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March 22, 2023 at 6:48 pm #138069Anonymous
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@freedomwriter76
AHAKDFKSDKFNDSV KVDKJVDS
Just spamming my keyboard because that scene made me SO MAD.
FRIDA. IS. SUCH. A. GASLIGHTER. *SCREAMS AND PREPARES FISTS TO TAKE THIS WOMAN DOWN*
March 22, 2023 at 6:51 pm #138070@joy-calle LOL!!!!! I might start doing that when talking about characters that make me mad….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 22, 2023 at 7:09 pm #138072Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings IKR!? He’s just too lovable!!!! 😍😍😍😍
And uh…I’m kinda working on a single draft for the book with Leon/Riker right now…but all of the scenes are from random book-hopping adventures unless I specify otherwise. I write out of order constantly. 😂😂😂
@joy-calle
IKR!? 😥😟😡💢
She is just…😡😥 (i mean…we need to forgive her…but still…😅)
There are many reasons why I call her Evil Lady, let’s just put it that way
March 23, 2023 at 1:34 pm #138112Oh awesome!!!! It’s SO fun getting new story ideas, isn’t it?!? XDXD Oh my gosh, I TOTALLY get that!!! Like, it’s usually with a scene that I’ve been writing or whatever and then I think of some snarky comment that Dylan makes and I’m just over there grinning. 😅🤣
Exactly!!!! 🤣
What’s the story idea?? If you don’t mind sharing 😉
Absolutely! So this is the basic idea: Kylie Reagan (age 26?) is a former FBI agent who’s last mission was interrupted by the collapse of the US government into (insert foreign country) hands. Now under surveillance herself but determined to complete her mission, Kylie goes undercover in the wilds of Arizona to try to extinguish a band of illegal activists.
So the story is going to start where she’s in Arizona and gets a random phone call saying her estranged sister needs her help. Kylie is torn but decides to go and see what’s wrong, and maybe try to start up their relationship again. When she arrives at the house, she immediately senses that something’s wrong and before she knows what’s happened, she’s surrounded by the illegal band.
Well it turns out that the band isn’t the one she’s looking for, but a different one. A good one. A group of God-fearing individuals who are acting as the law enforcement in their small community since all government agencies were dismembered by the enemy. They call themselves, The Undefiled. (James 1:27)
I’m not sure exactly what all is going to happen after that besides there’s going to be a betrayal, Kylie is going to join the Undefiled, and in the end one of the guys is probably going to fall in love with her.
What do you think? Does that sound interesting?
I’m great!! Writings been pretty good, and I’ve been figuring out backstories and making character mood boards XD. Oh, and I got to see a bunch of my cousins who were visiting and were at church today! WHAT?!?! Whoa, that is sooo cold!!! 🥶 Hope y’all stay warm!!
Glad you’re doing well! Ahhh, character mood boards. I already made one for two of the characters in The Undefiled. 😉 Super fun! Haha, it’s warmer now but it was freezing for a while.
He must increase, but I must decrease.
March 23, 2023 at 2:02 pm #138118Geez I missed a lot being gone for two days…
I know!! I was gone for a few days about a week ago and when I got there…whew I had a lot to catch up on 😅
AHHHHH! That was SO good girlllll! AH SWEET DYLAN AND POOR ASHER!😭
AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! AHH IKR?!? My sweet traumatized boys 😭😭😭
#HugRikerSquad
March 23, 2023 at 2:24 pm #138121@freedomwriter76
Agghhh!! That scene! Frida is terrible!! 😠
Poor Joshua. 😢 It’s okay buddy, Ev can relate. 😭
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 23, 2023 at 2:28 pm #138123@freedomwriter76
Somehow I missed your reply a while back… oops! XD
Nope, not bad at all…he may even get a redemption arc. 🤐
*gasp* Yes please!!! That would be awesome!!
And lol, no…but pretty close XD
Felix/Hans get their own book, The Boys do too, as does Himmler, and also Adolphus, so basically, everyone except Frida, Dietrich, Annalise, and Steffi😂
Gotcha 😉 Sounds cool! 😀
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 23, 2023 at 2:30 pm #138124I HAVE REACHED 1000 POSTS!!!!! 🎉😆
*clears throat* *murmurs* Maybe because I sometimes spend too much time on here…. 🤣
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 23, 2023 at 2:37 pm #138126Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Agghhh!! That scene! Frida is terrible!! 😠
IKR!? 😡😥 There are reasons I call her “Evil Lady”
Poor Joshua. 😢 It’s okay buddy, Ev can relate. 😭
*hugs Joshua and Ev tight* 😭❤️
Somehow I missed your reply a while back… oops! XD
You’re good. I’ve done it many, MANY times…XD
*gasp* Yes please!!! That would be awesome!!
IKR!? Now…will it happen??? Not entirely sure…but it might…and I may know how it happens
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Gotcha 😉 Sounds cool! 😀
Thanks! ❤️
I HAVE REACHED 1000 POSTS!!!!! 🎉😆
*clears throat* *murmurs* Maybe because I sometimes spend too much time on here…. 🤣
Woo-Hoo!!!!! *throws confetti around* 😂🎉❤️XD
Ehhhh…we’re all like that sometimes XD It’s just so much fun to be here, that’s all! 😉
March 23, 2023 at 3:11 pm #138135@freedomwriter76
IKR!? 😡😥 There are reasons I call her “Evil Lady”
Oh definitely.
*hugs Joshua and Ev tight* 😭❤️
*joins you in the group hug* *Ev tries to escape but I make him stay*
IKR!? Now…will it happen??? Not entirely sure…but it might…and I may know how it happens
0_o
Uh-oh…
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Does someone die??? 😮
Thanks! ❤️
Yw!! 😄
Woo-Hoo!!!!! *throws confetti around* 😂🎉❤️XD
Ehhhh…we’re all like that sometimes XD It’s just so much fun to be here, that’s all! 😉
Exactly!! KP is full of such wonderful people!! 😊
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 23, 2023 at 5:25 pm #138167I think you’ve tagged the wrong person lol, I have no character named Dylan… I believe Light does though, maybe that was meant for her? XD
@lightoverdarkness6 ^^^ I think felicity replied to you up there 🤣What a nie coincidence though, I’m glad I got to read your description of your story! It sounds cool, I never would have thought of setting something in Arizona (my grandad lives there XD) I like it! <3
How’s life going?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 23, 2023 at 6:10 pm #138177@felicity Oooh, I’ve actually been to Arizona! It’s really pretty there.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 23, 2023 at 7:30 pm #138206Oh my goodness!!! I LOVE that so much 😍😍😍!!! Ahhh now I want to read it XD
You came up with that in one day?! I couldn’t come up with that much in a week XD
Glad you’re doing well! Ahhh, character mood boards. I already made one for two of the characters in The Undefiled. 😉 Super fun! Haha, it’s warmer now but it was freezing for a while.
Yeah they are! Ooh awesome! I’d love to see if you ever wanted to share 😀 Oh good! Yeah, glad it’s warmer now! It’s pretty hot here lol
Oh thank you for letting me know! 😀
#HugRikerSquad
March 23, 2023 at 7:38 pm #138207@freedomwriter76
OH MY WORD THAT SCENE!!!!! JOSHUA 😭😭😭😭
AND FRIDAAAAAA 😤😡😤😡😤😡
Joshua is so precious!! ❤️❤️❤️
And how can someone be so heartless?! *thinks of Vance* Oh…nevermind XD 😭
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March 23, 2023 at 8:12 pm #138209Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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OH MY WORD THAT SCENE!!!!! JOSHUA 😭😭😭😭
AND FRIDAAAAAA 😤😡😤😡😤😡
Joshua is so precious!! ❤️❤️❤️
IKR!? THE BABYYYYYY!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😥😥😥😥❤️❤️❤️❤️
UGH, I KNOW!!!!! 😡😡😡
IKR!? 😍😍😍 (Leo’s still my fav of The Bois…but Joshua is quickly raising to possibly my 2nd favorite 🤭)
And how can someone be so heartless?! *thinks of Vance* Oh…nevermind XD 😭
Yeah…they’re out there…😥
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