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October 19, 2022 at 11:56 am #120006
@freedomwriter76 okie dokiley!! I may start having them get close to where the bois are then… @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Paxton watched the brothers laugh once more at the teasing, his heart fluttering in his chest. He was still trying to grow used to the banter that a normal family had…
The way they teased and laughed…how it didn’t anger them…
If he’d said what Reuben said to his brothers….
Well…
He often didn’t say much of anything to them…
“I-I’m glad y-you f-found me…” He whispered, leaning closer to Wolfgang, “I…I thought everyone had….had…l-left me…”
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 12:03 pm #120007@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
November
Lily giggled at Reúven’s introduction, making November smile.
Time had obviously passed for all of the group, and Riker must’ve had another little girl…similar to Naja, yet…entirely different at the same time.
With blonde locks that made him think of Lynnie.
“How are both of you doing, Viktor?” Riker addressed the brown-haired young man. And then, his soft eyes turned to November. November stiffened slightly, feeling as though the man were seeing through him.
He smiled.
“And how are you, November?”
November swallowed the lump in his throat, nerves twitching at the question.
“Good. I’m good.”
Liar.
He forced a dimpled smile, rubbing the back of his neck as another cold chill went down his spine. His eyes ticked backwards for a half-second before returning their gaze to Riker and Leon.
Riker didn’t look convinced by November’s words….
Ah…great…
Thankfully, Viktor still had to answer his own question, so…hopefully that would take the attention off of him…and if not…
“H-How are you doing? Apparently…you two are umm…on better terms?” November glanced at Leon, raising a brow.
His eyes ticked once more behind him, to the thin shadows in the back.
He really needed to deal with that later….
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 12:22 pm #120009@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Aramis
“This would go a lot quicker if we knew where we were…” Edric’s voice filled the silence once again.
Aramis pursed his lips, glancing back at his lighter-haired brother. “Oh live a little, would you? If we keep walking we’ll find our way out of this Light One Forsaken place eventually.”
Edric snorted at the use of supposed God’s title.
“And Mother?”
“If we don‘t find her, she’ll find us. You know this.”
“Hm, true.” Edric flexed his wings, rolling his shoulders. “This hallway is too tight. Walk faster so we can get out of here.”
“Would you please be quiet?”
Edric glared, stepping up beside Aramis. “I’m not one of your servants, last time I checked. I don’t obey you. Now walk faster.”
Edric’s wings twitched again, the long scar on the left side flaring.
Ah…yes…Aramis had forgotten about that…
“Hm, hurting again, are we?” Edric glared. “At least you’re still able to fly.”
“Barely…” Edric growled.
“Ha! Imagine…Edric Fallon, the Fallen Child!”
“Shut it.”
“Flightless, all because of a-“
“I said, shut. It.”
“Flit.”
Edric snarled, eyes flaming. “Don’t ever bring him up…ever.”
Aramks smirked, shrugging. “Can’t change the past dear brother.” He watched his brother’s fists clench. His eyes narrowed, gears spinning in his mind.
This was how it had always been.
Aramis, the true mastermind…
Edric…the force. The one to get things done…
And Aramis always knew how to tick him off….
And Soren…?
He just…eventually got in the way…
Sad, really. They all would’ve been kings…
But…Ah, the past is the past.
Aramis continued ahead, still grinning like a cat. Edric’s wings were twitching unceremoniously behind him, both from pain and agitation.
And then…
Voices…
Footsteps.
Not extremely close…but nearby.
A distant room?
Aramis stopped.
“Stop you’re stupid ruffling!” He commanded. Edric narrowed his eyes.
“I-“
“Shush! Listen…” Aramis pointed up, and Edric begrudgingly became silent, listening in.
His brows creased as he too heard the voices.
Hmm…perhaps these people could be of use, whoever they were…
If Aramis and Edric could convince them to help.
The two boys glances at each other, making their way closer to the voices.
And then…
“I-I’m glad y-you f-found me…I…I thought everyone had….had…l-left me…”
Aramis’ heart pounded.
It couldn’t be…could it?
Surely…fortune wouldn’t be that grand….
But…Edric had heard it too…as told by the flames in his eyes, and the clenching of his fists.
Aramis looked at his brother, a sadistic grin creeping to his lips.
Ah….sometimes fortune did smile upon them it seemed….
- This reply was modified 2 years, 1 month ago by GodlyFantasy12.
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:15 pm #120022@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon anyone on?
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:18 pm #120023Yes! We’ll see what I can get written around my cat.
- This reply was modified 2 years, 1 month ago by Elishavet Elroi.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 19, 2022 at 2:33 pm #120028@godlyfantasy12 I am!
And yeah…Don’t think Kad and Paxton will make a nice combination. Although if you don’t mind, I might have Kad give Paxton’s mean brothers the fright of their lives. (They have wings too? What kind? He might think they’re dragons like him…..)
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Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 19, 2022 at 2:45 pm #120031@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Aw, November.
And this… Wrote itself.
Reúven
Lily laughed at him, her whole face a window of light. He smiled back and winked before turning his attention to the father.
She was a darling child, although not as sweet as…. As his cousins.
He rested one hand in his belt under his mantle, taking on a more relaxed position where his fingers could curl around his knife hilt.
Viktor glanced at him. “We’re well enough, sir.”
“H-How are you doing?” November asked, redirecting the conversation before it could land on himself. “Apparently…you two are umm…on better terms?”
Reúven studied the older boy out of the corner of his eye. He knew that look, that fumbling smile. Reúven used to use them both, but he’d gotten better over the years.
Better at hiding it.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 19, 2022 at 2:47 pm #120032@keilah-h I posted a picture on this page along with their bios.
Also, they don’t scare easily so he’ll have to try hard (the Fae are tough.) Aramis is the devilish, sadistic one, Edric is more of the general, commander type.
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:48 pm #120033@elishavet-pidyon can I just say that I LOVE REÚVEN?!?! Ugh…I srsly Luv Viktor and Reúven so much….
they have stolen my hearts….
I really want to read their book….
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:51 pm #120034Also…I’m not writing a Corvina pov for two reasons…
1. Honestly I’m struggling a bit with her…like the idea of writing her…because this is after things have been revealed and so she, like November is going to be so conflicted and I’m a bit unsure of how to entirely write that. She’s always been conflicted but this is an entirely new scale of things….
2. I think it works best if her POV comes when November gets a moment away to speak with her….I think it’ll flow for me easier and help me write her, if she’s interacting with him. And…it allows y’all to see the side of her that has now returned….
The side that has been slowly creeping out but really it’s been dormant for years…
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 2:52 pm #120035Awwwwwww, that makes me so happy.
I’ll try to get it written for you.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 19, 2022 at 2:53 pm #120036Understood! It sounds really good.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 19, 2022 at 2:57 pm #120037@Godlyfantasy12 Ok then! I can see him mistaking them for his kind and then getting closer and being like “WHAT THE STARSHINES ARE YOU???”
Would they mistake him for one of them? Or not? His wings are more scaly, not really feathered. And he has a tail. But from a distance, his spikes MIGHT look a tiny bit like feathers…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 19, 2022 at 3:01 pm #120039@keilah-h if they aren’t feathered wings, definitely not.
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#ProtectSebOctober 19, 2022 at 3:02 pm #120040They’d probably refer to him as a beast….perhaps an ignorant one at that, or at least less then them.
The Fae consider themselves in high regard, and are warriors.
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