A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc

[MineralizedWritings]

@freedomwriter76

I love it! 😭😭

Also I finished the first captain America yesterday! It was really good! watching Bucky get ignored by Carter was really funny XD He’s not used to that

"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

[Anonymous]

@mineralizedwritings AWW, TYSM!!! 💕💕💕💕

*SQUEALS* I’m so happy you finished watching the rest of it!!!! Haha, ikr!? 🤣🤣

[Smiley]

@freedomwriter76

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! The fact that she remembered him!!!!

and that she still remembers her Mom *cries* it’s the most bittersweet thing ever!!!

And poor Leon and Riker

Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-Thorne

[Elishavet Elroi]

@freedomwriter76

O.O

That was so horrid and so sweet. I feel sorry for all those characters. So many emotions….

BUT ISABEL IS ADORABLE AND HEART WRENCHING. War is never so dark as when its affect is seen in children. But it’s never so full of hope as when it’s seen through their eyes.

Also, the line where Leon wondered if she’d recognize him is perfect. It definitely serves a double purpose, highlighting both her youth and how much he’s changed. Cause he has. (If I’m honest, I probably wouldn’t recognize my own father straight off after something like that. Which is really dreadful to think about.)

I could really see that part with Isabel, though. Her doll, half forgotten, her hair a glowing golden mess, and her eyes so bewildered.

And then, is it? Really?

Daddy!

You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

[hybridlore]

@freedomwriter76

🥰🥰🥰 great job, girl!!

Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

[Anonymous]

@hybridlore @smiley AHH, thank y’all so much!!! 💕💕

i know..the poor bois 😭

 

@elishavet-pidyon

O.O

That was so horrid and so sweet. I feel sorry for all those characters. So many emotions….

BUT ISABEL IS ADORABLE AND HEART WRENCHING. War is never so dark as when its affect is seen in children. But it’s never so full of hope as when it’s seen through their eyes.

Such a range of emotions when I was writing it, too XD

Yessssssssssssssss, Isabel got me too 💕🥹💕

Also, the line where Leon wondered if she’d recognize him is perfect. It definitely serves a double purpose, highlighting both her youth and how much he’s changed. Cause he has. (If I’m honest, I probably wouldn’t recognize my own father straight off after something like that. Which is really dreadful to think about.)

Aww, thanks! Heh…yeahhh, he’s changed…a lot…and not for the better in most ways 😢

I could really see that part with Isabel, though. Her doll, half forgotten, her hair a glowing golden mess, and her eyes so bewildered.

And then, is it? Really?

Daddy!

That makes me soooo happy knowing that you were able to actually see it…that means a lot <3

[Keilah H.]

@freedomwriter76 wow!! awesome!

(The fact that you kept yourself committed to a whole long chapter book is better than I can do, tbh.)

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[hybridlore]

@keilah-h

(The fact that you kept yourself committed to a whole long chapter book is better than I can do, tbh.)

Ikr!!! XD

Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

[Keilah H.]

@hybridlore lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Esther]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, I love it!! 🥹

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

[Anonymous]

@esther-c @keilah-h Thx y’all!!! <3

 

(The fact that you kept yourself committed to a whole long chapter book is better than I can do, tbh.)

It took a lot of work, trust me 😅

[whaley]

I know this is completely random, but @freedomwriter76 did Godly once mention she was going to temporarily kill off Jocelyn?? Or was it someone else??

I don’t know, it hit me randomly and now it’s bugging me

#ProtectAdolinKholin

[Anonymous]

@whalekeeper Indeed, you are correct

[Anonymous]

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @joy-calle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @euodia-vision @starshiness @lydia-s @gracie-j @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

SOOOOOOOOOOOO I know that not everyone I tagged knows him completely…but uh…I made another aesthetic for ma Boi…my BABY, my RIKER!!!!!

Y’all…when I say that I love him, and he deserves so much more love from the people in his life…I really mean it 😭💕😭

[Euodia]

@freedomwriter76

Your first scene from Broken Shackles is SO good!!! And 😭

And Riker’s board… girl, you put that boy through so much. 😭😭

I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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