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This is so good! Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
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So glad you like it! 💕💕
It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭
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So glad you like it! 💕💕
Of course!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭
Awwwww….💖😭💖😭😭 I love it. ❤️
AHH I love it!!!! 💖💖😭😭
It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭
😭😭😭😭
So sweet…but so sad!!
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This is so good!
Aww thank you so much!! 🥰
Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!
Ahh I know!! I’ve got that partially figured out…heh 😅😏
And yes, I’ll make sure they’re not hurt anymore!!
(in this scene, anyway 🤐🫢)
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Just wrote this short scene for my 2nd Fanfic…🤐😭
It kinda wrote itself, lol, and honestly…I’m finally understanding what I want/think fits for this character’s arc/struggle/lie. 😉
The door slammed open. “Do you only care about yourself!?”
Tony closed his computer. Turned to face Clint with a smirk. “Welcome in, Legolas. You didn’t knock.”
Clint rolled his eyes, leaning against the door frame. “Didn’t need to. What’s your problem, Tony?”
Tony stood. “My problem? Oh, is all of this my fault?”
“You just called Steve’s best friend “a worthless piece of junk”, so, yeah, I think you have some explaining to do.”
“Yet Steve wouldn’t come and defend his own friend?”
“He locked himself in the gym. You need to apologize to him.”
“Me? He’s the one who started it.”
“Doesn’t matter. You finished it, and you’re the one who said the nastiest things in that argument.”
“Are you here to lecture me, Barton?”
Clint’s lips twitched in annoyance. He stepped closer to Tony, standing only less than two inches away. So close that their noses almost touched. “This is more than a lecture, and don’t tempt me. I want to punch you through that wall right there, but unlike you, I have self-control.”
Tony scoffed, crossing his arms. “Did you just come in here to tell me off then, Clint? Because-“
“Can you shut up and listen for one second!? Why do you think you’re so much better than everyone else!?”
Tony smirked, uncrossing his arms. “Maybe because I am.”
“And because of that you can treat everyone however you want!? You blame Steve for tearing the Avengers apart, and, knowing you, you’re proud of yourself because you think you brought all of us back together!”
Tony laughed. “Wow, Clint, that…that’s really dumb.”
“Steve already blamed himself for Alex’s death, and you just made him feel all that much worse!”
“Steve’s a grown man. He can decide how to feel himself.”
Clint groaned. “Your arrogance is impossible to get rid of, isn’t it!? What, Tony, you think you’re some kind of heightened being!? I can’t with you.”
“Better to be arrogant than ignorant!” Tony called after him.
But Clint didn’t listen.
The door slammed closed behind him.
Tony sighed, sinking into the chair beside the desk once again.
Clint didn’t know him enough to say those things. He didn’t understand what Tony had done…what Tony had been through.
He hadn’t made Steve feel worse…it was up to Steve.
Besides, Steve HAD torn the Avengers apart by not signing the accords.
Besides, Tony was a genius. Wasn’t that something to be proud of?
He turned in the chair, facing the desk.
His helmet sat on the desk, also a mask.
Everyone had masks.
Everyone had things they hid behind. Things they used to hide who they really were.
Things they used to make sure no one saw who they really were…make sure no one came close.
Maybe his arrogance was just a ruse.
A mask used to hide his own insecurities…his own doubts…his own regrets.
Because there were many things Tony didn’t want other people to know.
He rubbed his forehead, a sudden aching pain travelling through it.
Some people had complete pride.
Some people were proud of the things they’d done.
The things they’d accomplished.
Tony leaned his forehead on his hands. His head throbbed harder. He groaned.
Tears began coursing down his cheeks, creating long lines of salt.
Some people were proud of the person they’d become.
But Tony hid behind a mask of arrogance.
Because truth be told, in all honesty, in all truth, in all complete reality…Tony Stark hated the man he’d become.
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AWWW TONY!!!! 😭😭😭 AND STEVE!!!! 😭😭😭
That does make so much sense because it fits right in with his arc. Great job!!!
(And poor Bucky!! 😭😭😭)
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IKR!? 😭😭😭
Awww, thanks, girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
(ikr? Poor Bucky Boi!!! 😭😭😭)
Btw, I’ve been writing the scene that happens right after this from Steve’s POV. 😉
@freedomwriter76
IKR!? 😭😭😭
YESS!!! 😭😭😭
Awww, thanks, girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
You’re SOOO welcome, sister!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
(ikr? Poor Bucky Boi!!! 😭😭😭)
YES, THE BABYYYY!!!!!! 😭😭❤️❤️
Btw, I’ve been writing the scene that happens right after this from Steve’s POV. 😉
Oh really?? Yay!!! Whenever you’re finished, I would love to see it!! 🙂
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@lightoverdarkness6 I’ll be sure to share it when I finish it!!! 😀
@lightoverdarkness6 Yay, a redemption arc!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
*nervous gasp* I really hope Asher is ok!! Great scene though, girl!!!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
@freedomwriter76 WOWWWWW…..that scene….
How do you get inside these characters’ heads so well?? I’m still working on that, despite my mountains of fanfics.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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I’ll be sure to share it when I finish it!!! 😀
Okay!! Thank you!! Can’t wait! 😀
Yay, a redemption arc!
Yess!!! I love redemption arcs 😁
*nervous gasp* I really hope Asher is ok!! Great scene though, girl!!!
Yeah me too 😬. He will be! Aww thanks girl!! 💖💖💖
I feel like we haven’t talked in forever!! I’ve missed you! How are you doing girl? Hows life? Hows writing going?
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Yeah me too 😬. He will be!
Whew! Good. 🙂
I feel like we haven’t talked in forever!! I’ve missed you! How are you doing girl? Hows life? Hows writing going?
I know right! Me too! *hug*❤️❤️ I’m doing good! I was sick the last couple days but I’m better now. And two nights ago I got an idea for a new story so I’m really excited about it. Even though I really should be working on my other ones. *wry grin* It’s funny because ideas come at the weirdest times and then I start smiling and it could be at the dinner table and someone is like, “Wait, I thought you hated this meal!” 😅 And I. am. not. going to try to explain why I was smiling. (Because, the stuff going through a writer’s mind only makes sense to her…and her writing friends. 😉 )
How are you doing? What’s the weather like where you live? It’s freeeeezing today. 10*. Brrrrr.
He must increase, but I must decrease.
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