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April 26, 2023 at 5:38 pm #141522
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 5:39 pm #141523#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 5:39 pm #141524@freedomwriter76
You’re so welcome!!
Ooooh, I bet the rest of that scene is going to be awesome!! 😀
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 26, 2023 at 5:40 pm #141525#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 5:43 pm #141529There u are!
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 5:44 pm #141530didn’t tag u write @freedomwriter76
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 5:49 pm #141532@freedomwriter76
AAAH poor babies!
This was really good! I hope Riker gets some hot tea and medical treatment…? Soon? 😭😭
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 26, 2023 at 6:23 pm #141540@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @awsumfaith @felicity @keilah-h @anyone-else!
Here’s a little snippet of a chapter a wrote a little while ago. It’s short, but I thought I’d share it. It was adorable in my mind and I knew I had to put it in there somewhere. 😊 (don’t mind that it ends abruptly 😛)
(For a bit of background, they’ve been trekking through the forest all day and now they’ve stopped by a creek.)
Ami splashed the water onto her face, wiping off the dirt and sweat. Though not fully clean, she felt clean enough and refreshed after a long day. She splashed it one more time onto her face, and prepared to stand up… but suddenly water was splashed onto her arm. She whipped her head to the side to see Ev with a smirk plastered on his face.
“What was that for?” She asked.
“You splashed me,” he said, his grin growing.
“I did not.”
“Yes you did; and now I shall get you back for it.” Ev started splashing the water at her and Ami splashed it back. Soon enough, everyone else was ensued in a water fight. By the time they finally stopped laughing and agreed upon a truce, their clothes and hair were soaked.
Ev shook his head, the water droplets from his wet hair flying and glinting in the light of the setting sun. A huge grin was on his face. Ami couldn’t help but smile. He was adorable… Ev caught her staring and cocked his head, raising an eyebrow.
Ami blushed and looked away. Thankfully, Ruben announced that they needed to find suitable shelter for the night before it got too dark.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 26, 2023 at 6:27 pm #141542Aww, I just love Ev and Ami! 🥰
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"April 26, 2023 at 9:22 pm #141554April 27, 2023 at 9:55 am #141573@freedomwriter76
THAT SCENE, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
just…
who is Richard, Anthony, and Natalie? 😂
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 27, 2023 at 9:56 am #141574 -
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