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I have some drawings I did a while back for the bad guys in my WIP
There are four of them, but I have to send them seperately (I tried sending them all but that did not work)
Sorry that they’re so large, I couldn’t figure out how to make them smaller
Tagging people I’ve seen on this topic so you see:
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondI’m not sure I did the tagging right…
Anyway
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondLast one – I’m not really sure about her design, I’ll probably change it at some point but here it is anyway
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondCool! So they seem to each have there own medallion or something. Are they like some kind of group that controls some elements or something? What are there goals and motives as the villains?
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@mineralizedwritings Nice!!! I like the profile view of your charrie.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
Nice job! I like those designs. Now, what is the story of these villains?
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorFirstly, they’re not human, they’re Smokes – sort of demons? Anyway, smokes can possess people and most smokes have a partner who, when they possess them, it’s undetectable (those symbols on the page next to each of them is the mark that appears when they possess someone other than their partner).
I haven’t done a lot of work with them so far except for Asykko, who is very important to the plot. She’s actually the most dangerous one, because… Spoilers! It’s part of the plot twist.
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondCool! So are the depictions the bodies of their partners, or do they just look like that when processing anyone? Are their partners humans that gave up their agency to the smokes for something in return? Ect?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
They’re actually what I imagine them to look like when they’re not possessing anyone, although they do look very similar to their partners – for example, even though Asykko’s partner is a guy he has the same swooping messy bangs, and they have similar clothing styles, etc.
When they are possessing someone, they look like that person but with their mark on their forearm (unless, as mentioned, it’s their partner).
Yes, their partners are humans that agreed to work with them – for example Asykko promised her partner fame and admiration. I actually wrote something for his backstory, if you’d like to see that.
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondSounds interesting! So they have a physical human appearance when not controlling someone? What lead them to the particular sets of clothing, did they just exist that way, or do they have control over there appearance, so they choose the form that they like best? Yeah, I would love to see more!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
I haven’t thought about it much, probably them choosing the form they like best. I think I’ll change Valxene’s to something more comfortable but that might be what she would “wear” to a fancier occasion or some such thing.
This is the 100 word snippet I wrote for Asykko’s partner (oh, and smokes also have a color – hers is jungle green):
A deep jungle green smoke wound through the sky, searching for a partner; and while there were many people in the city who would do she felt pulled towards one house in particular.
A shy young man’s now ex-girlfriend had publicly dumped him and said that no one could ever be attracted to him, and he wasn’t taking it very well, playing video games (and losing pretty badly) since he got home. Now, at nearly 2 in the morning, he was trying to get some sleep to no avail.
“How would you like to be a well-known, highly attractive guy?”
I have to get going but I’ll probably be back tomorrow afternoon
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God is king but rock 'n roll might be secondI like your explanation for Ice dragon breath, its really cool (excuse the pun).
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