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@godlyfantasy12 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 SO MUCH HAPPENED, AND IT’S…JUST…😭😭
ahhh, ikr!? Their families are so similar!!!! *cries*
@freedomwriter76 *cries together* u should totally go listen to that album if u haven’t!!! Gaaah @whalekeeper introduced me to it.
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#ProtectSeb@freedomwriter76 any idea if pics are working now?
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#ProtectSebMine aren’t sadly I have so many images I want to share ):
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-Thorne@esther-c AWW I loved that scene! The last part is so sweet!
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@godlyfantasy12 uh…what album? XD lol
and yea, pics still aren’t working for me either, sooooo…yeahhhhh…i still think it’s not fixed 😅
too bad, I wanna share the Baumann family tree *sighs*
@freedomwriter76 XD I posted above a song I found for Aramis.
it’s in an album called Dear Wormwood by the Oh Hellos.
the song is called Exeunt.
I love that album rn (there was one song I didn’t get but other then that love it)
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@godlyfantasy12 oh, ok, I didn’t see that XD my bad!!!! I may need to check it out!!!
the song “Slow Fade” by Casting Crowns is one for Felix/Hans…and it’s…just…for them…😭
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Thanks everyone!!! ❤️❤️
Yesss, I love these two so much!! 🥰
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@freedomwriter76 ugh yesss 😭
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Hey yall!! I could use a bit of help…
So I really need to do some writing as I’ve fallen behind recently, but thing is…I get stuck super easily. I just don’t know what to write…
Sometimes I don’t really know how to continue scenes or how to start them, ya know?? I guess everyone has that but I didn’t know if maybe yall would have some ideas? I’m trying to write things from beginning to end to see if it’ll help me some, but I’m stuck rn…
So to give some context- Arabella has just left her castle, and she has anxiety when it comes to crowds and stuff. She can tell when people are staring at her or talking about her (or her mind always makes her think these things are happening…) needless to say she likes to keep her head down.
Right now A’Grend is in preparation and very busy due to a festival (that doesn’t have a name yet so its just being called Harvest Fest XD) so a lot of people are bustling around, and Ara has certain…feelings about the festival, and crowds in general. So its just not the best experience.
Thing is, I don’t know how to get from point A (inner dialogue and her entering the town) to her having the beginning of an anxiety attack.
This is all I’ve got so far.
Any Ideas for what could happen next?? Just spitball them at me. Anything, literally XD. (Also November is not in the scene just yet)
Harvest fest was one of many traditions held in A’Grend during the time of Avër, and while it was a time of joy and unity for her people, Ara had to admit, it was her least favorite holiday.
The busyness it brought with it heightened everyone’s senses. The smallest of things could set off such large explosions. People were abuzz with what was labeled as excitement, but in truth, was nothing more then a constant need and stress for control.
Nerves were shot. Eyes ticked warily for signs of disarray or imperfection. Fists clenched and voices raised at the slightest mistakes. Still, people held fast to their masked smiles. Their forced laughs. Ever watching. Ever waiting.
For one mistake.
A single slip up.
And then?
They’d attack.
Perhaps that was a silly way to look at things. A harsh way to view the world around you. But when you’ve been attacked by snakes in the grass before, it can be difficult to trust.
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#ProtectSebI really like your writing style and your description! 😁 I don’t really know too much about your world/story but I’ll try to help 😅
Soo why does Ara have an anxiety attack? Is she like stressed out, or unhealthy, or is there something else . . . ?
And why is the town so untrusting? Is there something that happened to them??
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