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I am actually concerned for my mental health now…LIKE WHAT 14 YEAR OLD GIRL WRITES THAT?!?!?
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333haha! I think that’s the saddest thing I’ve EVER written!!!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333- Rank: Chosen One
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@savannah_grace2009 what is thissssssssssss????? 😭😭😭😭
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
why would you do this to me!? 😭😭
jkjk, but seriously…I need to call in the Protection Squad XD
It’s written so well though, like, ughhh, girl, it’s so sad but also so good and just AHHHHHHH
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@freedomwriter76
The protection squad…
this made me laugh XD
though you might need to call in the squad lol
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333@freedomwriter76
Now you know how I feel when I read your stuff…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
but this might be worse…Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333- Rank: Chosen One
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Now you know how I feel when I read your stuff…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I meannnnn, that’s probably f a i r
😅😂
@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76
Wow, y’all, my charries have it made compared to y’all’s.
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😂😂 jkjk, they just have different struggles I guess. XDD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
@esther-c lol
@savannah_grace2009 Some of my fanfic villains, like Hemlock or Dyson, would work perfectly as Pythonos…. *shudder* and they’d enjoy it tooWhere'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@rae cool beans!
I love how I can see all this Star Wars stuff in your stories even though they have nothing to do with each other lol
Maybe it means I’ll like whatever you’ve written once it’s published!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
I know…haha! I’m too scared to show my parents this cuz they will definitely worry for my sanity and be concerned where this is coming from!! XD
And they thought my other scenes were sad compared to this….heh…heh…Some of my fanfic villains, like Hemlock or Dyson, would work perfectly as Pythonos…. *shudder* and they’d enjoy it too
Um…that sounds scary….
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333@savannah_grace2009 ummm yeah. they would. it is pretty scary.
Buuuuuuut that’s kinda the way they are in their original stories…..I mean, in the TV show I pulled him from, Hemlock literally tortures a main character for what appears to be the sheer sake of doing so (there’s no real gain for targeting this character in particular?), and seems to enjoy it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @keilah-h @rae @anyone-else!
Sooo, I really enjoyed writing this snippet from my WIP. I’ve been developing their brother dynamic a lot more and I’m loving it. XD The context isn’t that important, I just wanted to share their bantering, lol.
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Asher spun a chair around and plopped into it, leaning forward on the backrest. “Now you’ve done it.”
Ev let out an exasperated sigh. “Yeah, and? He should know how I feel. He runs our home like Len runs the Orb. No freedom.”
Asher rolled his eyes. “You would have been eighteen in a few months and—”
“Nine months.”
“And you could have left without a problem.”
“Well, according to him, I’m always a problem that he has to take care of.”
They fell into silence for a moment.
Ev’s tongue itched to ask if that was true, but he withheld. Asher didn’t need to know his doubts. “I’ve made mistakes,” he said, tossing up his hands. “So what? He acts like he’s the one who has to take care of them. That’s not true! I just let my problems run their course.”
Asher tilted his head.
“You don’t believe me, do you?”
“Probably not. I’m looking at this as a common case of teenage rebellion.”
“Oh, don’t you—”
“Hey, just my observations.” Asher stood, holding up his hands.
“If you were really observing, you’d see that Lukas felt the same way.”
Asher cocked an eyebrow.
“Ok, fine. He just doesn’t get into trouble as often as I do.”
“Nobody does.” Asher filled a cup with water from the sink.
Ev stood and walked over to him. “You do know how annoying you are right?”
“All I’m doing is being a good older brother and pointing out your flaws.”
“Ha-ha, very funny. That would take you all day though.” Ev smirked.
Asher turned to face him. “You’ve got a point.”
“Don’t you understand though? The only reason I asked Dad to come with us is to keep the tension between us low. And look what happened!”
“Somehow I get a feeling that you’re blaming somebody else for the trouble you got yourself into.”
“Now you’re starting to sound like Dad.”
“Ev, calm down.” Asher met his gaze.
Ev let out a short sigh and shoved his hand into a pocket.
“Do you want me to be honest with you?”
“If you weren’t you wouldn’t be a good brother.”
The corner of Asher’s mouth twitched in the beginning of a smirk. “To be honest, I think he’s right.”
“Ash—”
“I’m just saying—”
“Then stop saying.”
“Ev…” Asher shook his head, laughed escaping his lips. “You’re impossible.”
“Yeah, it comes naturally.” He smirked. “As does the charm.”
“Charm?”
“Of course.”
“Sorry Ev, but I think you’re lacking in the charm department.”
“I’ve got an excess, that’s all.” Ev quirked an eyebrow. “Now, stop analyzing me like a creepy psychologist and let me figure my inner self out all on my own.” He started towards the stairs.
“You might need some help though. It’s probably a mess in there.”
“Ha!” Ev tilted his head back as he walked. “You humor me.”
“When did you begin to speak so eloquently?”
“It’s the charm, Asher. Always been there.” He flashed Asher a cocky smirk and rushed up the stairs before he could retort.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
And don’t mind any grammatical errors either. I haven’t gone over this much. XD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
LOL I love that XD. Yeah, siblings are so much fun to write
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
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