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May 9, 2023 at 5:48 pm #142751
@freedomwriter76
AHH! Girl that was so good!!
Can’t wait to read more ♥️😅
. . . Who dressed up as a cat?? Lol
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 9, 2023 at 5:50 pm #142752Also I loved the marvel fanfic too!! 😂 Just didn’t respond to it yet lol
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 9, 2023 at 5:52 pm #142753Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@hybridlore Ahhh, girl, tysm!!! ❤️❤️❤️
yay, i’m so glad you want to read more!!!! ✨
lol…it was Sam Wilson from Captain America: Civil War…he was talking about Black Panther XD
and ahh, thanks!!! Glad you like the Marvel fanfic too!!!! ✨✨✨
May 9, 2023 at 5:52 pm #142754Anonymous- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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@freedomwriter76
That did make me sad. 😭
Poor Riker! I could just punch Franz. How could you treat your child that way?? So sad.
Also . . . Riker reminds me soooo much of Russell, it’s almost eerie at this point. Like . . . they share the exact same thoughts sometimes!
May 9, 2023 at 5:54 pm #142755Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@joy-calle
Me toooooo 😭 but have no fear, for things do eventually get better, i promise ❤️
Ikr!? I could probably hurt him too, 😅, but the main theme of the book is forgiveness…so…XD very sad tho…i honestly don’t understand how any parent could be that way 😭
lol, IKR!?!? Riker&Russell…even their names start with the same letter 0_o
May 9, 2023 at 6:11 pm #142758@freedomwriter76
AHHH HE DID?? 🤣😅 That’s awesome xD!!
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 9, 2023 at 7:14 pm #142764@freedomwriter76
Girl. Girl. GIRL!!!!!
OH MY WORD!!! I LOVED THAT SCENE SOOOOO MUCH UGHHH!!!! You’re so good!!!! I just started crying again 💔💔😭😭😭
OH LEON 😭😭😭 AND RIKER!!! 😭😭😭 Ugh your boys are so sweeeeettt I love them so much
And when Leon saw Isabel again…oh wow it actually reminded me of my dad and I when I was little. I would get so sad when he had to go to work and when he got home I’d just get so happy and excited…
Idk it was just a sweet reminder ❤❤😊
And Steve!!! And Bucky boi ❤😭😭💔
Wow girl. I LOVED that!!! Ami and Fynn are totally me and my little bro XD That was such a cute little interaction!!
And poor Ev 😭😭💔😭😭💔
He’s so sweet and precious ugh
Great job girl!!! 😀
#HugRikerSquad
May 9, 2023 at 8:02 pm #142766@freedomwriter76 I WANT THE SCENE OF LEON FORGIVING RIKER SOOOOOO BAD 😭
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 9, 2023 at 8:36 pm #142769@freedomwriter76
Oh wow. That scene was sweet and heartbreaking and terribly emotional. *stares into space biting lip and trying not to cry*
He must increase, but I must decrease.
May 9, 2023 at 8:47 pm #142770@freedomwriter76
<333
Oh that’s sad 😭😭
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 10, 2023 at 9:57 am #142779Ami and Fynn are totally me and my little bro XD That was such a cute little interaction!!
Good to know that it’s realistic. 😉
I know, I love it!! 😆
And poor Ev 😭😭💔😭😭💔
He’s so sweet and precious ugh
I know!! 😭
Great job girl!!! 😀
Thanks so much!! 😊
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 10, 2023 at 11:10 am #142781Definitely. 😉 I love writing scenes like that. 😁 (What makes this scene even funnier though, is that the joke about hunting pancakes is sorta an inside joke that was created when our youth group went camping last year. 😂 I love throwing in Easter eggs like that. 😁)
HAHA, I love that!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 10, 2023 at 11:11 am #142782@freedomwriter76
*continues to sit in the corner and cry*
THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET FREEDOM!
Leon and his kids. AGH MY HEART! 😭❤
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 10, 2023 at 12:06 pm #142791Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Girl. Girl. GIRL!!!!!
OH MY WORD!!! I LOVED THAT SCENE SOOOOO MUCH UGHHH!!!! You’re so good!!!! I just started crying again 💔💔😭😭😭
AHHHHH, GIRLLLLLLLL, TYSM!!!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ that means so much to me!!!! Ahh, don’t cry!!! *offers you handmade brownies*💕
OH LEON 😭😭😭 AND RIKER!!! 😭😭😭 Ugh your boys are so sweeeeettt I love them so much
😭😭😭 I knowwwwww!!!! They’re just the bestttttttttttt!!!!!!! ❤️💕 things will get better, i promise!!!!!❤️❤️❤️
And when Leon saw Isabel again…oh wow it actually reminded me of my dad and I when I was little. I would get so sad when he had to go to work and when he got home I’d just get so happy and excited…
Ahh, I was so much the sameeeeeeee….XD although i’ve always been a daddy’s girl, sooooo 😂
Idk it was just a sweet reminder ❤❤😊
Aww, well, I’m so glad I could give you a sweet reminder!!!!💕
And Steve!!! And Bucky boi ❤😭😭💔
THE BABIESSSSS!!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️😭
I WANT THE SCENE OF LEON FORGIVING RIKER SOOOOOO BAD 😭
AHHHHH, IKR!?!?😭 i’ve written it a few times…but I’ll probably rewrite it again XD
Oh wow. That scene was sweet and heartbreaking and terribly emotional. *stares into space biting lip and trying not to cry*
😭😭😭 *offers you brownies as well*
tysm tho girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Oh that’s sad 😭😭
😭
*continues to sit in the corner and cry*
THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET FREEDOM!
Leon and his kids. AGH MY HEART! 😭❤
AHHH, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
ikr!? Sooooo sweeeeeeettttttt!!!!! 😍
*offers you brownies too*
BROWNIES FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!
😂
May 10, 2023 at 12:46 pm #142804@freedomwriter76
YAY BROWNIES! *munches happily but then goes back to crying*
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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