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*accepts box of tissues*
"You need French Toast."
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I looove it and it was so sad and just ughhhh 😭😭🥰
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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Am I allowed to change my forum signature to “#HugRikersquad” too?
"You need French Toast."
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@rae Yes, 100%
@mineralizedwritings tysm🥰 UGHHHH i knowwwww😭😭💖😭😭@freedomwriter76
He better, cause poor Riker needs it
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
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💗 😭 👏Oh my goodness, Riker!!!😭 😭 😭 I love it though, your descriptions are really good!💗
"Would you kindly...?"
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(thanks for the tag!!)
*eyes water* How sad. 😭😭😭
😅 I really liked this part:
“I-I can go home.”
“If you have a home, then why do I keep finding you in the alleyway?”
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
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Aww, poor Riker! 😭😭
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
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GAHHH…
That poor dear. He’s in a mess that just keeps getting messier.
*Nods*
Well done! I understood what was going on even though you never said “it may be infected” or something like that. And the rising angst and suspense…I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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OH MY GOODNESS….RIKER!!!!!!!!!
poor guy!!!!!
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FREEDOM!!!
Why must you continually put this poor boy through so much!!! 😭
I am officially confiscating Riker from your care.
*grabs Riker and runs*
You cannot be trusted with him anymore. *crosses arms*
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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@acancello @koshka @grcr @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision Thank all of y’all for reading and for all of your kind words!!💖💖
also…Euodia…
GIVE ME BACK MY BABY!!!! I will come and get him, you know. I will recruit everyone I need to, okay?? I will get Leon, all of the Bois, Ezra, etc…I will get everyone I need to XD
We will rescue him.
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GIVE ME BACK MY BABY!!!! I will come and get him, you know. I will recruit everyone I need to, okay?? I will get Leon, all of the Bois, Ezra, etc…I will get everyone I need to XD
*smiles innocently*
honestly i think he’s better off with me.
We will rescue him.
but are you actually rescuing him?
think about that for a little bit then get back to me…
😂😂😂
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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Just because I feel like it, I’m posting a scene from my WIP. Ignore this if you don’t want to read it XD
Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.
He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.
Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what the trees were saying to each other. Sometimes, he’d even try to talk to them, but the trees never talked back, and made him look like a fool. The trees rarely spoke to even the Andromedans of purest bloodlines, let alone half-breeds, Paynes like him.
But that didn’t stop him from trying all the same.
And then suddenly, a drop of water splashed down on his head.
He looked up, and all he saw was the peachy sky overhead and the eaves of his roof. He shook his head. I must be going crazy.
Plop.
He felt it again. “Is it going to rain?” he wondered out loud, bringing his hand to his head as another one fell. But there wasn’t a cloud in sight, and that made him all the more confused.
Before he knew what was happening, he was temporarily blinded by a torrent of water splashing down. “Ack!” he fought back some choice words on the tip of his tongue. He held his arms out from his body in disgust. He was dripping with water, soggier than a dishrag.
That was when he heard laughter from directly above.
He looked up and saw none other than Sef. Of course. She was holding a watering can, her legs dangling over the edge of the roof.
“Sorry,” she giggled, “I kind of tipped the watering can too far.”
“Don’t you have anything better to do?” he smiled crookedly at her to let her know he wasn’t mad. Annoyed and confused as to what possessed her to do such a thing, but not mad.
“Blame my mahnith,” Sef shrugged, jumping down from the roof to land beside Lilitu. It still made his stomach flip flopped every time she jumped from that height. She was much braver than him. Sef continued, “she told me to come annoy you. I’m not even joking.”
Lilitu sighed. “Okay.”
“Just ‘okay’?” Sef raised an eyebrow. “Did it work?” she smiled.
“What kind of question is that? I’m soaked to the skin…of course it worked! Of course I’m annoyed!”
“Good,” Sef nodded seriously. She paused, as if deep in thought. “So let’s go do something!”
“You lost me at the ‘good’,” he blinked. Sef shook her head.
“Boys,” she scoffed. “You can’t have a decent conversation with them!”
“When you’re friends with a girl,” Lilitu muttered, “You can’t even sit on your porch in peace without taking a bath.”
“That’s because you stink.” Sef said. Lilitu’s eyes grew wide. Shoot. Sef must have seen the horrified look on his face because she quickly added, “I’m kidding! Jeez, you’re sensitive!”
“Okay,” Lilitu breathed a sigh of relief.
“Are you going to pick something to do? Because I’m this close to asking Cass if he wants to go on a run with me,” she held up her thumb and index finger with less than an inch between them. A run? Lilitu frowned. She was going to leave him behind and go with Cassian, Mr. Athletic?
“Let’s go to the market,” suggested Lilitu.
Sef wrinkled her nose in disgust. “But that means we’d have to cross the Farnbron Brook!”
“Build a bridge, and get over it,” Lilitu said sarcastically. Sef looked blankly at him. “It’s something the humans say.”
“Why? Obviously we can’t build a bridge. If we could, we wouldn’t need one,” Sef frowned.
“It’s just a joke,” Lilitu tried to explain.
“It’s a bad joke. Now I’m annoyed,” Sef made a face.
“You can always ride on my back across the Farnbron Brook,” Lilitu joked. Sef rolled her eyes.
She sighed dramatically. “I suppose if you can cross without falling on your face, anyone can. I’ll go. I guess. Fine.”
She grabbed Lilitu’s wrist and yanked him to his feet. “Let’s go.”
Lilitu hobbled down the stairs, clutching the banister for dear life, and then limped down the sidewalk. He wished he would have wrapped his foot in something, as the sidewalk always chapped the side of his foot, but he didn’t say anything and gritted his teeth, pushing through the pain.
“When we go to the market,” Lilitu winced as his foot twisted further, painfully, “we might want to avoid the Azer section. Especially Adar’s.” Though seven months had passed since he stole the bread from Adar, he was sure that Adar would remember him, and that their interaction would not be a positive one.
“Why?” asked Sef.
“Me and Adar have some…” Lilitu paused. “History. If you know what I mean.”
Sef nodded. “Don’t try to be cryptic, I can remember seven months back,” Sef laughed.
Dang it. So she does remember, Lilitu’s cheeks flushed at the conjuring up of one of his most embarrassing moments.
Suddenly the screen door crashed. “Lilitu, where are you guys going?” Cassian stepped out onto the porch. He swept the dark brown hair out of his icy blue eyes. His tan skin contrasted with his white shirt, and he raised an eyebrow. “Why are you soaking wet?”
Sef smiled sheepishly. “I kind of dumped a watering can on him.”
“Kind of?” Lilitu muttered under his breath.
“Atta girl,” Cass nodded his approval. Lilitu flashed a murderous glare at his older brother. “Where are you going?” he asked again.
“We’re going to the market,” Lilitu put in.
“Can I come?” Cass said.
“No, you can’t,” Lilitu frowned and began to walk away.
“Aww, you guys are no fun,” Cassian made a face, but to Lilitu’s relief Cass went back inside.
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