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I’m doing some school, then I’ll try to post that scene (fingers crossed!). Sorry it’s taking so long! 😬🤦
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@freedomwriter76 btw how’s writing going?
im hoping to finish my A’Grend worldbuilding today. Emphasis on hoping XD
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@godlyfantasy12. Slow. 😅🤣
I’ve been cleaning the house all morning, so…🤷🏻♀️ And may do some more after lunch in a bit, lol.
And then I just have a bit of writing block for almost ALL of my writing, heh. 😅 I have an idea for a scene with Abelard though that I want to write. (that includes Ezra and Eva!!! And Jameson and Yoshua and Curtis!!! 💗💗💗)
But hey, recently Freedom’s Fire reached 115 pages, so…I guess I could take/use a break, lol! 🤣😊
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Hope the worldbuilding goes well!!!! 💗
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@godlyfantasy12, OH, I DID write a small scene (that’s partially unfinished) for a possible Korean War book/sequel, but…heh…
…I don’t think y’all will like me when you see what I’ve done to Reuben.
🤐😅😬
@freedomwriter76 that’s awesome!!!
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REUBEN…TELL ME WHAT DID U DO TO HIM?!?!
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@godlyfantasy12, thanks!!! 💗💗💗 I was pretty excited. 😅😊
Also…i have to ask but I don’t want to sound like a bother 😅 so if I am just tell me to SHUT UP XD
have u written anymore of that fanfic? Ur good if not cuz writer’s block is a DEVIL
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*breathes heavy*
REUBEN…TELL ME WHAT DID U DO TO HIM?!?!
Heh…
…heh…
…but…honestly…
…do you REALLY wanna know?
Cause if so, I’ll share the scene…
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@godlyfantasy12. You’re not a bother!!! You’re excited…I would be too! 🤣 I have a bit of another chapter, but otherwise…not much. I have ideas, tho, just not entirely sure how to…implement them, y’know? 😅
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I do….
WAIT!!
*grabs all of my boys for comfort*
Okay….go ahead….
Please don’t hurt the baby too much…. 😭
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#ProtectSeb@freedomwriter76 oh I totally get that XD
i’ve started fanfics before and….
never gotten very far so KUDOS to u for going as far as u have with yours! XD
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@godlyfantasy12. Okay, if you’re sure…😅 Lemme tag a few others too…😬🤐😉
@mineralizedwritings. @lightoverdarkness6. @thearcaneaxiom. @princesachronicle22. @gwyndalf-the-wise. @anyone-else-I-am-inherently-forgetting-sorry!Sooo…this scene…from a POSSIBLE Korean War Book/Sequel…
“Hey there, sleepy head…”
He slowly awoke. Reuben groaned, head pounding.
He was no longer in the forest fighting. He was in a pristine, white tent…the medical tent.
He looked up. “W-Wolfi? Leo?”
Wolfgang smiled, sitting right beside him on the bed. “Hey there, Reuben.”
Leo smiled. “Good morning, Rebel…sleepy head.”
“W-what happened?”
Wolfgang smiled softly. “You got injured a bit…but you’re good now.”
“What about all of the other men? Did they get back?”
Leo nodded. “They’re fine, Reuben…they’re back and safe.”
Reuben nodded. But there were still battles to fight…a war to win. “I need to get back out there.”
Leo shook his head. “No. You’re still recovering.”
“I feel fine. I-I need to get back out there.”
Wolfgang bit his lip, brushing a strand of his curly black hair behind his ear. “Reuben…you’re done. Your fight’s over…you have to go home.”
Reuben laughed. He couldn’t help it. They had to be joking. “Going home? My tour is nowhere near over, besides, there’s a war to win.”
“You’re not going back, Rebel…I’m sorry.” Leo whispered, and his gaze strayed to Reuben’s left arm.
Reuben almost turned, to look, but Wolfgang grabbed his jaw, stopping him. “Reuben…you’re alive. That’s all that matters. You’ll be going home to Anna Grace and little Elsie…you’re alive, Reuben, and that’s what matters most.”
Reuben raised an eyebrow. He didn’t know if he’d ever seen Wolfgang this serious about something. “Wolfgang…what is it? Let go of my jaw.”
“You’re going home, Rebel, but you’re alive…you might have died, but you’re alive…and that’s all that matters.” Leo whispered, grabbing his hand, squeezing it.
They were acting so weird.
Reuben pulled his jaw away from Wolfgang’s grip, slightly narrowing his eyes. “What’s wrong with both of you?”
Leo glanced at Wolfgang. “You were seriously injured, Reuben…we even thought we’d lose you…your left arm…it was badly cut and burned…”
Reuben raised an eyebrow.
What was Leo going on about?
Wolfgang gripped Reuben’s shoulder, and Reuben was startled to see tears in his younger brother’s eyes. “…They had to amputate, Reuben…”
The words slowly registered in his head…his stomach churned. “…What?”
He quickly looked at his left arm…that wasn’t there anymore.
Only his shoulder and a little bit more down was left.
His breakfast threatened to come back up.
He didn’t have a left arm anymore. Just…a….useless…stump.
A sob escaped Reuben’s lips and tears coursed down his cheeks. “Why!?”
“It was the only way the doctors could save you, Reuben…” Wolfgang whispered, grabbing Reuben’s right hand, squeezing it.
“H-how am I going to hold Anna Grace…how am I going to hold my wife? H-how am I-I-I going to hold Elsie…how am I going to be able to hold my daughter!?”
Tears coursed down Leo’s cheeks in droves. “It was the only way they could save you, Reuben.”
“They should have let me die!” Reuben screamed, his tears mixing with his grief…his loss…making anger.
Leo pulled away with a flinch.
Reuben sank back down onto the pillow, even more tears falling. “…What am I supposed to do with a useless stump, Wolfgang, Leo, huh? What am I going to do!? I can’t hold my wife…I can’t hold my daughter…” he trailed off, too overcome by tears to speak.
Wolfgang grabbed his hand, squeezing it, and Reuben’s eyes fluttered open.
Leo was gone…leaving only Reuben and Wolfgang.
Wolfgang smiled softly. “Leo needed some fresh air…”
Reuben let out a low and deep sigh. “Wolfgang…please…don’t…don’t tell me that everything is going to be okay…that God has a purpose in this, please.”
Wolfgang shook his head. “…I wasn’t going to.”
Reuben faced his younger brother, raising an eyebrow, tears still falling. “Then why are you still here…?”
“I don’t want you to be alone.”
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@godlyfantasy12, thanks!!! I do my best! =D
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