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July 15, 2023 at 9:40 pm #151040Anonymous
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@mineralizedwritings Haha, Ikr? 😍💖 (they actually are pretty handsome, lol!!! XXD) And yes…I meannn…they kinda both do, but Felix’s may finally result in redemption in a 1950s WIP idea I have…😏
July 15, 2023 at 9:44 pm #151043@freedomwriter76
Aww but I wanted the other one to get redeemed tooooooo XD
(And yeah they are handsome lol XD)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 16, 2023 at 2:08 pm #151053@freedomwriter76 How sad!! 😥😥
Oh wow…..those charries….I feel a bit sorry for them actually. @mineralizedwritings the other one dies…….he’s pretty mean in the end though so while it’s sad, it’s also like “well……he kinda got what he had earned for all that killing……”
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 16, 2023 at 3:27 pm #151066@freedomwriter76
Aww it’s going to be so sadd!!! xD Well good job on them anyway, I guess not everyone can be redeemed 😭
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 16, 2023 at 4:25 pm #151073Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings sorryyyyy…but not everyone can be redeemed 😭 (lol, right? XXD💖)
@keilah-h ikr!? 😭😭 and yeahh, Min, Keilah is right…Hans becomes VERY evil, and ends up dying…
@hybridlore I knowwww….but it plays into the message of the book…but yeahhh…it’s just…😭😭😭July 16, 2023 at 4:29 pm #151074Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @hybridlore @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings And…the first side character I’d like to introduce y’all to….🥰
Himmler Heinrich Baumann, age 7
Curly Brown hair, light blue eyes.
Skinny and small.
About 3’7”, below average height.
Delayed in speech and reading, and thus is occasionally deemed as stupid by his parents.
Sweet, gentle, loving, stubborn, silly, playful, shy, scared easily, easily attached to people, naive, innocent.
Born to Heinrich and Matilda Baumann, a rich German couple, as the youngest of 3 brothers.
Has always had a bad, abusive home life, but he thinks it’s normal…and it’s caused him to fear his mother and his father, and he doesn’t know what a good Daddy and Mommy are supposed to look like.
Truly doesn’t understand Christianity at all…none of it makes sense to him, and besides, he doesn’t really care when he’s this young…he just wants to be loved.
Arc: Flat (positive later in life when he’s older)
Songs:
All The Broken Pieces by Matthew West
Unchangeable by Matthew West
Family Tree by Matthew West
Perfectly Loved by Rachel Lampa
Love Moved First by Casting Crowns
July 16, 2023 at 4:33 pm #151075Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore
next!!!!
(and btw, these are all the characters I have things written down for so far XXD)
Adinah Leah Baumann, age 28
Straight dark brown hair, dark brown eyes.
Skinny and petite.
About 4’9” or so.
Loving, gentle, compassionate, faithful, devoted, generous, playful, sweet, skilled, hard-working, kind.
Born to Yosef and Ruth Abrams, a Messianic Jewish couple of the middle class, as their only child.
Has always had a loving, doting home life, with parents who gave everything they had for her.
Felix’s wife and Leo’s mother; loves her husband and son with everything she has inside of her.
Has always strived to have a good relationship with God, and sees Christianity as a relationship, not a religion, with her gracious, loving, holy, merciful father God.
Arc: Flat
Songs:
In My Arms by Plumb
Mine by Ellie Holcomb
Mamas by Anne Wilson
How Can You Not by Leanna Crawford
Broken Prayers by Riley Clemmons
I’ll Stay by Riley Clemmons
July 16, 2023 at 4:39 pm #151077@freedomwriter76
Awwwwwwwww I love all of them so much!! 🥰🥰🥰
Oh my goodness Felix… 😍
And Hans 🥺💔 Why is he so adorable 😭😭😭
*heart is broken*
#HugRikerSquad
July 16, 2023 at 4:47 pm #151078Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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July 16, 2023 at 5:32 pm #151081@freedomwriter76
You’re so welcome girl! 💖💖
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💖💖💖💖
#HugRikerSquad
July 16, 2023 at 6:11 pm #151087@freedomwriter76
Himmler is so cuteeee ;(
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 16, 2023 at 7:31 pm #151091@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings (I know right?? xD)
Aww I love them!! So wait, how many books do you have planned for all these characters? xD
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 16, 2023 at 8:55 pm #151123@freedomwriter76 Awww Himmler is sooooo cute!!!
So… since joining YWW, I’ve started work on quite a few different things. Or at least, planning ahead. My current projects are Healer, which I started but now I have a fairly clear plot for, and Storyteller, which in about a month has grown to 24,000 words!! I was so surprised with how quickly that happened. Healer is currently above 40,00 words as well.
Future projects… The Afterlevel is a futuristic novella or possibly novel where a kid gets stuck in a video game and has to fix a glitch. This idea mostly came from the fact that my brother makes video games and wanted to code a game based off this idea, so that should be interesting.
And one that I’m super excited about (though the name is still tbd) is Thrown to the Wolves. Four siblings with powers related to the wolves have been trying to go it alone but learn that they’ll need each other if they’re going to save their home. Their names are Leon, Raven, Finley, and Cora, in order from oldest to youngest.
Here are some boards (if pictures are working on KP again anyway XD):
This one is just for the book in general, it has all four siblings.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
July 16, 2023 at 8:56 pm #151124Here’s Raven’s board (he may or may not be my favorite XD):
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
July 16, 2023 at 8:57 pm #151125And oh here’s the board for The Afterlevel (the middle image I made that’s why it looks weird XD):
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
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