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April 25, 2023 at 7:31 pm #141307
@freedomwriter76 Ok then!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 25, 2023 at 7:32 pm #141308Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h btw, I think it’s actually your turn to RP for our group with Loony, if you want to 🙂
April 25, 2023 at 7:35 pm #141310Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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@freedomwriter76
I think it’s so interesting that your characters are jews. Idk many books that do that and so far I haven’t read any fictional books with Jewish characters.
April 25, 2023 at 7:40 pm #141312Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@sarafini aww, thank you so much! ❤️ I’ve read many books with Jewish characters, but I read a lot of books centered around the Holocaust, so…it’s to be expected😅 And yea, I actually have a lot of Jewish characters, and it’s a lot of fun to write all of the different cultures/people I have in my books, so I enjoy it a lot!
Most of my Jewish characters are Messianic Jews, but I have a few that are also Orthodox as well, and some who don’t really believe in faith at all, so it’s really interesting to write all of them.
(that got long-winded, lol…sorry bout that)
April 26, 2023 at 2:05 pm #141408@freedomwriter76
I loved reading that scene!! Well, I also feel really bad for Leon and Riker. 😢 Anyway, great job, Freedom!!!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 26, 2023 at 2:30 pm #141418Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c aww, thx girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ ikr? The babies!!! 🥺😭❤️😢
April 26, 2023 at 3:34 pm #141446Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @euodia-vision @gwyndalf-the-wise @anyone-else-that-cares-lol-XD
I was writing a scene that will definitely be a LOTTTTTTTTTT longer, but I got the main gist of the scene down and I just HAD to share it!!!!!
It’s from the 4th fic in my 4-book Marvel series…hehe…and I love this scene so much 😍
Viola smirked. “Do you truly think any of you stand a chance? It’s over. Hydra has won.”
“The battle isn’t over yet!” Yelena cried, weapons out, ready to fight.
Alec laughed. “That’s what you think. Face it, you’re done for.”
Viola raised an eyebrow, ruby lips twisting into a sadistic smirk. “What is all of this for? To be heroes? To, oh, I don’t know, somehow prove yourselves? Truly, what is all of this fighting for? You know you’re defeated. What are you trying to accomplish?”
“Enough talking! Let’s fight.” Thor snarled, Stormbreaker in hand, knuckles turning white.
Alec smiled. “We’ll fight soon enough. Viola is right. Why are all of you fighting? What are you fighting for? Who are you fighting for?”
Viola nodded. “Exactly. Why are you still fighting? Who is all of this fighting even for? Don’t you know when you’ve been defeated? Why do you still insist on fighting?”
Silence fell.
Meela and Mayla stepped forward, chins up, battle stances ready. “This is for Richard.”
Madelene, Vlad, and Bucky stood side by side. “This is for Alex.”
Thor came forward, axe at his side. He looked up at Viola, eyes blazing. “This is for Loki.”
A reddish-pink glow surrounded Wanda. She levitated into the air to be beside Vision. “This is for Pietro.”
Bruce, Yelena, and Clint got into battle positions. “This is for Natasha.”
Peter and Pepper stepped forward, ready for a fight. “This is for Tony.”
Sam put on his goggles, holding the shield. “We fight for freedom.”
Steve looked up, at the cell Viola held her few prisoners in. Peggy. Ryo. Anthony. Natalie. His family.
He faced Viola. He stood in the middle. He stood in the front. Leading the team, the family, he still had. He took another step forward. His grip on Mjolnir tightened.
Electricity coursed through his veins.
His eyes sparked, a bright blue.
“This is for everyone.”
April 26, 2023 at 4:05 pm #141449@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 BAHAHA I didn’t know this was y’all’s plan to seperate Riker. Hope y’all don’t mind Pax being along for the ride! Then again Pax seemed to bring out an odd side of Crosshair sooo it might work out lol.
also! RIKER 😭 I need the after scene of him being ok! Also the scene where Leon forgives him
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 4:10 pm #141451Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 lol…yea…we were plotting 😂🤣 don’t mind at all, I love Pax!!! 😍
ikr? The babyyyyy!!!! 😭 (yeahhhhh…but Leon’s not quite at the point of forgiving Riker yet 😅)
April 26, 2023 at 4:15 pm #141455He’s getting close tho it seems!! And I’m glad u like my pax
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 4:16 pm #141457Plus I really wanted some Riker and Pax talk too XD or Pax with anyone really cuz he wasn’t apt to talk much with his “new big brothers” around
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#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 4:24 pm #141461Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 Who wouldn’t love Paxton!?!?!? 😍😍😍😍
yesssssss, I want Riker & Pax to talk too!!!!!!!!!
alsoooooooo….may never happen….
…but…I’d love for Paxton and Bucky to be together 😅
April 26, 2023 at 4:27 pm #141463@freedomwriter76 Ohhh yeah that’s awesome!!!!
@godlyfantasy12 YESS KEEP PAX PLS!!!It’ll just be the “tortured boys” group, lol….
Also Paxton’s story is far sadder because Cross and Riker are grown men, so it’s a little easier to “justify” what happened to them….but poor little Pax is just 11, right?? He shouldn’t have to deal with that yet!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 26, 2023 at 4:31 pm #141464Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I’m so glad you think so, Keilah!!!! 😃😁
AND YESSSSSSS…the “tortured boys” group…😅 Our poor babies 🥺
AND IKR!?!? PAX SHOULD BE PROTECTED AT ALL COSTS!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭
#PaxtonProtectionSquad ❤️😎
April 26, 2023 at 4:33 pm #141467@keilah-h yes he is…well actually he’s 12 now at the time of the castle RP, but when the gang first meets him he’s 11.
but he’s been abused his whole life.
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