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    hybridlore
    @hybridlore
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      @freedomwriter76

      AHH! Girl that was so good!!

      Can’t wait to read more ♥️😅

      . . . Who dressed up as a cat?? Lol

      WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*

      #142752
      hybridlore
      @hybridlore
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        Also I loved the marvel fanfic too!! 😂 Just didn’t respond to it yet lol

        WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*

        #142753
        Anonymous
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          @hybridlore Ahhh, girl, tysm!!! ❤️❤️❤️

          yay, i’m so glad you want to read more!!!! ✨

           

          lol…it was Sam Wilson from Captain America: Civil War…he was talking about Black Panther XD

           

          and ahh, thanks!!! Glad you like the Marvel fanfic too!!!! ✨✨✨

          #142754
          Anonymous
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            @freedomwriter76

            That did make me sad. 😭

            Poor Riker! I could just punch Franz. How could you treat your child that way?? So sad.

            Also . . . Riker reminds me soooo much of Russell, it’s almost eerie at this point. Like . . . they share the exact same thoughts sometimes!

            #142755
            Anonymous
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              @joy-calle

              Me toooooo 😭 but have no fear, for things do eventually get better, i promise ❤️

              Ikr!? I could probably hurt him too, 😅, but the main theme of the book is forgiveness…so…XD very sad tho…i honestly don’t understand how any parent could be that way 😭

               

              lol, IKR!?!? Riker&Russell…even their names start with the same letter 0_o

              #142758
              hybridlore
              @hybridlore
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                @freedomwriter76

                AHHH HE DID?? 🤣😅 That’s awesome xD!!

                WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*

                #142764
                Light
                @lightoverdarkness6
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                  @freedomwriter76

                  Girl. Girl. GIRL!!!!!

                  OH MY WORD!!! I LOVED THAT SCENE SOOOOO MUCH UGHHH!!!! You’re so good!!!! I just started crying again 💔💔😭😭😭

                  OH LEON 😭😭😭 AND RIKER!!! 😭😭😭 Ugh your boys are so sweeeeettt I love them so much

                  And when Leon saw Isabel again…oh wow it actually reminded me of my dad and I when I was little. I would get so sad when he had to go to work and when he got home I’d just get so happy and excited…

                  Idk it was just a sweet reminder ❤❤😊

                  And Steve!!! And Bucky boi ❤😭😭💔


                  @esther-c

                  Wow girl. I LOVED that!!! Ami and Fynn are totally me and my little bro XD That was such a cute little interaction!!

                  And poor Ev 😭😭💔😭😭💔

                  He’s so sweet and precious ugh

                  Great job girl!!! 😀

                  #HugRikerSquad

                  #142766
                  GodlyFantasy12
                  @godlyfantasy12
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                    @freedomwriter76 I WANT THE SCENE OF LEON FORGIVING RIKER SOOOOOO BAD 😭

                    #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                    #ProtectMarcel
                    #ProtectSeb

                    #142769
                    Felicity
                    @felicity
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                      @freedomwriter76

                      Oh wow. That scene was sweet and heartbreaking and terribly emotional. *stares into space biting lip and trying not to cry*

                      He must increase, but I must decrease.

                      #142770
                      MineralizedWritings
                      @mineralizedwritings
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                        @freedomwriter76

                         

                        <333

                         

                         

                        Oh that’s sad 😭😭

                        "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                        #142779
                        Esther
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                          @lightoverdarkness6

                          Ami and Fynn are totally me and my little bro XD That was such a cute little interaction!!

                          Good to know that it’s realistic. 😉

                          I know, I love it!! 😆

                          And poor Ev 😭😭💔😭😭💔

                          He’s so sweet and precious ugh

                          I know!! 😭

                          Great job girl!!! 😀

                          Thanks so much!! 😊

                          Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                          #142781
                          Euodia
                          @euodia-vision
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                            @esther-c

                            Definitely. 😉 I love writing scenes like that. 😁 (What makes this scene even funnier though, is that the joke about hunting pancakes is sorta an inside joke that was created when our youth group went camping last year. 😂 I love throwing in Easter eggs like that. 😁)

                            HAHA, I love that!

                            I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                            #142782
                            Euodia
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                              @freedomwriter76

                              *continues to sit in the corner and cry*

                              THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET FREEDOM!

                              Leon and his kids. AGH MY HEART! 😭❤

                              I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                              #142791
                              Anonymous
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                                @lightoverdarkness6

                                Girl. Girl. GIRL!!!!!

                                OH MY WORD!!! I LOVED THAT SCENE SOOOOO MUCH UGHHH!!!! You’re so good!!!! I just started crying again 💔💔😭😭😭

                                AHHHHH, GIRLLLLLLLL, TYSM!!!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ that means so much to me!!!! Ahh, don’t cry!!! *offers you handmade brownies*💕

                                OH LEON 😭😭😭 AND RIKER!!! 😭😭😭 Ugh your boys are so sweeeeettt I love them so much

                                😭😭😭 I knowwwwww!!!! They’re just the bestttttttttttt!!!!!!! ❤️💕 things will get better, i promise!!!!!❤️❤️❤️

                                And when Leon saw Isabel again…oh wow it actually reminded me of my dad and I when I was little. I would get so sad when he had to go to work and when he got home I’d just get so happy and excited…

                                Ahh, I was so much the sameeeeeeee….XD although i’ve always been a daddy’s girl, sooooo 😂

                                Idk it was just a sweet reminder ❤❤😊

                                Aww, well, I’m so glad I could give you a sweet reminder!!!!💕

                                And Steve!!! And Bucky boi ❤😭😭💔

                                THE BABIESSSSS!!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️😭

                                 


                                @godlyfantasy12

                                I WANT THE SCENE OF LEON FORGIVING RIKER SOOOOOO BAD 😭

                                AHHHHH, IKR!?!?😭 i’ve written it a few times…but I’ll probably rewrite it again XD

                                 


                                @felicity

                                Oh wow. That scene was sweet and heartbreaking and terribly emotional. *stares into space biting lip and trying not to cry*

                                😭😭😭 *offers you brownies as well*

                                tysm tho girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

                                 


                                @mineralizedwritings

                                Oh that’s sad 😭😭

                                😭

                                 


                                @euodia-vision

                                *continues to sit in the corner and cry*

                                THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET FREEDOM!

                                Leon and his kids. AGH MY HEART! 😭❤

                                AHHH, TYSM!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

                                ikr!? Sooooo sweeeeeeettttttt!!!!! 😍

                                *offers you brownies too*

                                 

                                 

                                BROWNIES FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!

                                😂

                                #142804
                                Euodia
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                                  @freedomwriter76

                                  YAY BROWNIES! *munches happily but then goes back to crying*

                                  I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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