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June 19, 2023 at 7:02 pm #148318
I’m kinda thinking also the Vizards are Female Only…
They were started by the wives of the founders, and have been continued in honor of them?
(Mostly in honor of Lyn’s mother…though Lyn doesn’t know this…maybe they even have a special connection/spot for Jocelyn but she doesn’t understand it’s because of her mother.)
Ooh I’m liking this! Giving me some ideas!
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#ProtectSebJune 19, 2023 at 7:08 pm #148321So here’s an idea for the jesters
Nobody actually knows them
some people think they’re kind of creepy
and others think they’re hilarious
but nobody actually knows them better than that
maybe that’s how it works with all of the tents
they’re sort of always performing, hiding their feelings and emotions, in a way if they act like real people then the show wouldn’t be as fun
like the Jesters are amusing, the Vizards are graceful, and so on
but they’re never more than that, because they aren’t allowed to be more than that
sorry if that didn’t make any sense XD
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-ThorneJune 19, 2023 at 7:13 pm #148323@smiley that’s a pretty cool idea too! thx!
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#ProtectSebJune 19, 2023 at 7:25 pm #148325@whalekeeper thought u might wanna see some of my worldbuilding?? Maybe not tho XD
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#ProtectSebJune 19, 2023 at 9:03 pm #148336Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision Aww, thx!! ❤️ (btw, have you read Prisoner B-3087 by Alan Gratz? Read it today, and GURL, it was A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!)
@lightoverdarkness6 (btw, girl, how are you doing? 💖)AHHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHH ❤❤❤❤❤
All of my favorites in one scene…just so much cuteness & sweetness ugh….ahhh just ✨the feelz✨ 😍
AWWW, GIRLLLL, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I knowwwww, all the babiessssss!!!!! 😍😍
And, like, Rueben?! Loving to blow things up?! That is absolutely hilarious and sooooo cute aughhh 🤣 😍😍😍
Haha, yessssssss 😂😂😂💖
Leo is so short 🤣🤣 I love him sooooo muchhhh 😍😍😍😍😍😍
Poor boi 😅❤️ Yessss, he’s SOOO SWEET!!!!
Whyyyyy are you making me love Jezyk so much 😭😭😭❤❤❤
And ohhhhh Dietrich. ❤😭❤😭❤😭 *Heart is reminded of its brokeness again*
I’M SORRYYYYYYYYYYY 😭💔
I feel like he’ll let something slip on accident…poor boi 😭😭😭😭 C’mon Dietrich! Pleaseeee don’t tell Adolphus….Let’s hope he doesn’t slip 😅
June 20, 2023 at 7:56 am #148353@freedomwriter76
AWWW, GIRLLLL, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
YOU’RE SOOO WELCOME!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
I knowwwww, all the babiessssss!!!!! 😍😍
AHHH Yesssss 😍😍😍😍😍
Haha, yessssssss 😂😂😂💖
😂😂😂😂💖❤️
Poor boi 😅❤️ Yessss, he’s SOOO SWEET!!!!
Yes poor baby 😂💖❤️ YES HE IS UGHHH 😍😍😍
I’M SORRYYYYYYYYYYY 😭💔
It’s okay…I’ll be okay…hopefully 😅😭💔😭💔😭💔
Let’s hope he doesn’t slip 😅
Yes hope is all we can do 😅
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June 20, 2023 at 8:07 am #148354@freedomwriter76
And oh, I’m pretty good! Thank you for asking 💖
Been really busy lately, so I haven’t been able to write much at all…heh…not like I do that much anyway. I’m kinda in a slump. 😅
Buutttttt….I did just come up with a new character which I’m SOOO excited about 😏…so I guess that counts a bit for working on my WIP 😅
What about you girl? How’s life and writing? 💖
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June 20, 2023 at 10:03 am #148357@freedomwriter76
(btw, have you read Prisoner B-3087 by Alan Gratz? Read it today, and GURL, it was A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!)
Yes, I have read that one and YES IT’S SO GOOD!!!! I love how he goes to all those different camps and you get to experience what they were like (even tho realistically a prisoner most likely wouldn’t go to all of those camps, but hey Historical Fiction, right?). *sighs* Alan Gratz is SO good!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 20, 2023 at 10:27 am #148366Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision IKR!? Sooooo good!!!! 😍
Yess, he is an AMAZING writer!!!!!!!
(actually tho, and this is really amazing and inspiring,…it does seem VERY unrealistic, but Gratz’s novel was based on the true-life story of Jack Gruener, who DID go to 10 camps and survived all of them)
June 20, 2023 at 10:42 am #148368@freedomwriter76
Oh reallyyyyyy, that’s really cool! (sad, but cool still)
Did the book inspire your WIP? 😏
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 20, 2023 at 2:20 pm #148390Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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It didn’t inspire my WIP, bc I only recently read it, but it did inspire a scene…😏
@lightoverdarkness6 Aww, I’m glad you’re doing well ❤️ Yeahh, I understand how busy life can get and how stuck writing can get…writer’s block is the WORST 😒Oooh, a new charrie!? 🤩 Is it at all possible that I can meet this new charrie soon??? Pwease? 🥺
Life’s good; had a great weekend! 💖 A little busy, but things have slowed down a LOT since a couple of months ago. 🙂 Writing’s alright! Still kinda slow from not doing much this weekend, lol, but slowly getting back into the swing of things. 😉
June 20, 2023 at 2:44 pm #148395@godlyfantasy12 You said you want the Vizards to be based off Hispanic culture?
Which specifically? I mean, there are a lot of Spanish-derived countries in our world.
That’d help me narrow it down, cause my family came from Puerto Rico, and I could ask my dad about some of the things he did or saw over there when he was a kid.
But that might not be where you’re going with this, since from what I gather you’re implying more Mexican and South American type.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 20, 2023 at 2:46 pm #148396@keilah-h at this point I’m open to anything. I struggle with differentiating different places and that’s terrible, lol! But I mean I’d do the same thing with America XD
southerners are southerners if that makes sense XD even tho that’s not true 🤣
it’s just hard cuz there are SO MANY PLACES….but the good thing with fantasy is u can take from MULTIPLE! So yea I’d take anything!
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#ProtectSebJune 20, 2023 at 2:48 pm #148400@godlyfantasy12 makes sense!
I’ll try to get some cool stuff for you to use, then!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 20, 2023 at 3:10 pm #148405@freedomwriter76
Oooooh what scene? 😏
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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