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March 1, 2023 at 3:57 pm #135111
@freedomwriter76 ha…trust me I am no expert by any means!! In fact…I was dreading this soooo much XD XD
a lot of it just comes from my thoughts on Jewish culture and tradition, and honestly I think a lot of the love/thoughts from that has stemmed from watching the Chosen lol!!
@keilah-h thank you!!! I I’ve had A’Grend in my minds eye for a long time, and the first most inspiration came from the Garden of Eden: a kind of “Perfect” safe haven created by God for those who want to serve Him and escape the darkness of the world.It’s practically perfect…at least environmental and landscape wise…but as always people tend to…well…mess things up more often then not.
My other inspirations is just kind of a quaint village, nothing fancy (fanciest thing is the palace) and outside of it is rolling hills and farmlands, a large river for the fishers, etc, and of course The Garden which is located way out in a hilltop. Most don’t visit there as it is sacred and mostly for the royal family and their guests, a Gift from the Light to forever show His blessing upon the land.
Culture wise I wanted it to just be simple and down to earth since it was filled with farmers, cobblers, that kind of thing. And as I was working I realized Religion played a big part into it, especially at the founding and so I took a ton of inspiration from Jewish culture, (and will continue to do so with another race/culture I’ll be creating way in the future) but also tried to keep it balanced with that down to earth, simple construct of “Yea we’re all just kinda simple folk…”
They invite friends and family to the weddings, have parties that resemble “Hoedowns, harvest fests,” things like that.
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 3:59 pm #135113@godlyfantasy12 I love it! I could probably live there…it sounds so beautiful.
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March 1, 2023 at 3:59 pm #135114Can I bring some of my charries? Your people might be a bit freaked out by them tho……lol
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March 1, 2023 at 4:02 pm #135116Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. You shouldn’t dread it though…this is amazing!!!! 🤩🤩🤩 YESSSSS, The Chosen is just AWESOME, isn’t it!? 😍😍😍 And the Jewish culture is just so interesting! 😁❤️
Speaking of The Chosen…which disciple is your favorite??? *cough cough* Simon Peter *cough cough* 🤣
March 1, 2023 at 4:02 pm #135117@keilah-h as for races? I don’t have a set number because truthfully my world isn’t Set and completely built…and I don’t really want it to be if that makes sense??
it’s an ever expanding world. And that gives me the freedom to create as much as I want!!
Right now I have, the Fae Folk, which include: The Pixies, The Dryads, The Nymphs (now known as the Mer), and The Icari. (I think that’s all of them.)
There are the Kobolds, the Elves, Luna, Corvina and November’s race (which are still nameless XD), the shifters (which is a slang term, they have different names)
And…a lot of others…
and don’t get me started on creatures cuz that’s endless XD
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:03 pm #135118@freedomwriter76 UM MATTHEW!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 UGH THE BABBBYYYYY!!!!
MY FAVORITE PART OF THE NEWEST SEASON (Idk If y’all have watched it) IS WHEN HE IS TRYING TO PUT ON HIS PRAYER TASSELS AND GETS SO EMBARRASSED CUZ THAD WALKS OUT AND SEES HIM IN HIS UNDERCLOAK XD HE IS SO ADORABLE
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:04 pm #135119I love ALLLLL OF THEM THOUGH!!!
and Judas 😭 😭 I love Judas…
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:05 pm #135120@keilah-h they’d have to go through the entering process. Ya can’t just walk into A’Grend and be like “HEY WE’RE JOING XD XD
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:05 pm #135122It is a place of a peace after all. God’s Holy Land. There’s a bit of a waiting period.
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:09 pm #135125Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Okay, I get that!!! Matthew is one of my favs too…but I’ve always loved Simon Peter for some reason, and The Chosen only made me love him even more!!! 🤣😍❤️
YESSSSS…they made Judas so, so likeable, and now I’m like: “COME ON, WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO US!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?” 😭😭😭😭
After Simon Peter, my favorites tho are probably Matthew, Simon Z (hehe, yes, I love him!!! 😍), and probably John. ❤️❤️❤️
AND YESSS!!! OH. MY. GOSH. Yesss, that scene from Season 3 with Matthew…that WAS sooo ADORABLE!!!! 😍😍😍😍
Also…uhm…as for non-disciples and not Jesus, I love John The Baptist, ❤️😭, Eden, and Yosef!!! Yes, I love Yosef…and not just bc I have a character with the same name…😅❤️
March 1, 2023 at 4:11 pm #135128@godlyfantasy12 Ah, I see. That would be bad if they just walked in.
Charries of mine like Feather and Jareth would totally get the “It’s God’s place! You can’t just WALK IN!” idea. I’m not sure if all of my others would get it though…you all need to work on that, guys…..
So what exactly does each one look like? I know the Fae are the winged ones, but I suppose each one has different wing styles and stuff? Are the elves like stereotypical elves, or more like LOTR/KOTLC elves, or something else? And what are Kobolds like?
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March 1, 2023 at 4:11 pm #135129@freedomwriter76 AHHH I LOOOOVE Z!!!!
oh and Phillip oh gosh he’s so great! I love them all, just seriously.
But Matthew stole my heart from the get go.
GASP NO!!!! GAIUS!!!! SCREEEE!!! I LOOOOOOVE GAIUS!!!!! The Roman soldier?!?! With the two sons?!?! AHHHHHHH 😭😭😭
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#ProtectSebMarch 1, 2023 at 4:14 pm #135132@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 I really enjoy The Chosen too! I can’t pick a favorite character though. It changes from episode to episode. That one scene you’re talking about was hilarious though!!
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March 1, 2023 at 4:15 pm #135134Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. HOW. IN. THE. WORLD. DID. I. FORGET. GAIUS!?!?!?!?!?!?! 😭😭😭😭😭
I LOVE HIM, AND I FORGOT HIM!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
March 1, 2023 at 4:17 pm #135135Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h. Yeah, I get that!!! It is really hard to pick a fav, lol! 😅 (well, I mean…other than Jesus…but that’s not fair! 🤣)
I’ve just always loved Simon Peter, and The Chosen did him sooo well!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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