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March 14, 2023 at 7:29 pm #136801Anonymous
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@mineralizedwritings. I’d love to!!! I can post the banter! It isn’t super long, but trust me, there shall be more later on in the fic. XD
Here it is: (writing from Tony’s POV, btw. 😆)
A blast sent the Agent flying into a wall. Tony smirked. “That’s nine for me.”
“Only nine, Stark? I have at least twelve.” Thor mused, speaking through the communicators.
“Why are we keeping count?” Steve asked, his voice followed by the sound of clanging metal.
Tony turned his rocket boots up, propelling himself into the air, grabbing another agent off of a tall skyscraper and throwing him onto another roof. “Make it ten. And Steve, we’re keeping count because we’re finding out who’s going to pay for dinner after this. Not that it matters with you, since y’know, you’re grounded.”
Steve groaned. “Don’t remind me.”
Tony laughed. “Kinda your fault for hiding Alex.”
“That’s eleven for me. You need to catch up to everyone, Stank.”
“Shut up, Loki.” Tony snarled.
He hated that nickname.
It was okay on occasion…but who in the world had taught Loki the nickname!?
Clint chuckled. “Still the best nickname.”
“Tony finally got payback for all of the nicknames he gave to everyone else.”
“Shut it, Natasha,” Tony slammed another agent into a wall, “and make it eleven agents.”
“If Steve and Bucky can’t leave the tower, what will they do for food?” Wanda asked, her voice carrying through the communicator like everyone else’s.
“I’ll make us something.”
“If you can figure out how the oven works.”
Steve groaned. “Sam…”
“Just saying, Cap, just saying. Just being honest.”
Peter laughed. “Everyone knows you forget how it works sometimes.”
Steve sighed. “Is it that common knowledge…?”
“Yes, Captain, it is.” Loki replied simply.
“Shouldn’t we be paying attention to the fight?” Vision suddenly asked, breaking the banter.
March 14, 2023 at 7:31 pm #136803Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Banter is one of my favorite parts of writing my fanfics XD
March 14, 2023 at 7:33 pm #136804@freedomwriter76
Thanks!! <3
Lol that was funny! 🤣🤣 doesn’t know how a oven works?! Is he like the older one who doesn’t get technology or something lol?
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March 14, 2023 at 7:35 pm #136805Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings. Yw!!!! ❤️
Thanks!!!! Lol, yeah…🤣 Welllll, I mean…Steve is originally from the 1940s, so, I mean…he’s still trying to figure out the 21st century XD He’s almost burned Avengers Tower to the ground before…multiple times. 😂
March 14, 2023 at 7:36 pm #136806Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Captain America just can’t figure out how the oven works XD
March 14, 2023 at 7:38 pm #136807@freedomwriter76
XDXD that’s hilarious!!
Btw have you seen into the spiderverse? I haven’t seen it but have basically spoiled the entire thing for myself XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 14, 2023 at 7:41 pm #136809Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings I’m glad you think so!!!! XD
I have not, lol! I haven’t watched everything Marvel, lol, and I’m not the biggest fan of Spider-Man (except Tom Holland Spider-Man 😆) so yeah, nope! XD Totally understand spoiling things though…I’ve done that too many times to count 😂
March 14, 2023 at 7:50 pm #136812@freedomwriter76
You should see it! (Goodness what’s gotten into me, I haven’t seen it myself! XD)
I’ve seen clips from it (way too many) and it’s sooo good! Anyways, the art style is supposed to be like a comic book brought to life, it has the sound effects written out sometimes and everything, and the colors are amazing, I mean top tier animation XD
I was asking because they are making a sequel and wanted to know your thoughts on it lol
Just curious why don’t you like Tom Holland spiderman?
(Also random question, but are marvel movies canon to the comics?)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 14, 2023 at 7:52 pm #136813@freedomwriter76
Thanks, girl!!! ❤️❤️❤️ So are you! 🥰
You’re so welcome!! Aww thank you!! 🥰🥰
Yw!!!! 💗💗💗 YESSS, the precious baby!!!! 🥰😍❤️💗
Aww thank you!! YESS I love him 🥰😍❤️🥰😍❤️
And that scene is HILARIOUS!!! Tony!! And Steve not knowing how to work the oven, XDXD
XD see you later! Have fun making dinner!
Thank you!! 😀
And I have seen Spiderman: Into The Spiderverse!
#HugRikerSquad
March 14, 2023 at 7:53 pm #136814@freedomwriter76
Ack, didn’t mean to break your heart!!! 😅
XD no worries. I collected all the pieces, found some duct tape, and made it ‘unbreakable’ so you’ll have to try really hard next time. XD
I get that, and you are not obligated to read ANYTHING I write!
Yeah. I enjoy reading your writing though, just so you know. =p
I just…while my parents are fine…I was really close to people whose parents were the most opposite possible and it’s just…torn everything apart and it recently (in the last week) got worse. So I’m kinda…still not emotionally okay around that topic. Still working on forgiving people I thought I already forgave but apparently I need to re-forgive them.Now, will it actually end in divorce…???🤔
Can’t answer that question…it’s a spoiler, lol.*glares at SPOILERS* SPOILERS, HOW COULD YOU?
and that’s directed at the SPOILERS, not you, just thought I’d clarify
Yeah, for them, their son, and anyone that knows their family I’d hope not.Thanks, girl, you’re always so sweet. ❤️❤️❤️
You’re welcome. =)
Hey, and girl, whatever you’re going through right now, whatever it is, I just prayed that God will bring healing and peace to you and give you whatever else you need. ❤️
Aw…thanks. Yeah…I have a cousin that specifically needs prayers right now, if you want something more vaguely specific.
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(Part of) Isaiah 45:19March 14, 2023 at 7:55 pm #136815March 14, 2023 at 7:55 pm #136817Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings. It does look really cool though! I’ve seen a clip or two! Just…haven’t gotten around to watching it, lol XD
Welp, I would give thoughts if I had watched the first one!!! 😂
Tom Holland is the only Spider-Man i’m a fan of, is what I meant, lol, my wording was confusing. 😆 And the reason why I love Tom Holland Spider-Man is because he feels realistic, I like the younger Spider-Man aspect (unlike the Toby Mcguire Spider-Man, who’s like, 20-something) and his relationships with Ned, MJ, and Tony are just…😍😍😍
(…barely. XD Some of them are, but most of the time, yeah, no, not canon at all. 😆 That’s why the movies are called the MCU (Marvel Cinematic Universe) rather than just the “Marvel Universe”. 😉 Gets confusing sometimes, lol, but I’ve never really read the comics, so…I just stick to the movies😂)
March 14, 2023 at 7:59 pm #136818Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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XD no worries. I collected all the pieces, found some duct tape, and made it ‘unbreakable’ so you’ll have to try really hard next time. XD
*breathes a deep sigh of relief* that’s good XD
Yeah. I enjoy reading your writing though, just so you know. =p
I’m glad. 🥰
I just…while my parents are fine…I was really close to people whose parents were the most opposite possible and it’s just…torn everything apart and it recently (in the last week) got worse. So I’m kinda…still not emotionally okay around that topic. Still working on forgiving people I thought I already forgave but apparently I need to re-forgive them.
I totally understand, girl!!!
Forgiveness is hard! 🥲❤️
It’s honestly one of the hardest things for me to do still…and I think that’s why it’s a recurring theme in my books…😉
God understands too! ❤️
*glares at SPOILERS* SPOILERS, HOW COULD YOU?
and that’s directed at the SPOILERS, not you, just thought I’d clarify
Yeah, for them, their son, and anyone that knows their family I’d hope not.Lol…yeah…those darn spoilers. 😂
Aw…thanks. Yeah…I have a cousin that specifically needs prayers right now, if you want something more vaguely specific.
Yw!!!! 💗💗💗 Can and will do!!! 🙏
March 14, 2023 at 8:01 pm #136819Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Yw!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Haha, I’m glad you think so!!! XD Yeahhhh, me and my siblings came up with Steve always being teased about not being able to work the oven, lol 😂
March 14, 2023 at 8:05 pm #136822Thanks!
What do you think of the idea of there being a sequal? I watched the tailor awhile ago and got the idea it was going to be much more romance focused, but idk
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OH Ok! I was confused because everyone else loves the Tom Holland spiderman more than the others, and I thought I was about to get the tea on what he’s really like XDD
I will pray for your cousin!! 💗💗💗
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