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October 12, 2022 at 2:49 pm #119239Anonymous
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@elishavet-pidyon. Oh…if Riker heard Naja scream…Ocran better watch out for protective Daddy. XDXDXD
October 12, 2022 at 3:35 pm #119242@freedomwriter76
Yes! Ocran had better look out.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 12, 2022 at 3:49 pm #119243@elishavet-pidyon so u don’t have to change the age of ur charries.
Its for every author themselves to decide.
what it is is u take ur charries out of the castle and then it’s like no time in the castle has passed (but time passes in their respective worlds) and then u bring them back. Make sense?
also I think @freedomwriter76 is still trying to figure out what she’s gonna do with Riker lol
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 3:59 pm #119245@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 I will RO as Jocelyn and Arabella in a few minutes!!!
Freedom do u wanna RP as Riker maybe move us along some??
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 4:55 pm #119248@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h
Jocelyn
Whoever was up ahead was causing quite the commotion.
A child’s voice echoed through the corridor, causing a stir.
Alyona took off, before most could react, calling out for the little girl.
Naja.
And…if Naja was ahead…perhaps the others were as well?
Including…
Including Nyx?
Lyn beamed, taking off not far behind Alyona.
“N-YX!” It came out a half-cry, more of a hopeful cheer. She wasn’t even sure if he was up ahead…
But if he was….
Ah….she really hoped he was.
She came to an abrupt stop before running into Ally. Her eyes catching sight of everyone.
Zlatan! Ezra! Eva! Crosshair and Jareth!
Arabella!!!!
And…
Jocelyn’s face contorted as her gaze landed on the older, furious man before them all.
Ocran…
The Ill-tempered man she’d met when she first came to this castle….
And…multiple guards.
She frowned, but, seeing that they had just as many on their team, and more behind them, her smile quickly returned.
The group turned, eyes widening at the sight of Lyn and Alyona, and their eyes flying backwards, probably spotting Vulkasin and the others as well.
“Lyn!” Ara cried, eyes crinkling.
Nyx & Lyn
He’d heard her before she appeared. Her cry for his name making his ears prick and his spine tingle. He’d jerked with such force, he’d nearly fallen from Ara’s arms.
For a moment though, he wondered if it was just his imagination…
But…there she was.
Lynnie.
He raised his head as Ara turned to face Lyn, the brown-haired girl’s eyes bright and misty with emotion.
Lyn smiled, but, as her eyes met Nyx’s, her face lit up. She let out a squeal.
“LOVE!” She held out her arms, a sign Nyx knew all too well, and, on instinct, he leapt.
A mistake really.
Because he’d forgotten about his paw.
The fox yelped, a high pitched sound that made everyone wince. Lyn’s eyes widened, and she reacted with great speed, catching him in midair.
She stared, mouth open at her little friend as he curled in her arms. “N-Nyx….W-What…” Her eyes caught sight of his splint. She blinked, paling considerably, as if feeling his pain.
The fox whimpered in shame, ducking his head.
Ocran took this moment to say something…crass.
But…Lyn was too shocked to notice. Instead focused on her little friend.
What had happened after she’d left him?
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 5:32 pm #119252Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@elishavet-pidyon. Yes…he better…because Riker did partially hear it…mwahahahahahaha!!! (that is, if y’all don’t mind.) @koshka. @keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12. Oh, and I think I may bring Riker back when he’s older, but still have the 5 brothers Godly…because already my timeline doesn’t make sense…and I’m just doing this to develop my characters. Regular timeline Riker is very well developed, so I may bring him back when he’s older. Still deciding tho, so no one get their hopes up, lol. XD
Riker
He heard…a scream.
Young…
…feminine…
…unmistakably Naja.
Riker pulled out his pistol.
The others turned to face him.
“…What is it?” Viktor asked quietly.
“I heard a scream…” Riker whispered, when he heard it again, even louder.
It…
…was…
…Naja.
And Riker needed to get to her.
Now.
Riker ran, not waiting for the others.
He needed to get to his daughter.
And fast.
Eva
Nyx had Jocelyn back…and the others were there…except for November, Mikkel, Viktor, and Riker.
Oh dear lord Jesus, let them be okay…Eva silently prayed, as Alyona called for Naja.
But then…a dark haired young woman stepped forward. “…Naja!?”
Naja looked up. “Aunt Angelina!?”
“It’s me! Come here darling!” Angelina cried, tears filling her eyes.
Eva set Naja down, and she ran to her aunt and grandfather.
She squeezed Ezra’s free hand.
“Dear Lord Jesus…help us.” She whispered.
October 12, 2022 at 5:37 pm #119256@elishavet-pidyon you wanna RP as Viktor I don’t think @koshka @freedomwriter76 minds if u go ahead and have the other group show up either.
Then Ocran will be surrounded right?
but will he have a trick up his sleev? Idk…
u also can RP as Ocran…..
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 9:08 pm #119294@elishavet-pidyon u wanna RP as Ocran and Viktor?
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 10:08 pm #119305@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka anyone wanna RP????
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 10:14 pm #119306Corvina
Agh!
Vesper still held his arm in front of her. In truth…the reason they’d stopped was a shriek sounding from down the hall…
And…while it did send a small shudder down Corvina’s spine…especially as it sounded so…young, her main focus was how it seemed to affect the group she was watching.
They’d taken off, and she’d been unable to follow.
“Seriously!” She huffed, raising her arms in the air in annoyance. Vesper narrowed his eyes, lowering his arms. He stepped forward, his knees bending as if ready to run at a moment’s notice.
“What do you think that was?”
“Doesn’t matter,” She grumbled, though, inwardly she was wondering the same thing. “Point is, I lost the boy! Because of you.”
Vesper turned. “Me?”
“Yes! If you hadn’t held me back-“
“I was just trying to-“
“Well maybe stop trying-“ Corvina snapped, annoyed. “Knew I shouldn’t have let you tag along….” She muttered.
“Told ya…”
Hush it.
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 10:21 pm #119307I would like to but I have dishes right now…maybe in a few? Hopefully?
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Fork the GorkOctober 12, 2022 at 10:27 pm #119308Sounds good!
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 10:35 pm #119309@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Okay, I’ll probably be up way too late doing the dishes I should be right now, but I just had a scene hit me, so anyway.
I also can’t quite remember the order everything’s happened so far, so this may be off. Sorry…
Zlatan
Surrender? He raised his blade in answer and entered the dance of death.
The first stroke met his shield, and he drove him it forward, using his primary defense as his weapon of first choice. The man fell back, his basinet clashing to the floor.
The voice of a child rose behind him, lifted in sheet terror. A thousand memories flashed past him in that sound, raising the Vulk inside him. Instinct took skill into it’s own hands.
And the world went red.
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Fork the GorkOctober 12, 2022 at 10:44 pm #119310@koshka Get’em Zlatan!! Hey any idea if Elishavet wants to RP??
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 11:15 pm #119311XD She is binge listening to Christmas music right now…
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