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May 3, 2022 at 11:41 pm #110351
Oh, those are some interesting characters! I think I’ll like Sofia. š
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 3, 2022 at 11:51 pm #110352Arabella & November
November gripped Ara tightly, not daring to let her fall to the floor, as she was still trembling from her recent vision.
Zlatan stepped forward, his expression concerned, but not as confused as his brotherās, āIn ze room ve just passed zereās a place she can sit down. Can you valk, mālady? And if zereās anyvāone āere to harm either of you, know you āave two Vulkish soldiers on guard.ā
Ara slowly looked up at him and nodded. They led Ara into the previous room and let her sit down. She caught her breath and rubbed her forehead, a headache now thrumming behind her eyes.
She whimpered at the pain. November grimaced. She offered him a reassuring smile.
āIām fine, really.ā She looked up Zlatan and Vulkasin, āThank you, both. Iā¦Iām sorry.ā She smoothed her skirt under her hands.
The two brothers looked at each other.
āI didnāt mean to give anyone a scareā¦I justā¦have theseā¦spellsĀ sometimes.ā She looked away demurely, blushing. She sighed, wishing her visions and dreams would vanish.
āAra,ā November whispered and she felt him nudge her with his shoulder. His eyes were worried. He looked down at her right wrist, which peeked out from beneath her sleeve.
It wasā¦.glowing.
She slapped it and tugged the sleeve down, silently praying the burning pain wouldnāt follow.
āAs for Corvina,ā Arabella stiffened, looking first at November, a seriousness in her eyes. She stared at his eyes and then at his scars, her brows furrowing.
She then turned to the two brothers. āSheās someone from our home. Someone you shouldnāt mess with.ā Ara rung her hands together and looked away. āIā¦Iām sorryā¦sheās not your problem.ā
āYea,ā November rubbed the back of his head. āSheāsā¦ahh,Ā something. Butā¦really, I mean, you two have already helped out enough.ā He grinned big, his optimism returning as Araās strength did.
Ara nodded her agreement, dusting off her skirt. She stood, as did November, and stared the brothers in the eyes, despite their height differences. āWe really donāt want to be any trouble.ā
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 11:55 pm #110353@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce ocran to Jocelyn or u want me to?
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#ProtectSebMay 3, 2022 at 11:59 pm #110354@emilysf IDEA Maybe Zoe should meet Corvinaā¦.
No matter what, Corvinaās not like Malcolm (sheās actually probably been kinda where Zoeās been and while she wonāt admit it will probably feel sorry for her.)
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#ProtectSebMay 4, 2022 at 12:28 am #110359Maybe you could start the introduction, and I’ll go from there. But I can do it too, if you’d rather.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 4, 2022 at 12:36 am #110360Okay…. Random idea sparker
Ocran
A girl came hurtling down the passage, her long hair flying behind her like a comet’s tail, an excited gleam in her eyes.
“Who are you, and what are you doing?” Ocran thundered.
She skidded to a halt, her eyes wide. A little foxish creature tumbled to a stop beside her.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 4, 2022 at 12:37 am #110361So, I just went ahead and started his part.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
May 4, 2022 at 12:52 am #110362@elishavet-pidyon SOUNDS GOOD XD
Jocelyn & Nyx
āFriendly?ā
āDoesnāt sound very friendly.āĀ Nyx huffed, turning up his nose and giving it a twitch. Lyn shrugged. She waved enthusiastically to the stranger; an adult, who was glaring at the two in shock and confusion. He also seemed to be appalled by their presence.
As though by entering theyād broken some āunspoken law.ā
Huh. Were people not sāposed to just walk through doors in this kingdom? Or maybe it was the bursting in unannounced. That did catch people off guardā¦.
āHiya! Nameās Jocelyn, and this hereās my darling Nyx!ā Nyx hopped to attention and offered a smirk, his bangs giving him adding to the boastful appearance. āWe were wondering if youāve seen our friends anywhere! We just had an absolutely dreadful time walking through the dungeon, which, by the way, dunno if you own this place BUT, could use some sprucing up.ā
āOh definitely.ā Nyx frowned.
Lyn nodded her agreement to, and the man looked even more confused, which made sense seeing as how he couldnāt hear the little creature himself.
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#ProtectSebMay 4, 2022 at 12:56 am #110363ALSO I just really wanted to add this XD, I found this picture online and this is kinda how I imagine Nyx looking but with brown tips on the bangs (sorta, and then most times I just imagine him as a normal fennec fox with little bangs or a normal fennec fox XD) but I just wanted to put this in here
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#ProtectSebMay 4, 2022 at 10:27 am #110370@godlyfantasy12 Excellent idea! (Who is Corvina’s author, again? it’s a little difficult to keep track, heh.)
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May 4, 2022 at 11:54 am #110372Here’s a list I made to keep track (definitely not weird)
ProtagonistĀ Antagonist
@emilysf =Zoe and Sofia
@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina
@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor and Ocran
@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin
@denali-christianson = Kilied and BaloricoIf I lost someone please correct me!
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkMay 4, 2022 at 11:56 am #110373Aww, he’s cute! I wuv wittle fuzzy fings.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkMay 4, 2022 at 12:09 pm #110374@godlyfantasy12 Aww, that’s cute!
@Everyone else I’m going to introduce my characters now.
Rinzler–My brother actually created this character. He’s eighteen, very cocky, and he has tousled black hair and brown eyes. He looks something like this, although this isn’t actually a drawing of him. He wears a suit of this type, though.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 4, 2022 at 12:18 pm #110375And my other character…
Feather–A character I created. She’s sort of tall, has grayish eyes and blond hair. I’d put her in her early twenties. She was trained as a soldier along with her four sisters, so she wears clone/stormtrooper-like armor a lot (if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars films or shows, you’ll get the picture). A wood flute hangs from her belt; she can use it to call her little guardian creature/pet, Stormcloud. I don’t have a picture of her, unfortunately. She and Rinzler are friends, but they’re not like really close friends….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 4, 2022 at 12:20 pm #110376Want me to introduce them or should someone else bump into them first?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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