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Hello Everyone,
Some of you might remember that a while ago, my sister published a book called A Parched Land. Well, now she is working on another book, which is just called Adventure 1 for now. She has tried to get onto Kingdom Pen but has been unsuccessful in creating an account, which is why I am making this post. She would now like to invite some of you to give her feedback on this.
(Please let me know if this does not work)
@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator(Feel free to tag others who you think might be interested.)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator
Just checking, did you see this?
I should probably tag some more people as well:
@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyonNone of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate it if you could.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
For some reason your notifs didn’t work the first time. This looks interesting! Is there a way to comment on it?
To err is human; to arr is pirate.
Thank you!
Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?
I think she just wants to know what you think of the characters, world, and story. She may have some questions for you to answer once you are done. I’ll ask her when I get the chance.
Thank you as well!
Is there a way to comment on it?
There should be. Highlight the text you want to comment, and a pop up with the option to comment right at the end will appear. Either that, or just a simple comment icon to the left of the selected text:
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
*Right. I meant to say right, not left
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
I didn’t get the first notification! I’ll try to remember to look at it when I have a chance.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
@linus-smallprint I’ll check it out!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Wow! Really cool! And congrats to your sister again! I’ll check it out!
What is your pfp…? I LOVE IT!
"There is never nothing, always something " - ME 😁
I’ll try to read it if I have time (I know that sounds terribly unreliable, and it is terribly unreliable, but it’s the best I can give you)
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
Seems like others can, so don’t worry about it if you can’t.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@hybridlore @the_lost-journal @keilah-h
All right, thank you!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
I got around to asking my sister for what type of feedback so is looking for. And yeah, she just wants your thoughts on the story in general for now.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
lolol its a crazy picture of Dimitri from Fire Emblem: Three Houses. I really love it too. XD XD
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
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