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June 20, 2023 at 3:26 pm #148409Anonymous
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@euodia-vision a scene I have not finished yet XD
(but the scene in Prisoner B-3087 that inspired it was the scene where he lost the button on his uniform….so, uhhhh, yeahhhhhh, let’s say things won’t be looking good for Leon in the scene idea I have 😬😭)
June 20, 2023 at 3:40 pm #148414@freedomwriter76 I love that scene! I have a feeling I’m going to really like your book……
Also, Reuben wanting to blow stuff up was hilarious.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 20, 2023 at 3:42 pm #148416Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h Awwww, girlllll, tysm!!! ❤️❤️❤️
haha, ikr? 😂😂
June 20, 2023 at 3:58 pm #148426@freedomwriter76 you’re welcome!
That was a hilarious little detail for sure.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 20, 2023 at 4:03 pm #148428@freedomwriter76
Oh dear, oh dear… yeeeah that’s not gonna be good…
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 20, 2023 at 4:14 pm #148432@freedomwriter76 idk this book or scene so idk what happens…
BUT IT DOESN’T SOUND GOOD SO WHAT HAPPENS?!?! *worry intensifies*
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 4:16 pm #148435SOB I JUST READ A SCENE ANALYSIS OF IT CUZ I WAS CURIOUS 😭 LEOOOON NO ARE U GONNA HURT THE BABY?!
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 4:57 pm #148454Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision Yeahhhhh, very much ‘oh dear’….THE BABYYYYY 😭
@godlyfantasy12 UHHHH, I meannnnnnn, heh…….🤐 he’ll be okay in the end, I swear!!!!! 😭y’all worrying over the baby……ahhhh, now I guess I need to write the scene for y’all 😅
June 20, 2023 at 5:02 pm #148457@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @keilah-h @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else
So…uh…anyone wanna do some more worldbuilding?? XD
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 5:05 pm #148459Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 I’ll listen in and add anything if I think of anything! Love to stick around for some worldbuilding!
(trying to write mentioned Leon scene currently 😭)
June 20, 2023 at 5:10 pm #148460@freedomwriter76 GAH *waits for mentioned scene…XD*
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 5:14 pm #148461Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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June 20, 2023 at 5:23 pm #148462OKIE!!!
NEXT TENT UP FOR DISCUSSION XD
(I’m excited about this one)
The Cogs
This Tent is filled with those who run things behind the scenes. Though, this doesn’t mean they’re any less curious or strange then the rest of Cirque-after all, they too have come to escape troubled pasts, persecutions, or just to find a place to fit in.
But…some prefer not to be in the limelight…
Or, they just don’t fit with the other tents.
They’re more in the background and they keep things going. The show…the city wouldn’t run without them. The lights, construction, all the technical aspects, everything is ran by the Cogs (under the watchful eye of The Ringmaster of course.)
Despite their obvious need and importance, however, the Cogs are often the most mistreated of the Tents. Viewed as lesser then some of the other “grander” tents, though perhaps this is never said allowed, the cogs can often be pushed around to breaking points, making them much more prone to eccentricities then the other tents-another reason they stay in the background, and are kept under a much…firmer grip.
Though this only leads to more trouble…considering many of them come from already troubled homes and pasts.
Not all of the tents view them in this light, The Jesters being one, as they’re rather passive, and prefer to stay In their own lane-watching like Cheshire cats in the shadows, and taking notes of the goings on.
The Marvels however are a different story.
Defining traits of a cog- The cogs don’t have a defining outfit or anything like the Jesters or Vizards do, as they’re their own individuals and handle they’re own things, although they tend to stick to their lonesome, unless with other Cogs, but even then some of them are loners. They do happen to adore Jocelyn, as she treats them all with respect, and are extremely loyal to her.
Their Symbol is a a small gear within a larger one and a chain twisting inside it.
(Ridley is a Cog)
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 5:31 pm #148464Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 GURL, OH MY WORD!!!!
This is so cooooool!!! 🤩🤩 You’ve put SO MUCH WORK INTO THIS, AND IT’S AMAZING!!!!!!
love it!
I love how unique Cirque is, ahh!!!! 😍😍
June 20, 2023 at 5:32 pm #148465Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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alsoooo, Ridley being a cog makes so much sense, honestly XD
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