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August 29, 2023 at 6:55 pm #154994
@freedomwriter76
*offers you a big hug* and awww, tysm!! 💖💖
*returns the big hug* you’re so welcome girl 💖💖
AAAHHHH WOLFIE AND REUBEN AND LEO AND DIETRICH AND ALL THE PRECIOUS BABIES AHHHHHHH 💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😭😭😭
I LOVE IT!!! 💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰
AND NOOOO DIETRICHHHHH 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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August 29, 2023 at 11:06 pm #155007@freedomwriter76
All of those poor, dear, darling characters and you BEAT them! 😭 (
LEON!!NOOOO!!!!!)Just fyi, I’m taking some decently heavy college courses right now so if I don’t respond for a few days it doesn’t mean I’m ignoring you and your darlings. I read the posts that come through my email, but I just can’t find much time to be on here much.
*Sigh*
Life.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkAugust 30, 2023 at 11:22 am #155044@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Love all these scenes!!! 😭😭
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
August 31, 2023 at 8:52 am #155231@freedomwriter76
Aww poor kids… and the whole sibling argument is totally realistic XD
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 1, 2023 at 7:58 pm #155428@freedomwriter76
*cheers*
Reuben sat up and faced Leo with a grin. “That was awesome.”
That would be me 😂
Great scene!! I love it!!
(also, I have no idea how long ago you actually posted that scene… I was only just notified)
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September 4, 2023 at 1:49 pm #155552@freedomwriter76 Wow that “blow up the bridge” scene was awesome!
Jakob’s “Why don’t we wait till the trucks are on it” was oddly funny. Even though I know it really wasn’t supposed to be….?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
September 4, 2023 at 6:55 pm #155580Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @koshka i’m sorryyyyy 😭 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore
Thx so much, y’all!!! 💖💖💖
September 5, 2023 at 2:35 pm #155631@freedomwriter76 you’re welcome!!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
September 6, 2023 at 3:21 pm #155673Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Here’s the scenes!!! 😘 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @whalekeeper @koshka @euodia-vision @smiley @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
I have more scenes to share!!!!
More of The Bois…bc I’ve been in the mood to write them a lot lately xD
Here they are…2 scenes!!!
They needed information about the camp…when deportations were scheduled.
But the papers containing such information still couldn’t be found.
Reuben rifled through another small stack. He groaned and shook his head. “Nope, still nothing.”
“Try another stack,” Jakob set a new box of files on the table, “it has to be in here somewhere, and we need to find it in enough time that we can straighten this office back.”
Reuben nodded, going at another stack.
They had to find the papers…for so many innocent people…they had to find the papers.
Leo cussed and set another file aside. “Still nothing.”
Joshua’s eyes sparked with determination. “We’ll find the papers. We have to.”
They rifled through more papers, seeking the only papers they needed.
Wolfgang suddenly turned away from the window. “Uhm, uh, guys, you might wanna stop for a minute. We should probably put things back.”
Reuben froze.
That had to mean…oh no.
“Quick, put everything back where we found it…hurry.” Joshua whispered.
Reuben did so. They couldn’t be caught. If they were, it’d put the whole Violet Iris group in danger…not to mention…who knew what would be done to him and his brothers.
Reuben shivered just at the thought.
Files and boxes were put back in place.
Leo pointed to the door. “Hurry, we can get back to the room-“
Footsteps pounded up the stairs.
“We don’t have time for that,” Jakob tugged on a cord hanging from the ceiling, “hurry, into the attic. Quick.”
The attic? The attic that was small and…and…dark?
“Reuben, hurry.” Wolfgang whispered, and he lightly pushed Reuben forward.
Reuben went up the ladder…he had to.
It was either the attic or get caught, and he wasn’t about to be caught.
Besides, he could be brave…right?
Reuben got into the attic. It truly wasn’t too bad!
Jakob pulled the ladder up and closed the hatch.
Never mind…no…no, it was just as bad as he thought.
It was dark…cramped.
So, so dark.
Reuben heard voices below.
The attic was dark…cramped…damp.
His sore body crumpled onto the cold concrete floor of the cellar.
Dark…cramped…damp.
So dark…he couldn’t even see his fingers.
Reuben sobbed, curling into a ball, bruised, bleeding, forgotten.
Reuben’s breath heaved. He was breathless…he couldn’t breathe.
He didn’t have room…he couldn’t see anything.
Reuben gasped for air.
He couldn’t breathe!
He was about to panic.
A strong, muscled arm wrapped around his middle, and Leo’s hand clamped over his mouth. “Shh, shh, Reuben…Rebel…you’re safe. Come on, shhh.”
He heard…he felt…Leo’s whisper in his ear.
“C-can’t b-b-breathe.”
“Shh,” Leo uncovered his mouth, “take in deep breaths…you’re panicking.”
Reuben obeyed, and he could finally…he could finally breathe.
Voices faded.
Jakob opened the hatch and lowered the ladder, letting light in. “Come on, they’re gone…let’s get out of this attic.”
Reuben wanted to go, but his body…it felt…it felt so numb.
Jakob’s arms wrapped around him, and Reuben’s middle brother practically carried him out of the attic and down the ladder.
Reuben settled on the carpeted floor, trying to get his entire body to calm.
His brothers rifled through more papers, but he didn’t pay attention…still trying to get everything to calm down.
Joshua raised a folder. “Found it!”
Reuben released a deep breath he hadn’t realized he’d been holding. They’d found the papers…they got their mission finished.
Reuben smiled gently. “…That’s good.”
Jakob grinned, taking the file from Joshua and looked it over. “Sure is.”
~*~
Wolfgang forked another forkful of dinner into his mouth.
He was so hungry!
They’d gotten the file to Ezekiel and Fin. No one even knew it was missing…that was a bonus!
Frau Adelmann refilled Frida’s drink and smiled Wolfgang’s way. “Someone is hungry.”
Wolfgang grinned from ear to ear. “Your food is delicious! Who wouldn’t want it?”
“I suppose I can’t disagree…I’m glad Felix decided to keep you around,” Frida took a sip of her drink, “even if your tastes in friends are…distasteful.”
Frau Adelmann smiled…but Wolfgang was pretty sure it was fake.
It certainly looked fake.
“Thank you, Frau Baumann…I enjoy working here. Is there anything else I can get for you-?”
“I want some more, Frau Adelmann!” Steffi cried, holding up her empty plate.
She didn’t even say please…how rude.
Frau Adelmann moved to give Steffi a second serving.
Wolfgang ate his final bite.
It was delicious!
He’d ask Frau Adelmann for more when she was done helping Steffi…he didn’t want to overwhelm her!
Or…maybe he could get his own food and not bother Frau Adelmann…that would be nice, wouldn’t it?
Boots pounded against the floor.
Frida smiled and looked up. “Felix, are you finally done in your office and ready for dinner, darling? Frau Adelmann made plenty…she can make you a plate…Felix, is something wrong, darling?”
Felix’s blue eyes burned with fury. “One of my files is missing, Frida! It contained information I needed, and it’s missing.”
Frida gasped. “Who would-? Who was in your office, darling?”
Uh oh.
Felix marched to the side of the table Wolfgang sat on.
His body even shook with anger he was so mad…that was bad news.
Felix yanked Leo out of his chair, making Leo flinch.
Wolfgang saw Frau Adelmann set Steffi’s plate down, her eyes filling with tears, out of the corner of his eye.
Was she okay?
Wolfgang faced his father and oldest brother again.
“When I was gone at lunch with your mother, an important file in my office was stolen. You were the only one home, so do you want to tell me where it is!?”
Only one home!? Wolfgang and all of his brothers were home…not just Leo!
Wolfgang opened his mouth, but he saw Joshua shake his head, fast.
“But-”
Joshua shook his head, fast and firm. ‘No’, he mouthed.
Were they just going to sit still and do nothing?
Why did Joshua want him to be quiet?
That didn’t seem…it didn’t seem right.
“I don’t know, Father.” Leo lied.
Felix’s eyes sparked. His rough hand clutched the collar of Leo’s shirt. “Frau Adelmann?”
“Yes, Herr Baumann?”
“Prepare a plate for me,” Felix stepped away from the table, still holding onto Leo’s collar, “I’ll be back soon.”
Felix, with fury in every step, marched away, Leo in tow.
Why weren’t they doing anything!?
But one look at his brothers’ faces told Wolfgang everything.
His brothers didn’t like it just as much as he did…but it was all a part of the plan, to protect innocent lives and even the Violet Iris group as a whole.
And Wolfgang wanted to help people…but at the expanse of Leo?
Oh, why did war have to be so complicated?
September 6, 2023 at 3:31 pm #155681@freedomwriter76
*Me dialing child services*
Poor boys *Cries*
Do your charries ever get a break?
I mean mine don’t but still…
XD
Love the scenes though
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-ThorneSeptember 6, 2023 at 3:34 pm #155683Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I don’t know how much good child services can do…*cough cough* considering Leo is 28 for crying out loud *cough cough*
XXD
I GUESS I should call them “The Men”…but “The Bois” is more endearing and catchier 😂
Breaks???? Sureeeeeeee, on rare occasions! xD
tysm!! 💗💗✨✨
September 6, 2023 at 3:40 pm #155684@freedomwriter76
ok…this may just be me…
But I wanna see a scene where the boys confront their daddy…
Or maybe daddy AND momma.
Cuz…yes I get they have the “law” on their side since they’re Jews…
But I wanna see them at least confront their daddy, cuz it’s apparent he was t that bad at one point, and loved his original wife and his boys.
And there are 5 of the boys.
I want a scene with this! I do! I’m sick of it! It’s a bit more understandable with children or something…
But I wanna see these grown men JACK THIS MAN UP! XD
ahem…rant over.
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#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebSeptember 6, 2023 at 3:40 pm #155685OH WAIT! I WANNA SEE WOLFGANG JACK HIM UP FOR SURE XD
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#ProtectSebSeptember 6, 2023 at 3:56 pm #155690Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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YEAHHHHHH
I need it too…and I believe I shall get a scene written soon…just gotta find out how I wanna write it
September 6, 2023 at 6:19 pm #155699@freedomwriter76 wow…..
You said the oldest was 28???!!!
Sheesh, these parents are treating them like children.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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