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  • #148318
    GodlyFantasy12
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      I’m kinda thinking also the Vizards are Female Only…

      They were started by the wives of the founders, and have been continued in honor of them?

      (Mostly in honor of Lyn’s mother…though Lyn doesn’t know this…maybe they even have a special connection/spot for Jocelyn but she doesn’t understand it’s because of her mother.)

      Ooh I’m liking this! Giving me some ideas!

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      #148321
      Smiley
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        @godlyfantasy12

        So here’s an idea for the jesters

        Nobody actually knows them

        some people think they’re kind of creepy

        and others think they’re hilarious

        but nobody actually knows them better than that

        maybe that’s how it works with all of the tents

        they’re sort of always performing, hiding their feelings and emotions, in a way if they act like real people then the show wouldn’t be as fun

        like the Jesters are amusing, the Vizards are graceful, and so on

        but they’re never more than that, because they aren’t allowed to be more than that

        sorry if that didn’t make any sense XD

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        #148323
        GodlyFantasy12
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          @smiley that’s a pretty cool idea too! thx!

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          #148325
          GodlyFantasy12
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            @whalekeeper thought u might wanna see some of my worldbuilding?? Maybe not tho XD

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            #148336
            Anonymous
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              @euodia-vision Aww, thx!! ❤️ (btw, have you read Prisoner B-3087 by Alan Gratz? Read it today, and GURL, it was A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!)

               


              @lightoverdarkness6
              (btw, girl, how are you doing? 💖)

              AHHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHH ❤❤❤❤❤

              All of my favorites in one scene…just so much cuteness & sweetness ugh….ahhh just ✨the feelz✨  😍

              AWWW, GIRLLLL, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

              I knowwwww, all the babiessssss!!!!! 😍😍

              And, like, Rueben?! Loving to blow things up?! That is absolutely hilarious and sooooo cute aughhh 🤣  😍😍😍

              Haha, yessssssss 😂😂😂💖

              Leo is so short 🤣🤣 I love him sooooo muchhhh 😍😍😍😍😍😍

              Poor boi 😅❤️ Yessss, he’s SOOO SWEET!!!!

              Whyyyyy are you making me love Jezyk so much 😭😭😭❤❤❤

              And ohhhhh Dietrich. ❤😭❤😭❤😭 *Heart is reminded of its brokeness again*

              I’M SORRYYYYYYYYYYY 😭💔

              I feel like he’ll let something slip on accident…poor boi 😭😭😭😭 C’mon Dietrich! Pleaseeee don’t tell Adolphus….

              Let’s hope he doesn’t slip 😅

              #148353
              Light
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                @freedomwriter76

                AWWW, GIRLLLL, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

                YOU’RE SOOO WELCOME!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

                I knowwwww, all the babiessssss!!!!! 😍😍

                AHHH Yesssss 😍😍😍😍😍

                Haha, yessssssss 😂😂😂💖

                😂😂😂😂💖❤️

                Poor boi 😅❤️ Yessss, he’s SOOO SWEET!!!!

                Yes poor baby 😂💖❤️ YES HE IS UGHHH 😍😍😍

                I’M SORRYYYYYYYYYYY 😭💔

                It’s okay…I’ll be okay…hopefully 😅😭💔😭💔😭💔

                Let’s hope he doesn’t slip 😅

                Yes hope is all we can do 😅

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                #148354
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                  @freedomwriter76

                  And oh, I’m pretty good! Thank you for asking 💖

                  Been really busy lately, so I haven’t been able to write much at all…heh…not like I do that much anyway. I’m kinda in a slump. 😅

                  Buutttttt….I did just come up with a new character which I’m SOOO excited about 😏…so I guess that counts a bit for working on my WIP 😅

                  What about you girl? How’s life and writing? 💖

                  #HugRikerSquad

                  #148357
                  Euodia
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                    @freedomwriter76

                     (btw, have you read Prisoner B-3087 by Alan Gratz? Read it today, and GURL, it was A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!)

                    Yes, I have read that one and YES IT’S SO GOOD!!!! I love how he goes to all those different camps and you get to experience what they were like (even tho realistically a prisoner most likely wouldn’t go to all of those camps, but hey Historical Fiction, right?). *sighs* Alan Gratz is SO good!

                    I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                    #148366
                    Anonymous
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                      @euodia-vision IKR!? Sooooo good!!!! 😍

                      Yess, he is an AMAZING writer!!!!!!!

                      (actually tho, and this is really amazing and inspiring,…it does seem VERY unrealistic, but Gratz’s novel was based on the true-life story of Jack Gruener, who DID go to 10 camps and survived all of them)

                      #148368
                      Euodia
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                        @freedomwriter76

                        Oh reallyyyyyy, that’s really cool! (sad, but cool still)

                        Did the book inspire your WIP? 😏

                        I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                        #148390
                        Anonymous
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                          @euodia-vision

                          It didn’t inspire my WIP, bc I only recently read it, but it did inspire a scene…😏

                           


                          @lightoverdarkness6
                          Aww, I’m glad you’re doing well ❤️ Yeahh, I understand how busy life can get and how stuck writing can get…writer’s block is the WORST 😒

                          Oooh, a new charrie!? 🤩 Is it at all possible that I can meet this new charrie soon??? Pwease? 🥺

                          Life’s good; had a great weekend! 💖 A little busy, but things have slowed down a LOT since a couple of months ago. 🙂 Writing’s alright! Still kinda slow from not doing much this weekend, lol, but slowly getting back into the swing of things. 😉

                          #148395
                          Keilah H.
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                            @godlyfantasy12 You said you want the Vizards to be based off Hispanic culture?

                            Which specifically? I mean, there are a lot of Spanish-derived countries in our world.

                            That’d help me narrow it down, cause my family came from Puerto Rico, and I could ask my dad about some of the things he did or saw over there when he was a kid.

                            But that might not be where you’re going with this, since from what I gather you’re implying more Mexican and South American type.

                            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                            #148396
                            GodlyFantasy12
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                              @keilah-h at this point I’m open to anything. I struggle with differentiating different places and that’s terrible, lol! But I mean I’d do the same thing with America XD

                               

                              southerners are southerners if that makes sense XD even tho that’s not true 🤣

                               

                              it’s just hard cuz there are SO MANY PLACES….but the good thing with fantasy is u can take from MULTIPLE! So yea I’d take anything!

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                              #148400
                              Keilah H.
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                                @godlyfantasy12 makes sense!

                                I’ll try to get some cool stuff for you to use, then!

                                Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                                #148405
                                Euodia
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                                  @freedomwriter76

                                  Oooooh what scene? 😏

                                  I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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