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October 16, 2023 at 10:53 am #159072
Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)
Of course! OH YAY!! So has editing book one been the main thing? How has it gone?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
October 16, 2023 at 3:12 pm #159102Pretty much. (Along with plotting a new WIP for NaNo… 😏)
Good! I’ve been editing directly on the doc, but I think I’m going to print it out and edit it by hand. That might help me see things better.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
October 16, 2023 at 3:20 pm #159109If you print it out/read it out loud to someone, it helps a lot with forcing yourself to read the whole thing instead of just skimming over it because you know what happens. It also helps with finding mistakes and sentences that could go more smoothly.
(I know you probably won’t want to read your WHOLE BOOK out loud, trust me, your voice will be shot, lol. But if you go chapter by chapter, you can save your voice, haha!)
Lukas&Livia
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 16, 2023 at 4:20 pm #159117Thanks, but I feel like it’s to, to…undescriptive? I don’t know. It just doesn’t seem Nahim. It seems wrong, somehow.
"You need French Toast."
October 16, 2023 at 8:25 pm #159156GIRL…
YOUR WRITING STYLE IS AMAZING I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
AAAHHHHH I LOVEEE TAUREN AND LESLI SOO FREAKING MUCHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍😍
@everyone-else-cuz-im-too-tired-to-comment-on-everything-sorry-yall-lol
I love everyone’s writing SOOOOO MUCH!!! Y’all keep going, you’re doing great 🥰🥰🥰🥰
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October 16, 2023 at 8:34 pm #159159TYSM!! I’m so glad you like them! Like seriously, hearing that from you gives me motivation to keep working on my book 🥰
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 16, 2023 at 9:01 pm #159161You’re SOOOOO welcome girl!!!! Oh my goodness how could I NOT?!?! They’re A D O R A B L E I was literally about to cry reading that when he told her that she was very pretty he is SOOOO SWEETTT UGH 🥺😭❤🥺😭❤ I just want a Tauren ❤🥺
Awwwwwwwwwwww girl I’m so glad!!! 🥰
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October 16, 2023 at 9:14 pm #159164Thank you! Light you are such a inspiring person to talk too! <3
Ikr… don’t we all want a Tauren in our lives 😭😭?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 16, 2023 at 9:20 pm #159166Awwwww girl that means so much to me <333 You are too!! I always love talking with you ❤❤
Yesssss everyone needs a Tauren 😭❤
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October 16, 2023 at 9:26 pm #159167<33
I guess I wrote the person I wanted to meet XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 16, 2023 at 9:30 pm #159168Just floating around, watching people talk, and girl honestly Tauren is so sweet and memorable – definitely the friend everybody needs ❤️😉
“Everything is a mountain”
October 16, 2023 at 9:35 pm #159170<33
Oh gosh girl same XD 😭❤
Indeed, indeed. ❤️😉
I’d take a Seb as well XD ❤️😉
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October 16, 2023 at 9:40 pm #159171❤️😂 That gets me thinking – does everyone have that Seb friend? The guy they don’t really know, and participates in possibly illegal practices, but can’t help liking anyway?
…I can say I have a few 😂
“Everything is a mountain”
October 16, 2023 at 9:43 pm #159172October 16, 2023 at 9:44 pm #159173I haven’t chatted with you in a while!! How is writing going? How are you? ❤️
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