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March 20, 2023 at 7:58 pm #137876
@freedomwriter76
XDXD Oh wow, I love that!
#HugRikerSquad
March 20, 2023 at 8:00 pm #137878Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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*bows and falls flat on my face, but quickly jumps to my feet with a wide grin* Why, thank you! I hoped someone would enjoy my crazy randomness XD
March 20, 2023 at 8:23 pm #137884@sarafini
Murder mystery? Some kind of mystery? Survival story?
“Everything is a mountain”
March 20, 2023 at 8:26 pm #137885@freedomwriter76
*bows and falls flat on my face, but quickly jumps to my feet with a wide grin* Why, thank you! I hoped someone would enjoy my crazy randomness XD
XDXD
You are purposely trying to make me laugh aren’t you! 😊
….
It’s working 🤣💖😆
You’re so sweet girl. I feel so much better already 😊
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March 21, 2023 at 9:49 am #137894Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@sarafini Horror??? lol…idk…😂
@lightoverdarkness6 idk…maybe!!! (lol, okay, you caught me. XD So maybe I WAS trying to make you laugh XDXD)Awwww, I’m so glad!!!!!!! ❤️💗❤️💗❤️💗❤️
March 21, 2023 at 9:53 am #137895@freedomwriter76
idk…maybe!!! (lol, okay, you caught me. XD So maybe I WAS trying to make you laugh XDXD)
😊 Yeah, I had a slight suspicion… 😂😆
Thank you so much! I just couldn’t stop smiling after that.
Awwww, I’m so glad!!!!!!! ❤️💗❤️💗❤️💗❤️
Yes!!! Thanks to you, and all the rest of amazing people here on KP! Today’s a lot better already. I feel so loved. 💕💕💕💕💕💕
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March 21, 2023 at 10:13 am #137896Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Awww, I’m so glad I could make you smile!!!! ❤️😄
Awwwwwwww, girl, I’m so glad!!!!! This community is AMAZING!!!! 💗💗💗 Yes, you are loved so much more than you know! I don’t know what I’d do without you and everyone else here on KP. 😊
March 21, 2023 at 1:07 pm #137912@freedomwriter76 😱😱😱 I LOVE IT!!! I’m now imagining a marvel AU fic of my charries! Not like a crossover but they live in the marvel world. It would work cuz they could be like Mutants or just kids with powers!
Ara-Dreams the future
Luna: Mutant with light powers and empathy
November: Pyrokinetic who can’t control it and isn’t resistant to fire
Grimm: Wolf shapeshifter
Corvina: Raven Shapeshifter and controls shadows
Jocelyn: she’d be kinda like black widow, extremely agile and stuff.
Nyx: …. Is Nyx XD
Paxton: Siren ability
Luv this
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebMarch 21, 2023 at 1:11 pm #137914Ooh and since it’s an AU the abilities could be enhanced with some of them so like Paxton could actually do it when he sings sometimes or hums on accident
or when he gets upset and cries it sends headaches or something idk
and Corvina and Grimm actually have animal traits outside of their forms, but like in funny ways: Corvina loves shiny objects, and Grimm has to have a lot of self control not to chase small, quick things, AKA Nyx XD XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 21, 2023 at 1:33 pm #137915Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 Awww, I’m so glad!!!! ❤️ It was just a very random idea XD
OOH, that’d be SOOOO cool!!!!!!!!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩
March 21, 2023 at 3:28 pm #137948@freedomwriter76 FEATHER-HEAD HA HA HA
I have to say I love that crossover idea.
@godlyfantasy12 WHOAAA That’s actually really cool. Their powers sound awesome! And Grimm chasing Nyx….lolWhere'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 21, 2023 at 3:34 pm #137953Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Lol, thanks!!! ❤️XD
March 22, 2023 at 4:15 pm #138033Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @gwyndalf-the-wise @anyone-else-that-wants-to-read-idk-XD
Soooo…I finally wrote another book scene!!!! 😀
So happy to finally be writing my own babies again XD I love Marvel and all…but my babies are my favorite 😁😉
Anywho…I wrote this Joshua scene that I actually really enjoyed writing/reading, even though it made me want to cry 😅😭
But I wanted to share!!! Here y’all go!!!!
(It has Evil Lady, fair warning. XD)
His guitar laid in pieces on the floor at his feet. It was gone.
His guitar was gone.
The last thing he had left of his birth mama…destroyed.
What had he done wrong?
How had he failed?
Why did he have to be punished like this?
He did his best to be good…did his best to help out…did his best to listen to God and others…did his best to follow all the rules. He always did his best.
But even his best wasn’t good enough.
His best was never good enough.
Not for his mother.
Frida’s heels clicked against the floor. “It’s a shame. It was a beautiful guitar.”
His gaze slowly rose from where he sat on the couch, vision blurred by tears. His dark brown eyes met his stepmother’s blue. “W-why?”
Frida slowly shook her head, lips pursed in disappointment. “None of this would have happened had you listened to me.”
Joshua blinked.
He always tried to do what she wanted…unless it clearly went against his beliefs.
Recently, there hadn’t been too much she wanted him to do…and whatever she had wanted, he’d done it. “But I-I…”
Frida clicked her tongue. “Now, now, Joshua…don’t argue about it.”
“I-I’ve tried to do whatever you’ve wanted…I-I did my best.”
Frida raised an eyebrow. “That’s your best?”
Joshua slowly nodded, knowing it was. “…Yes.”
Frida shook her head, partially bending down, gripping Joshua’s jaw in her fingers and hand, her eyes meeting his, full of disappointment…and shame. “Darling, your best is nowhere near good enough.”
Joshua blinked again. Didn’t it matter that he had tried?
“It’s a shame. I thought you could do better…but maybe I was mistaken. You really can’t do better, can you dear? Are you really trying to do your best?”
“Yes, Mutti…I am.”
Frida slowly shook her head, his bearded jaw still in her grip. “Then darling, I’d hate to see what your worst is.”
“I-“
Her soft, manicured finger rested on his lips, silencing him. “Shh, quiet, darling. If your best is this…what can you do right?”
“But I-“
“Shh,” Frida whispered, removing her finger, instead brushing a curly lock of Joshua’s dark brown hair out of his face and behind his ear, “darling, you need to be quiet for a minute. You know I love you, and-“
Joshua pulled away from her grip. “No, you don’t. You don’t love any of us. You know you don’t. I know you don’t.”
Frida’s eyebrows furrowed together, but she still smiled softly. “Shush. You say you believe in God, darling, yet…your brothers still don’t. Have you done your best in that area too?”
He merely stared at her.
He couldn’t fight that.
Because she was right.
Frida used her hands to brush his hair back, gently running her hands through his curls. “…Have you failed in that too?”
He had failed…he had.
She stood to her full height and stature, giving Joshua a soft smile. “Well, I must go attend to a few things around the house to prepare for your aunt and uncle’s visit this evening. Nothing will get done if I don’t make sure everyone’s working. I hate to cut this conversation short, but circumstances demand.”
“Mutti…”
“Shh, darling,” Frida came around from behind him, leaning over the back of the couch, setting her hands on his shoulders, “it’s okay.”
She kissed the top of his head, her lips meeting his dark brown curls, and she removed her hands and walked away, her heels clicking as she walked on the hardwood, shined floors.
Joshua watched her go, a million thoughts tumbling in his mind.
Was she right?
She had to be right.
His brothers still didn’t believe.
Joshua hadn’t done enough.
He hadn’t been a good enough example of a believer.
Fresh tears coursed down his cheeks.
He knew the Bible…knew what it said.
God made everything…and he loved everything he made and said it was good.
He made each and every person, wonderfully created.
God didn’t make mistakes.
But maybe…maybe Joshua was the exception.
March 22, 2023 at 4:58 pm #138034@freedomwriter76 Aww Joshua!! Don’t be like that!!
(How did it get destroyed? Did she destroy it or did it get broken some other way?)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 22, 2023 at 5:02 pm #138035Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h AHHH, IKR!? Tell him, sister!!! ❤️😭
(she destroyed it. That’ll probably be the first half of the scene I shared…I just haven’t written it yet XD)
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