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March 16, 2023 at 10:55 am #137157
@freedomwriter76
🤍🤍🤍 Yw!!!! Yeah, you’ve got this! 😀
Aw thanks!! 😀❤️❤️
It is a lot of fun! XD Yes, very, VERY wild!!! 😂 (especially when you’re our crazy selves and combine Mario Brothers, Sonic The Hedgehog, Minecraft, The Avengers, and the occasional appearances of my book characters, the Justice League, and the Guardians Of The Galaxy! XDXDXD)
Oh my gosh that sounds so fun and great and hilarious!!! XDXDXD That’s awesome!! Love it XD
Awww, so sweet!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Yes, he is. Thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️
AHHH, THANKS, GIRL!!!!! 😭❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ohhh…yeah…glad you like that sentence…but…I mean…MY BABY!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭
YOU’RE SOO WELCOME!!!
And yesss!!! AHHH THE BABY!!! 😭😭😭
(Also…last night I figured out a LOT about Vance…including his backstory…😏😏)
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March 16, 2023 at 11:01 am #137159Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Aw thanks!! 😀❤️❤️
❤️❤️❤️ Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Oh my gosh that sounds so fun and great and hilarious!!! XDXDXD That’s awesome!! Love it XD
Lol, it is. 😂 We make ourselves and our mom and dad laugh all the time with our crazy antics. XD
Yes, he is. Thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️
Yw!!! 💙💙
YOU’RE SOO WELCOME!!!
And yesss!!! AHHH THE BABY!!! 😭😭😭
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
(Also…last night I figured out a LOT about Vance…including his backstory…😏😏)
AHHHHH, I NEED TO HEAR!!!!!!!!! 😫😫😫😫
March 16, 2023 at 11:02 am #137160@lightoverdarkness6 oooh nice!! I’m hoping to get some outlining done later today.
you still got writer’s block or u doing better?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 11:03 am #137161Secretly asking cuz I REALLY wanna know what happens to Asher
THE BABYYYY 😭
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2023 at 11:05 am #137162@freedomwriter76
Lol, it is. 😂 We make ourselves and our mom and dad laugh all the time with our crazy antics. XD
XD I bet!! Y’all’s fam sounds like mine!! I wish we could all meet each other in person. That would be so fun. Maybe when we’re famous and everyone knows who Riker Schind is we can finally meet. XD ❤️❤️❤️
AHHHHH, I NEED TO HEAR!!!!!!!!! 😫😫😫😫
Okay….😭😫
#HugRikerSquad
March 16, 2023 at 12:08 pm #137173Oh I’m sorry! I didn’t see your post 😭.
Aww thank you for asking! I’m doing better, thankfully. 😊 I’m going to be at the zoo with some of my cousins and fam, but I’ll try to post the next part later today.
(And yess!! My precious babayy!! ❤️❤️😭😭)
@freedomwriter76 @godly
Here is Vance’s backstory!!
*Warning: Spoilers galore in this post lol
Meet Vance Black! He is cruel, malicious, dark, manipulative, charming, sadistic…pretty great guy huh?
Vance had a tough childhood. His mother had him young and she couldn’t raise him alone. So she put him…and his twin brother (!!!!!) up for adoption. The people that adopted Vance didn’t want two babies, so the young boys were separated. The people who adopted him were popular and very well off and seemed great.
But that was not the case.
Abused all his life, he locked away the anger and hurt deep inside him, determined that one day, these people would pay.
And pay they did.
When he was about 20, he married a good woman who saw the bit of good in him.
Living with his love, he began to believe that he could be happy in this life. A few years later, she was found pregnant with a son. They were both excited and anxious.
Alas, tragedy struck, and his wife and unborn son died in an accident. In shock, grieving and angry, Vance hid away the small amount of good and kindness left in his heart, and he vowed to avenge them.
He started by kidnapping the young son of the people who had accidentally caused the death of his family.
Raising the boy as his own, the heir to the group that he formed.
And slowly, he became the monster he had always been terrified of becoming.
😭😭😭😭😭😭
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March 16, 2023 at 12:13 pm #137175Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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March 16, 2023 at 12:14 pm #137176Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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HE REMINDS ME OF ADOLPHUS AND DIETRICH AND FELIX!!!!!!!!
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😫😫😫😫😫😫😫
March 16, 2023 at 1:52 pm #137187@freedomwriter76
It is a lot of fun! XD Yes, very, VERY wild!!! 😂 (especially when you’re our crazy selves and combine Mario Brothers, Sonic the Hedgehog, Minecraft, The Avengers, and the occasional appearances of my book characters, the Justice League, and the Guardians of the Galaxy! XDXDXD)
Man, I want to live in a world where combined stories is normal SO BAD……
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 16, 2023 at 1:54 pm #137189@lightoverdarkness6 Awww Vance! It’s always horrible when things happen to characters, and they turn evil because of it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 16, 2023 at 4:56 pm #137225Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Man, I want to live in a world where combined stories is normal SO BAD……
Is it NOT normal??????? 😅😂 jkjk, I know a lot of people probably don’t see it as normal, lol.
It’s so much fun tho
March 16, 2023 at 5:04 pm #137227Woah. Just Woah. Like I love love love villains you feel for… and Vance? He’s got a reason to be angry, he just handled it the wrong way. Love it! Poor Asher though… 😭😭😭🥰
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 16, 2023 at 5:32 pm #137233@freedomwriter76
Girl…girl…GIRL!!!!!!
I…I…I…
I JUST CRIED OVER VANCE!!!!!!!!!
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Girl!!! You did?!? Ahhh!!! As I writer, that makes me so happy!!! But as your friend…😭😭😭 I’m sorry girl!!
And AHH I know!!! Now I can’t think of him without getting sad and trying not to cry 😭😭
I’m just trying hard NOT to picture him as a young boy…because…just ughhh he was probably so just innocent and sweet…ya know? I can’t take it!
HE REMINDS ME OF ADOLPHUS AND DIETRICH AND FELIX!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOSH YES!!!! AHHH 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Ahh I know right!! Yess. Now I’m wondering if I should have him as a POV character…or not…cuz after this…
HE WILL HAVE A REDEMPTION ARC!!!
Woah. Just Woah. Like I love love love villains you feel for… and Vance? He’s got a reason to be angry, he just handled it the wrong way. Love it! Poor Asher though… 😭😭😭🥰
Aww thanks Min!! 🥰😊
And UGHH yess 😭😭!! And now I kinda see more of just why he hates Asher so much…like what goes through his mind…kinda like:
‘this boy’s parents ended the lives of my family…and if I can’t make them pay…then he will.’
And poor Asher is just like “what did I ever do to you?!” 🥺😅😭😭😭😭
And Dylan!! AHHH 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
#HugRikerSquad
March 16, 2023 at 5:48 pm #137237Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Girl!!! You did?!? Ahhh!!! As I writer, that makes me so happy!!! But as your friend…😭😭😭 I’m sorry girl!!
And AHH I know!!! Now I can’t think of him without getting sad and trying not to cry 😭😭
I’m just trying hard NOT to picture him as a young boy…because…just ughhh he was probably so just innocent and sweet…ya know? I can’t take it!
I DID!!!!! 😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ AHHH, THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOSH YES!!!! AHHH 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
(in all seriousness tho, now I’m thinking of the song “Slow Fade” by Casting Crowns for Vance…😭)
HE WILL HAVE A REDEMPTION ARC!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!?!?!?!?!? 🤩🤩🤩
March 16, 2023 at 5:58 pm #137243@freedomwriter76
I DID!!!!! 😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ AHHH, THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!
😭❤️ AHHH I KNOW!!!!!!!
(in all seriousness tho, now I’m thinking of the song “Slow Fade” by Casting Crowns for Vance…😭)
Oh okay!! I’ll have to listen to it. WAIT…is that the one that says ‘be careful little feet,’ or something like that? I think I’ve heard it before. Is it on Felix’s playlist?
It’s SO SAD and TRUE ugh
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!?!?!?!?!? 🤩🤩🤩
YESSSS!!!!!!! HE WILL!!!!!!! 😄😄😄🤩🤩🤩🤩
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