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  • #135788
    Keilah H.
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      @freedomwriter76 Yep, that’s the way it is. I killed him off because it seemed like a really good time to do so…also he deserved it…..

      But that left me with “What do I do now? My villain is dead!” Mind you, he was a low-level admiral out of all of the Empire’s forces, but….To my charries, he was important because he was either trying to kill them or, for one of them, he was the superior officer who didn’t like the idea of soldiers having their own opinions on things.

      So when the latest episode of the Star Wars TV show The Bad Batch (where I pulled my first six MCs from) introduced a new Imperial character who might prove to be a threat soon, I decided I could use him, but only if he makes more appearances so that I and any theoretical readers actually know what he might do.

      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

      #135792
      Anonymous
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        @keilah-h.

        Yep, that’s the way it is. I killed him off because it seemed like a really good time to do so…also he deserved it…..

        Yep, I get that!!! Lol…he must have done some stuff…😬

        But that left me with “What do I do now? My villain is dead!” Mind you, he was a low-level admiral out of all of the Empire’s forces, but….To my charries, he was important because he was either trying to kill them or, for one of them, he was the superior officer who didn’t like the idea of soldiers having their own opinions on things.

        As long as he’s important to the charries, he’s an important villain. 😉 Ugh…he sounds horrid. 😡😬

        So when the latest episode of the Star Wars TV show The Bad Batch (where I pulled my first six MCs from) introduced a new Imperial character who might prove to be a threat soon, I decided I could use him, but only if he makes more appearances so that I and any theoretical readers actually know what he might do.

        Ooh, interesting!!! 🤔 Yeah, I can see why you’d wait. 😃

        #135797
        Anonymous
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          @godlyfantasy12. Btw…when November is 14, how old is everyone else??? I totally forgot! 😅🤦🏻‍♀️

          #135812
          GodlyFantasy12
          @godlyfantasy12
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            @freedomwriter76 so if ur writing an AU it doesn’t matter much cuz u can change the ages, but basically it’s like this-

            (Use Ara as ur Age Range XD)

            November is a bit younger then Ara, by like a couple months

            Lyn is the same age as Ara.

            Grimm is almost a year older then Ara.

            Corvina is two years older then Ara.

            Nyx is around 3-2 years younger then Ara

            Paxton is around 5 years younger then Ara

            Luna is around 2-3 years younger then Ara

             

            I hope that’s not confusing.

             

            and this is Canon time. If ur doing an AU u can change this up obviously XD

             

             

            also in Canon, they don’t meet each other till certain books….

             

            Ara and November are 14-15 when they meet Lyn.

            15-16 when they meet Grimm (he’s 16)

            Around 16-17 when they meet Pax

            17 when they meet Luna

            and then they stay around 17-18 for the rest of their adventures 😊

             

             

            again this is tossed out the window if it’s an AU (which I am good with XD. And hey, an AU can still take place in a fantasy world, kinda like how u still do ur marvel AUs in the same world)

             

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            #135814
            Anonymous
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              @godlyfantasy12. Okay!!! Good to know!!! 😃

              And I AM writing an AU…I hope you like it…😬😅

              I’m working on Chapter 1 right now, actually!!! 😃💗

              #135816
              GodlyFantasy12
              @godlyfantasy12
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                @freedomwriter76 GASP that was fast….

                 

                 

                man I’m so glad u like my charries that much 😭 😭 wow!!! People actually like my story like that…..

                 

                #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                #ProtectMarcel
                #ProtectSeb

                #135817
                Anonymous
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                  @godlyfantasy12. Of course!!!! You should know that I love them by now. 💗😜💗💞💞

                  (especially November, Grimm, and Paxton…but isn’t that pretty common??? 😉🤣😅💗)

                  It’s a similar idea to one of my other fics, but also different in it’s own way. 😉💞

                  #135818
                  GodlyFantasy12
                  @godlyfantasy12
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                    @freedomwriter76 EEEE I am super excited!!!

                     

                     

                    AND I ALSO LOVE UR CHARACTERS AND UR WRITING SO I AM EXCITED!!!

                    #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                    #ProtectMarcel
                    #ProtectSeb

                    #135819
                    Anonymous
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                      @godlyfantasy12. I’M SO GLAD!!!!!!

                      💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

                      #135820
                      Light
                      @lightoverdarkness6
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                        @godlyfantasy12

                        man I’m so glad u like my charries that much 😭 😭 wow!!! People actually like my story like that…..

                        GIRL!!! Your charries are PRECIOUS CINNAMON ROLLS AND I LOVE THEM!!! Like, Grimm?!?! November!?!? And PAX!! (And also now Aaron…and Bren!!! XD) 💖💖💖💖

                        Your story is AMAZING!!! Don’t EVER doubt that. 😀

                        And @freedomwriter76 YOURS ARE TOO!!!!! LEO…RIKER…oh and DIETRICH!!!!😭😭😭💖💖

                        @Both-of-y’all-

                        Talk to y’all later!! 🙂 I’m going to try to write more in that scene, maybe share some later! Love you sisters!!! 💖💖💖

                        #HugRikerSquad

                        #135822
                        GodlyFantasy12
                        @godlyfantasy12
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                          @lightoverdarkness6 AWW THX 😭

                           

                           

                           

                          AHHHHH THAT SCENE?!?! The one we are all waiting ON???! 👀

                           

                           

                          *impatiently waits*

                          #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                          #ProtectMarcel
                          #ProtectSeb

                          #135823
                          Anonymous
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                            @lightoverdarkness6. Aww, girl!!!! YOU’RE SO SWEET!!!!! 😭💞💗😭

                            Love you too, girl!!!! 💗💗💗💗🤗🤗🤗🤗


                            @godlyfantasy12
                            . Btw…I…uhm…may have made an MC board already…😅🤣

                            Wanna guess who’s who, lol? 😜🤣

                            #135824
                            Anonymous
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                              I’m over here making sure I got everyone. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

                              Yep…I think I got them all…😅🤣

                              #135825
                              Light
                              @lightoverdarkness6
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                                @godlyfantasy12

                                You’re SOOOO welcome!! 💖💖💖

                                And yes, THAT scene 🫢…

                                XDXD that makes me sooo happy hat you’re anxious to read more! I’ll post the 400 more words I’ve written after my shower. SOOOO in like 6 hours….

                                XDXD Jk, jk. Maybe an hour 🙂

                                #HugRikerSquad

                                #135826
                                Light
                                @lightoverdarkness6
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                                  @freedomwriter76

                                  Aww, girl!!!! YOU’RE SO SWEET!!!!! 😭💞💗😭

                                  Aww THANK YOU!!! 😭😭💗💗

                                  Love you too, girl!!!! 💗💗💗💗🤗🤗🤗🤗

                                  💗💗💗🤗🤗🤗🤗


                                  @godlyfantasy12
                                  @freedom AND OH MY GOSH it’s the crew!!! PAXTON!!! Ahhh Grimm!!! November!!!!

                                  And wow, that was fast XD 😯

                                  #HugRikerSquad

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