viktor
He turned to watch ReĂșven settle the golden headed child on his shoulders. He smirked, then let his smile quiet as he remembered doing the same to his littlest sister NadĂan. Or having the same be done for him by his Papa in days when the sun rose clear.
He swallowed and fell wordlessly into step beside November. The red headed boy seemed a lost in thought at the moment, so Viktor didn’t begin any conversation. He didn’t know what to talk about either, to be honest.
The walls around them were more ornate, signaling that they were in a better side of the castle. The important side of the castle. The sconces were set into the stone with precision and an obvious care for beauty. Thin windows were cut in the outer facing wall to let in a small amount of light. Just enough to see by, but not quite enough to chase away the shadows. There were many shadows, but they seemed to gather in the hall behind them, which caused the hair on the back of his neck to prickle.
Esen ruffled her feathers and raised her head.
“What is it, Esen?” Viktor touched her talons.
A low cry rose in her throat. Someone was near.
ReĂșven stopped ahead and turned to face them. Five fingers danced on his belt.
A medium sized group, about five to eight. Viktor whispered the information to November, who had frozen with the rest of them.
Ok, so there’s a start! đÂ
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
November 8, 2022 at 6:20 pm #121074@elishavet-pidyon yay!! Also Iâm great with Winifrith! Idk if u did a bio for her or not but if so can u remind me đ @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
November froze at Viktorâs words. Riker put a finger to his lips, signaling to Lily to be quiet. The group approached slowly, eyes focusing on whoever the figures were.
âNovember?â A small girlâs voice rang out.
Luna?
November blinked, stepping further out.
(alsoâŠfor now Iâm just umm gonna not worry about Koshkaâs charries being their If thatâs ok cuz idk when sheâll be back lol!)
His eyes brightened with a smile as the sun sparkles through the paneless windows nearby, illuminating the familiar faces of his three friends.
Luna! Jocelyn!
AndâŠAra.
Araâs head snapped around at Lunaâs announcement, her brown hair swaying. Her eyes grew wide and she beamed.
âNovember!â She laughed, running at him with arms outstretched. She latched them around his neck, nearly knocking him over with the force of her hug.
November held his hands out awkwardly, his entire body heating at her touch. He could spot Luna giggling underneath her hand, and see Lynâs small smile, though she looked away when she spotted him, as if to say âWhat? I wasnât thinking anything!â
November slowly smiled, returning the embraced, ears turning all the more pink.
âIâm glad youâre safe.â Ara spoke, breathing into his ear.
âM-Me tooâŠâ He blinked. âAh! A-about youâŠI meanâŠâ He winced inwardly.
She straightened, but still held his shoulders, making them warm at the contact. Jocelyn and Luna approached.
Luna wrapped her arms around his waist, squeezing him tight, while Jocelyn gave him a playfully nudge on the shoulder.
Behind them stood two men, one dark-skinned, one fair.
The girls turned, âOh! This is Dawson, and Vince.â
November waved awkwardly.
Jocelyn glanced behind November. âLooks like youâve met some friends too!â She grinned.
November jolted, remembering thatâŠOh yea, he wasnât alone.
âOh! Y-yea! Ara, JocelynâŠyou remember Riker? And Viktor?â
Ara gasped as November stepped aside. Her eyes grew wide, brightening as she gazed at the two familiar faces. Lyn also beamed, letting out a jovial laugh.
âFamiliar faces!â Lyn squealed.
Ara gazed at the two of them, âItâs so good to see you both again! AndâŠwho is this?â She turned to ReĂșven and Lily, and then her eyes sparked on Esen. âMyâŠ.what aâŠbeautiful creature.â She stared in awe.
Luna tilted her head gazing at them all as the two men from behind slowly approached, obviously still wary.
âOh yea! This is Luna!â Jocelyn grabbed the little girl by the shoulder, pulling her into a half hug. Luna smiled.
âHow do you do!â
The little girl giggled, blinked at Luna. She reached out, gently touching one of her tall ears. Luna laughed too.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebNovember 8, 2022 at 6:20 pm #121075@godlyfantasy12 oh my goodness Paxton has a bit of autism? I do too!!! (Although not exactly like that. Maybe that’s why he gets along so well with Crosshair…?) And sure, I’ll do an RP!
@elishavet-pidyon Esen is so cool!! How big is she and what color is she? Also, which group are you meeting again?@freedomwriter76 @koshka
Crosshair
Paxton’s stuffed animal, portraying a species Crosshair was unfamiliar with, had been abandoned on the ground.
He picked it up and offered it to the whimpering boy. “My brother has one of these too.” he said. “Even though he’s far larger than you are.”
Not exactly much older though, in mind if not in body…….
Paxton sniffed. “Y-you have a brother?”
“Four brothers.” Crosshair explained. “And a sister. I didn’t realize how important they were to me until….it was almost too late….”
Given Paxton’s experiences, however, he wasn’t going to go into detail on that.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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