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October 20, 2022 at 8:50 pm #120143
My poor baby š¢
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#ProtectSebOctober 20, 2022 at 9:25 pm #120147@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon welpā¦Iām currently sitting at our church cuz we have a fundraiser going on. Everyoneās finishing up pretty much so Iām just sitting here nowā¦. XD
which Iāve pretty much just been sitting here the whole time cuz this is more of a slow fundraiserā¦..
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#ProtectSebOctober 21, 2022 at 12:31 am #120153@freedomwriter76 Sorry I havenāt been on much! Iāve had a ridiculous amount of schoolwork to catch up on.š£ Ā You can write for my characters if youāre ever waiting too long, I wouldnāt mind. I have a bit of time to rp now though! But you might live in a later time zoneā¦
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
October 21, 2022 at 1:24 am #120160No! Kp ate my post! šš¤
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
October 21, 2022 at 1:32 am #120161GRR happens to the best of us (and the worst of us, and all of us KP doesn’t care about anyone’s feelings)
@loopylin IDK what you’re able to do on your iPad but what works for me is either pressing undo or the back button, then it usually shows me my post and I can try reposting it. If I’m writing something super long on KP then I’ll copy-paste it onto my notes app/wordpad and save it there, juuust in case- This reply was modified 2 years ago by Ava Blue. Reason: im howmskewld end i kant spel :(
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepOctober 21, 2022 at 1:50 am #120163@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Eddie
The group began their chase. The sisters soon were running a few yards ahead. They were fast, but after turning a few corners, they lost sight of Dante. Eddie turned one more corner, and skidded to a halt in front of a pair of feet that definitely did not belong to Dante. She slowly looked up. Scales. Wings. Talons.
This guy looks like a dragon.
And he was huge. Eddie barely came up to his knees. She was used to being small, but this was impressive. For a moment, she completely forgot about Dante.
āWowā Ellie breathed next to her.
Eddie quickly remembered her manners. Looking up to meet the dragon-manās eyes, she introduced herself.
āErmā¦Hello! Iām Eddie.ā
Wayne and Zayne rounded the corner behind them, and stopped.
āAnd these are Zayne and Wayne and also my twin sister Ellie. Who are you?ā
(btw E+E are inhumanly fast and agile to make up for their small size)
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
October 21, 2022 at 1:52 am #120164@ava-blue Oh thanks! I just rewrote the whole thing š
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
October 21, 2022 at 8:36 am #120167Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. You’re Totally Fine Girl! š IĀ totallyĀ understand! š I just thought you’d like a chance to RP, that’s all! :3
October 21, 2022 at 9:27 am #120170Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka.
Wolfgang
They…they were…gone.
Just like that.
But…would they be back?
Wolfgang got down onto the floor and carefully, softly, pulled Paxton into his arms, as Paxton buried his face in his bear’s fluff. “It’s okay Paxton…they….they’re gone now…” He whispered, holding Paxton, carefully and softly, close.
Reuben
They…were finally gone.
Reuben took in a deep breath.
He was safe…he was safe…he was safe here.
Leo was bandaging Joshua’s arm with a wrap of bandages he evidently had on him.
He wrapped Joshua up.
Joshua smiled. “Thank you. I think it would be best for us to move on…if…Paxton is okay to…”
Reuben glanced at Paxton and Wolfgang.
Paxton was terrified.
Reuben knew that feeling well.
He got down beside them. “Paxton…are you okay to go on?” He whispered.
Jakob
Jakob walked over to the…oddly dressed man, who was on the ground beside the just as oddly dressed woman on the floor, who was unconscious.
“Thank you for helping us…is she alright?” Jakob asked, turning his attention to the blonde woman, just as the man looked up at him.
October 21, 2022 at 9:36 am #120171Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Oh, and yes, I can do Riker and Leon. Sorry, I didn’t get to it yesterday. š¤¦š»āāļø @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @keilah-h.
Riker
Riker smiled.
November’s cheeks were flushed pink.
He was just as lovesick as before…maybe even more so now.
Riker smirked.
Everyone laughed softly, and November looked away.
“Hey, you’re good November. We understand…” Leon trailed off.
Riker glanced at him.
Leon bit his lip and looked away.Ā (KeepĀ in mind that though he’s been redeemed, Leon still struggles some days with the grief from his wife’s death. Leon never remarries, btw.)
Riker turned his attention back to November. Smiled. “What have you been up to since we last saw you?” He turned to Viktor. “And you as well. What have you been up to?”
October 21, 2022 at 1:04 pm #120177@elishavet-pidyon do u wanna respond?
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#ProtectSebOctober 21, 2022 at 1:12 pm #120178@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
They were goneā¦
But theyād be backā¦
For him.
Arms wrapped around him and he tensed, jerking slightly as he was pulled closer to Wolfgang. Slowly, his shoulder relaxed and he buried his face into the young manās chest, quietly sniffling.
Frozen.
āItās okay Paxtonā¦theyā¦.theyāre gone nowā¦ā Wolfgangās voice was soothing, but it didnāt calm the thoughts in Paxtonās mind.
He thought they were goneā¦that heād never have to see them againā¦
Thatās what Ara had saidā¦when they left his homeā¦
He never wanted to go backā¦not once he realized how much better things were outsideā¦
How muchā¦loveĀ there really wasā¦
His body constricted with every breath, and he shakily wrapped his arms around Wolfgangās neck.
He wanted his sisterā¦.
He wanted his friendsā¦
āPaxtonā¦are you okay to go on?ā
The little boy peeked out and found Reuben, still pale, kneeling beside them. His brows furrowed but he held a small, gentle smile on his lips.
Paxton was still shaking, unable to control it. Slowly, he nodded.
He wanted to goā¦
He didnāt want them to come backā¦
Andā¦andā¦
He wanted to find Araā¦Emberā¦Wulfā¦
He glanced behind the group to the oddly dressed duo. One of which, the young lady with blonde hair, was still out of it.
āI-I-is sh-sheā¦she alright?ā He whispered.
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#ProtectSebOctober 21, 2022 at 1:22 pm #120180@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
She awoke with a groan. That winged creature had thrown her into the wall…..hard. What a bully!
“Is she all right?” came a couple of voices. Young voices.
“She’ll be fine.” replied Crosshair’s voice. She was glad the winged ruffians hadn’t hurt him too badly.
Feather opened her eyes and pulled herself up, ignoring the protests from her rather jarred bones. She hoped she hadn’t broken anything, although she didn’t think she did.
Several worried faces were staring at her, although the winged ones had clearly left. Only one of those faces she recognized.
She realized they probably wanted to know who they were.
“My name’s Feather,” she explained, “and that’s my husband, Crosshair. What are your names?”
Kad
“Hello! I’m Eddie.” said one of the small creatures. “These are Wayne and Zayne and my sister, Ellie. Who are you?”
“My name is Kad Skirata, of the CloneWing Tribe. I hail from Mandalore.” Kad bowed low with his wings spread, the way his grandfather had taught him, bringing “oohs” from the small creatures as he showed the striped yellow and white scales on his wings. He made sure to keep his tail barb safely curled in. “I can’t seem to figure out what you are though. What planet are you from?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 21, 2022 at 1:27 pm #120182@freedomwriter76 u wanna go?
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#ProtectSebOctober 21, 2022 at 1:28 pm #120183@freedomwriter76 u can also get us loving if u like š
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