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September 21, 2022 at 2:41 pm #117875
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So what you’re saying is a super huge group and potentially a lot more trauma? XD
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September 21, 2022 at 2:53 pm #117878Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Yep! XD
September 21, 2022 at 2:53 pm #117879Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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How about you @koshka, think the groups could merge? đ
September 21, 2022 at 2:55 pm #117881@freedomwriter76 *rolls eyes* Oh boy
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September 21, 2022 at 2:57 pm #117882Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Character development Queenie, Character Development! XD
September 21, 2022 at 3:00 pm #117883@freedomwriter76 All right all right….just keep reminding me of that okay? Only one rule: NO ONE BETTER TOUCH TREVYN!! I can turn Verity from a sweet fangirl to an avenging angel if necessary đ (Hmmm come to think of it that might be interesting)
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September 21, 2022 at 3:05 pm #117884Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. I will. XD
And DON’T WORRY! The group I’m talking about…they’re all nice! Mikkel, Viktor, Riker, and November, if they hurt anyone, wouldn’t without good reason. đ
NO ONE BETTER HURT TREVYN OR JAYDEN OR BUCKY!!!! I WILL TEAR THE CASTLE APART TO FIND THEM!!!!!
I’m totally not overprotective of my charries…XDSeptember 21, 2022 at 3:07 pm #117885@freedomwriter76 XD
YAY!! Trevyn needs more nice guys in his life!! XD
Ooh wait we’re going to have some Leon/Riker tension aren’t we?
AND I WILL HELP YOU!!!
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September 21, 2022 at 3:08 pm #117886@freedomwriter76 By the way….if we do this whole “merge group thing” I kind of want to take Payton out (I feel like his character is pretty good and his story’s almost over anyway) and put either Maddock or Kerwin in….just an idea!
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September 21, 2022 at 3:26 pm #117888@freedomwriter76 oh manâŠ.little does Naja knowâŠ.
SoâŠArabellaâs grandmother or Ammi, has also passedâŠbut it actually brings a lot ofâŠwellâŠtraumaâŠ
đ„șđ„șđđ hoo boiâŠ
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshkaArabella
Araâs chest tightened and heart throat clamped as she momentarily forgot how to breathe.
She couldnât control the sudden onslaught of emotion that gripped her and the tears that slid down the corners of her eyes as Naja continued about her Oma.
The little girl didnât seem to notice, however, as she was petting crow, enthralled by the little creature.
Ara was grateful, as she didnât want to upset the little girl, but at the same time, she desperately wished someone would free her from the sudden panic that gripped her heart.
Thankfully, the conversation was halted by Ezraâs sudden halt, and a loud thud behind the door. It jarred her from her thoughts, helping her breathe once again.
RightâŠ
SheâŠshe had things to do.
She had people to care forâŠ
She..she couldnât think about those thingsâŠnot nowâŠ
âWhat is it?â Naja asked softly.
âI donât know.â Ara whispered.
âWhoâs there?â
The footsteps grew, and Araâs nerves tightened.
Until an all too familiar hiss sounded.
Nyx?
The door opened.
âCrosshair?â Ezra raised a brow.
Indeed, facing them all was a group of four; Zlatan, Crosshair, Eva and-
Nyx.
Araâs heart lit with joy.
A quick reunion began, with Naja wiggling towards Nyx, who quickly hissed at the young girl.
âNo, no darling. Heâs in a bad mood right now. Arabella, dear, how are you?â
Ara barely registered her words, setting Naja down. The little girl stood by, obviously a bit wary after Evaâs warning.
âOh, fine, fine,â Ara said without much meaning behind it. She was more focused on her little friend. His eyes were big and wide and he was steadily making his way toward her, a smile on his maw.
But that wasnât what caught her attention.
âNyxâŠ.â She breathed, bending to sit on her knees. âYouâre limping.â
Nyx huffed and looked away, a hint of a blush on his fur. âMeh. Itâs nothing.â
Araâs brows arched in concern as the little fox made his way to her and she gently took him into her arms with no complaints.
Zlatan, Eva and Crosshair watched silently.
âI vouldnât say nothing, but it should heal.â Zlatan commented.
Ara blinked.
HeâdâŠ.heard Nyx?
She glanced at the fox. He groaned, annoyed. âYea, yeaâŠI kinda didnât have a choice in the matterâŠ.â
Ara smiled slightly, gently stroking Nyxâs fur. âWellâŠin that case, perhaps you wouldnât mind speaking to everyone now?â
âDonât push it.â
âNyxâŠplease?â
âYouâre not LynâŠ.â He ruffled, looking around. âSpeaking ofâŠ.?â
âNoâŠwe havenât found herâŠâ Ara frowned at the reminder.
Nyxâs ears lowered. Ara sighed, âNyx, everyone here is trying to find the others. It would be easier if I didnât have to communicate everything you say.â
He narrowed his eyes, glaring at her. Then sighed.
âFineâŠâ He sighed.
Standing in Araâs lap, as best he could with a limp paw, Nyx turned his attention to Ezra and the two kids. âSo, uh, you can hear me now. Youâre welcome.â
XD luv him.
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#ProtectSebSeptember 21, 2022 at 3:37 pm #117889@freedomwriter76
Go ahead, as long as Godlyfantasy is fine with it. =)
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Fork the GorkSeptember 21, 2022 at 3:38 pm #117890He’s adorable!
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Fork the GorkSeptember 21, 2022 at 3:38 pm #117891@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h
November
He could tell Riker was still in a bit of pain, and his bumping into him hadnât helped matter.
Stupid! He scolded himself.
Why was he such a klutz all the time?
He grimaced, tugging at his curls. Riker turned, placing a gentle hand on his shoulder. November flinched slightly.
âItâs fine, November. It wasnât your fault.â The man smiled kindly. November tried to return it, but faltered.
It was his fault thoughâŠ
It was always his fault.
Riker turned his attention back to Viktor. âViktor, what were you looking at?â
âThat door over there.â He pointed.
At the end of the darkened hall was a lone door, standing at attention, daring someone to open it.
Well that wasnât foreboding at allâŠ
November tapped his foot anxiously, wincing when it made noise in the otherwise soundless room. Mikkel glanced at him and he chuckled, the tips of his ears turning red. (Luv my awkward cinnamon roll XD)
âDo we continue?â Mikkel asked.
Viktor frowned, obviously unsure himself. November was thankful he wasnât in his position. Heâd hate having to be the leader in any scenario, but much less in one that could potentially put them all in danger.
Not that he didnât trust Viktor! AghâŠthat wasnât what he meantâŠ
He shook his head.
Viktor seemed very capable of leadershipâŠ
Of fighting.
Of a lot of things.
November was only good atâŠwellâŠ
Falling.
Falling on his face. Falling flat on his back. Falling off towers. Falling from stairs. Falling out of his own bed-yes itâs happened.
Falling in lo-
âWell, it seems to be the only way forward, so I guess soâŠâ Viktor shrugged.
November jolted, his face turning crimson, as if heâd been caught in his own thoughts.
Light One, was he glad no one here was a mind readerâŠ..
XD I loved writing those last parts!!!!
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#ProtectSebSeptember 21, 2022 at 3:38 pm #117892Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Oh noo….poor Arabella. đđđ Oh Nyx…*shakes head and laughs* XD
@queen_of_alvastia. YES HE DOES!!! *hugs Trevyn tight*Hehe…we sure will. đ
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Of course not! Why would anyone think that about me!? XDSounds good! Although…I think Riker has all the development he needs…I just still want him. đ I guess Leon will need to give Payton his dagger back. đ
OOHH!!!! OH! OH!!!!! I NEEEEEEDDDDDDD KERWIN AND MADDOCK!!!!!! đđđ
September 21, 2022 at 3:40 pm #117894Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Poor November baby…đ Girl…do I have permission to take Riven out…? đđ
@koshka. Okay! đ -
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